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Reviewer: dontfollow (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

Damn, waking up is a nightmare for her...



Author's Response:

She definitely is having a tough time.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: dontfollow (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 32 - Classics

So that answered my question... I like the name...  Loveliness...

Reviewer: nelln (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith

Shirtless daddy holding sleeping baby

 

Awww...shirtlessdaddyward was so hawt!  I'm glad that BxE are finally realizing their misconceptions about each other.  E needs to absorb to what extent he hurt B.  I mean yeah I know he knows, but to see her reaction and to hear Angie's description of how she found B....

And then B finding out that E really didn't mean what he said and that although it was a shitty way to show he was doing what he thought was for her own good, he really did suffer just as much as she did.  I just wanna lock them in that hospital room with Lizzy Grace and make them communicate and make up already!!  :'(

Thank you so much for sharing your fic with us and for this update!  I can't wait to read the next installment!!



Author's Response:

I will put the next chapter in queue tonight!

What a darling picture!  Thank you for sharing it!

I appreciate your review!

Reviewer: dontfollow (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

didn't Bella tell Angela what she wanted to name the baby?  Poor Edward, having to figure out what to name the munchkin.... As always, you made me cry...



Author's Response:

Angela asked, but Bella didn't tell her....

Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: dontfollow (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls

K... I'm going to go cry in my pillow now... that was amazing...



Author's Response:

Poor Daddyward!

Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: dontfollow (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings

I think one of the greatest things about this fic, is that you are able to write in character so well.  When it's in Jasper's POV, it's very different from Carlisle's POV.  You know it's in their characters and it really works.  Love it so far.



Author's Response:

That is one of the biggest compliments I could ask for.  That is really what I wanted to be able to do in this fic - make the voices almost identifiable without the "CPOV" at the top...

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: dontfollow (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

You know you make it hard to not love Rosalie right? 



Author's Response:

I like this Rosalie!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: dontfollow (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No

Thank you for making me laugh at 'I’d watched way too much Star Trek with Ben.' before making me ball my eyes out...



Author's Response:

I try to stick a little humour in once in a while:)

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: dontfollow (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands

serious heartfail.  I think I just fell in love with Charlie... but not in that romantic kind of way...  He's just what I would want my dad to be like if I were in that situation... That kind of love. 



Author's Response:

Charlie did really well, all things considered!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: jennspooningrob (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith

Oh, BTW my new username is jennspooningrob.  Like it?

jenn/T w i m o m m y



Author's Response:

I love it!  Well done:)

Reviewer: dontfollow (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On

I liked the part where Alice was saying stuff, but then thinking of what she really wanted to say in her head.  I think it was a great way to show how strong she was on the outside despite the fear on the inside.  Great chapter... Do you own stock in Kleenex or something?  Cause, yeah, if I didn't have a handy dandy pillow to soak up the tears, I'd be through a box of tissues by now...



Author's Response:

LOL!  You found me out.  I am a majority stockholder in Kleenex!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: dontfollow (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind

Aw... Emmett's so... Emmett... so yeah, dead on, in the characterization, in my opinion.  I like the fact that he's pissed as hell at Edward, but still wants the best for him in the long run.  GREAT CHAPTER!



Author's Response:

Em calls them like he sees them, but he has a huge heart when all is said and done...

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: dontfollow (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition

Aw... Edward realizes what an idiot he's been, some one give him a cookie...  That was great!



Author's Response:

At this point, he needs a medal!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: dontfollow (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Sound of Music

Damn! I LOVE ME SOME JASPER!



Author's Response:

I love Potty!Mouth!Jasper.  He so rocks...

Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: mldewolf (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith

Wow!!  Great chapter!  Love that Esme!  She just awesome, all the way around.  Hope Bella will listen to what Esme said, if not now then eventually.



Author's Response:

I love Esme - she is the mom I can only hope to be...

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No

I'm glad that you believe in HEA, 'cause this chapter is causing me to give pause, a bit...



Author's Response:

That was a rough chapter.  Just remember, it's not a narrative.  It's an emotional perspective only...

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith

I love that Esme can be there for Bella.  Being a new mom is exhausting, mentally, physically and spiritually.  You gotta have someone to talk to- Bella especially needs someone to love her and be that for her.



Author's Response:

She really does need Esme.  Of all of them, she's the only one who can truly relate.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together

It can't be too easy, or it won't feel true.  The realization that Bella can't handle all of the situation is only to be expected.



Author's Response:

I am glad you understand why I am traveling this particular path.

Thank you so much for reviewing.

 

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears

Kind of nervous to see what happens with Edward...



Author's Response:

Hang in there.  It's bumpy...

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: jennspooningrob (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith

It is a lot for both of them to absorb and cope with!  I really hope Bella listens to Esme's advice and gives Edward the chance to earn her trust!



Author's Response:

They both got an earful, didn't they...

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 37 - Don't Give Up

I always marvel at Carlisle's strength.  He seems to have a never ending supply of patience and love.  As a parent, it's stunning- what I wouldn't give for that sort of fortitude...



Author's Response:

I completely agree!  If only I had his strength and patience...

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Throw the Truth

Thank God for Angela.  Her steady, calm friendship has been such a blessing to Bella.  I really don't know if/how she would have made it without her steady friendship.



Author's Response:

I don't know that Bella would have made it without her.  Especially when her condition deteriorated...

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: dontfollow (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome

Dude, seriously, if you kill her off and it's a bittersweet ending with Edward always loving his baby girl who he names after her or some crap like that, I think I'll hunt you down and smack you up side the head... Just so that we're clear, a happy ending includes both Edward and Bella in it... Cause you're seriously scaring me with Bella's condition.  I think it was worse that it was in Carlisle's POV cause he knows best just how serious her situation is. (and by worse, I mean it was the best way to convey what was going on.)



Author's Response:

LMAO!  No hunting needed.  It's going to be okay.  Promise.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: b00ks4u (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith

What a wonderful chapter. I love how you are drawing out the talk between Bella and Edward. Bring on the angst. At the same time i wish the chapters were longer. (Talk out of both sides of my mouth much!) can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

LOL!  Well, the chapters will remain the same, but I can help you with the angst!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: dontfollow (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless

*sniff, sniff*  there I go, tearing up again, but in the way that you cry at something so beautiful it hurts a little bit.  I love it when, after all the horrible things have happened and we realize all the mistakes we've made, there's still hope left.  I love Angela's POV.... she gets to see the good stuff. :D



Author's Response:

There is always hope.  Angela is very good at finding it...

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