Reviewer: jess25 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
awesome
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Tookie83 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 11:11 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
o m g... that was great ... but so sad
Author's Response: I am so glad you feel I did this justice. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: taylach (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
"Well, I know you got some of what you wanted, but not everything. " - I personally think it was perfect.
Author's Response: I am so glad you feel I did it justice. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: maiseypattinson (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
Shirtless Daddyward is stunning! I can't imagine being Bella and waking up to that scene. Seeing her daughter for the first time then seeing Edward after all of that time all chesty and cuddling your baby - faaaaaaaaaaaaa!
Ok so it wasn't 'run into your arms' reunion time, but we didn't really expect that right? I choose to look at the positives
1) She didn't scream and tell him to get out
2) She unconciously grabbed his hand
3) He called her 'love' and she didn't think twice
4) She got to ogle his chest (and who could forget that image)
5) She said 'not yet' not 'not ever'
All in all I feel good about the progress!) Thx for the update
Author's Response: Someone reviewed saying that Shirtless Daddyward caused spontaneous ovulation! Lol! There are a lot of positives to hang on to! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
Their first interaction was very sweet and beautiful. I totally called it when I said that they wouldn't have the conversation yet. However, I have to give you credit for not bringing in the janitor (haha). Can't wait for the next chapter...
Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 10:48 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
Shirtless DaddyWard FTW!!!!! *THUD* *DEAD*
ok I teared up a bit, aw my boy cried!!!! :'(
and The locked eyes wit heach other!! And they held hands and he wiped away her tears and she thought he was beautiful and and and he kissed her forehead!!! Awwww BB! SweetDaddyWard!!! and his Little Love who just wanted to be held!
LOVED IT! LOVED IT!!!!
Author's Response: Shirtless Daddyward definitely is a sight to behold. He gets me all aflutter...
Thanks so much for all you support!
Reviewer: AMusefan77 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
I loved it! The scene with Edward holding Elizabeth for the first time was just beautiful. I feel so bad for all the hell he's been through and I'm ready for Bella to forgive him even if she isn't. Please update soon. Fabulous.
Author's Response: I am so glad you feel I did it justice! Thanks so much for reviewing.
Reviewer: memmem95 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
In combination playing Never Say Never with the chourus "Don't let me go" and this chapter I needed the tissues. Great job.
Author's Response: I am so glad I did it justice! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: 1ljreader (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
BEAUTIFUL!
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words and your review!
Reviewer: mauge (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
Please update faster, I'm dying in here!!! haha
Now, seriously, lovely chapter :D
Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Chalice Cullen (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
Is it just me or are these chapters getting shorter and shorter? I mean, I like regular updates, and I love the pacing and the storyline, but that was short!
Sweet how Edward needed to bring her daughter to her.
Sweet how Esme was there the moment Bella realizes she is a Mother now too.
Nice. Short. Sweet.
Author's Response: Actually, this was the second longest chapter of the lo! I am glad you enjoyed it and I thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: EmeraldRomance (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
I squealed when I saw that you'd posted chapter 41 at last!!! It was everything wished for...the tender looks, Elizabeth, gentle affection....*happy sigh*
Edward holding Elizabeth was possibly the sweetest thing I ever saw/read. I love how you've opened the door for them, but not fixed everything immediately.
I swear, I was right there with Bella when she opened her eyes and saw the two of them. Job well done! :)
Author's Response: Wow! I am so glad I did this chapter justice. Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: missrenee (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
oh that was so sweet.He was gentle and loving i cant wait to seee what happens
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: twi_mom_teddi (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
I read this on Sue's site the other day and I still can't say enough. It couldn't have been any more perfect. This fic has just grabbed onto my heart. Loved it. Absolutely beautiful!
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much for your kind words and for reviewing!
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
So compelling and just right. His utter joy at having Elizabeth in his arms. Her breaking and mending heart at seeing him. The holding hands. The copper hair. His quiet leaving. Ugh. Killing me! And loving it!
Author's Response: I am so glad I did it justice! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: shouldbegraceful (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that is so sweet.
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: evrythingmusic1 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
I hope Bella forgives Edward quickly becuase I can't handle her and Edward not being together, it's unbearable! :( Really good chapter I loved both POVs. :)
Author's Response: Hang in there! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: kenziemorton (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
i love it so much! can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: andi_girl24 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
Hopefully Bella will understand now that she needs to be the best mother that she can be. As Charlie said before, that involves having some type of relationship with Edward. Even if she decides not to be with him, she needs to open the lines of communication.
Author's Response: Give her time. She's a reasonable gal at heart. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
I love that Esme suggested Edward "kangaroo" with Elizabeth! I love holding my preemie like that & so does my dh!
I'm glad Edward told Bella he loved her even if it wasn't w/ those exact words!
Author's Response: We held my son like that as well! Such a lovely picture. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: tj33 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 09:07 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
GAH!!!! I bawled like a baby at my son's karate studio, sitting in the corner hiding while I read this update. I LOVE it when Esme gave Little Love to Edward and said 'Sometimes babies just need love.' Then when they both cried as he held Elizabeth, I bawled some more. Bella's reaction to seeing Edward holding their baby really was priceless, she so wants him back yet she is afraid to let him in.
When Edward gave Elizabeth to Bella, kisses the babies head and told Bella he would be there for her when she was ready, that really shows how much he loves her and that he will be patient and wait as long as it takes. I have to say though, the part that really broke me completely was when Esme sat next to Bella and held her, with Bella saying she was being the mother Bella only hoped to be. Can't wait for the real conversation between Edward and Bella.
Author's Response: I am so very glad that you felt I did this chapter justice. So much happened even though so little was said. I truly appreciate all of your support and reviews!
Reviewer: Poisonvamp (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
Great chapter. I swear all you want is for all of us to cry nonstop. It was truly comforting to see Edward holding the baby. I don't know how anybody could not have their heart strings tugged by that picture. I'm glad bella finally get to see and hold Izzy. This really is an amazing story. Thank you.
Author's Response: I am so glad you feel I did it justice! Shirtless Daddyward is a sight to behold! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: twimom143 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
I have been hooked on this from the beginning and I cannot even begin to tell you how I have enjoyed, cried and laughed with each chapter. Thank you for updating and please post the next chapter quickly!!!
Author's Response: I am so glad you have stuck with me through this. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: littlevamplady (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
ok here i am sitting on front of my laptop trying to keep the tears from escaping my eyes...this is amazing you did a great job even tho nothing was truly said the actions were enough to comunicate what wasnt said.
cant wait for next chapter hoping they will finally get to have there heart to heart talk and put it all out in the open
littlevamplady,
seattle,wa
Author's Response: I am so glad you think I did this justice. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: stupidsuckedinreader (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
Note to self do not read this chapter while multitasking. I was listening to this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Bz3YOXmdL08&feature=channel in the background and had to shut it off. I puffy heart this story and you and your writing :) BTW love Chubward too.
Author's Response: Aw! Shirtless Daddyward vs Chubward is a hard call! Thanks so much for reviewing!
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