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Reviewer: dontfollow (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless

*sniff, sniff*  there I go, tearing up again, but in the way that you cry at something so beautiful it hurts a little bit.  I love it when, after all the horrible things have happened and we realize all the mistakes we've made, there's still hope left.  I love Angela's POV.... she gets to see the good stuff. :D



Author's Response:

There is always hope.  Angela is very good at finding it...

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 34 - Deals

I like the relationship between Edward and Jasper- they kind of balance each other out and for all of the sh*t they give each other, I can tell that they really care.



Author's Response:

They really do balance each other out.  Edward stabilizes Jasper - brings him back from the edge.  Jasper lightens Edward and keeps him from going to far into the abyss.  They are true brothers and friends though.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: dontfollow (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

how sad is it when Emmett is the voice of reason?  I love it though, cause he is a commonly abused character.  I am so happy that you have written him exactly as I want him written... Loved the chapter... can't wait for more... oh yeah, there's a next button.... :D



Author's Response:

I find Em to be very intuitive and very smart, just jovial by nature.  I'm glad you like the way I write him.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: kismit1496 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith

god I wish he'd cause an ovulation here - my hormones are completely out of whack !!! augh!!!!

 

Who doesn't want a mom like Esme?  Hell even at my age I want her to crawl into my bed and rock me and brush my hair!



Author's Response:

LOL!  I'll have him work harder on that.

Esme is the mom we all want to be/have, I think!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: dontfollow (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell

DAMN!  Thank you Esme for verbally slapping Edward upside the head!  That was good. Great, awesome, wonderful, all the adjectives I can't think of at the moment that describe the goodness that is this story... 



Author's Response:

Wow.  I love your enthusiasm.  Esme definitely plays a huge role.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: dontfollow (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile

oh, how I love Emmett and his protective ways... Great chapter, thought it was well played out... even the cliffie at the end. (I'm only saying this because I can go on and read the next chapter, otherwise I would be screaming in agony over what happens next!)  THANKS FOR WRITING! 



Author's Response:

Thank goodness for the "Next" button, right?  LOL

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 32 - Classics

I like the name very much.  Nice choice.



Author's Response:

I am glad you approve of the name!

Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: dontfollow (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary

Thank you for the author's note at the beginning.  I'm so sorry for your loss.  I appreciate your intentions towards the situation.

I loved that Alice had to 'channel my inner Emmett'.

I like the fact that Edward seems to know there's something wrong with Bella, that even though things have gone horribly wrong between the two of them, they still have  a connection to each other.  Hopefully that saves them. 

MUCH LOVE!



Author's Response:

They are definitely so connected....

Thank you for your kind words to me.  They are much appreciated.

Reviewer: Cullenlingus (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith

Loved that Ang didn't sugar coat what she saw with Bella.



Author's Response:

Neither sugar coating nor being cruel would have helped him.  She truly did her best...

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

Naming a child is a huge responsibility.  I can see why Edward wants to wait.  I hope that he doesn't make himself too crazy...



Author's Response:

LOL.  This is Edward - of course he's going to make himself crazy!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls

Though a bit heart-wrenhing to read, I loved that Charlie heard Edward's words and recognized the truth in them.



Author's Response:

In this case, eavesdropping did more good than any conversation they could have.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Dydear (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith

*sniff*  Aww.  So so sweet.  I HEART Esme.  Thank you for this lovely update!



Author's Response:

Esme is the mom I want to be!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: dontfollow (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

serious wrinkle!  the light has dimed a bit, but I'm keeping my trust in you that this is going to be okay... :D



Author's Response:

Keep the faith!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: dontfollow (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Strong Enough

So, my vote is that they lock them in a room together until they get all their issues sorted out...



Author's Response:

LOL!  Not sure if that would work!  But it might be interesting...

Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: dontfollow (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather

Alice can fix anything, she's like duct tape... :D  I wonder if duct tape would work on a broken heart?



Author's Response:

Wouldn't it be nice if it did?

Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: dontfollow (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Nightmare of a Love Story

OMG!!!!  I'm balling here... This is an amazing story...  I wonder how much more I'm going to cry by the time I'm done reading this?  Big props to Angela, she's awesome...



Author's Response:

Angela is so wonderful.  There's definitely more tears ahead, alas.

Thank you for your reviews.

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

Sometimes is really good to have someone who doesn't/can't react to emotion and terror.  People tend to be much more effective if they aren't wrapped up in fear and grief.



Author's Response:

Or if they can turn off the knee jerk reaction and function.

Thank you so much for reviewing.

Reviewer: Elizabethan (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith

This chapter was indeed about faith, and it looks like Esme and Angela have plenty of it.  Really emotional stuff. Esme really loves Bella and she is really trying to make things up to her.

With all the angst we've had, will there be if not a happy ending, then some sort of positive resolution before the epilogue?  As of Chapter 33, you said you had nine more chapters written, and we are here at 42, so I was just wondering how much further this will go before the epilogue begins.  Yes, Edward has to earn her trust again, but I hope they would at least start down that road by the end of the story.

 



Author's Response:

The main story looks like it will be about 50 total before the epilogue and yes, there will be a huge step in that direction before that time.  Promise:)

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith

I am so glad you are not rushing this. These steps are necessary to make this make sense, and it will be so much better when (I hope) things work out between them. I am enjoying every agonizing second of it!



Author's Response:

I am so grateful to you for understanding why I am moving in the direction I am moving.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: dontfollow (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action

AWWW.... warm fuzzies have multiplied in my heart, I think I'm going to cry I'm so happy... What a wonderful roller coaster!  THANKS!



Author's Response:

So many thanks for reading and reviewing this story!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No

As long as there is HEA, I will survive anything...



Author's Response:

Just hang in there!

Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands

Although I know that Bella needs Edward, I can't help but understand how Charlie must feel.  It's tearing his heart out to see his daughter in the physical condition she's in...



Author's Response:

Charlie handled it really well, all things considered...

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: dontfollow (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 04:35 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking

CONTACT!!!!!!   I am seriously jumping around in my room right now in excitement!  This is awesome... I think I see a light... Very faint, but still a light.... :D  THANK YOU FOR WRITING!



Author's Response:

You are cracking me up!  I'm so glad you're enjoying this!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: kenziemorton (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith

i can't wait till the next chapter. love it.



Author's Response:

I'll be submitting to the queue tonight!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: dontfollow (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This

Can he please grow a brain and realize that she's just as miserable without him as he is?  Please?  With sugar on top?  LOVE THIS STORY!  Will be much happier though when Edward's not being such an idiot (but then again what kind of a story would it be if he wasn't like that... Not very interesting that's for sure!)  KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!



Author's Response:

Don't you want to kick him, knowing what you know?  LOL!

Thank you so much for reviewing!

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