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Reviewer: VampireInTraining (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway

Okay i'm getting very sick and tired of the cliffhangers that make me want to pelt my computer with rocks -_-



Author's Response:

Alas, this was a very solid ending - not dangling over the cliff.  But, I know what you mean and, alas, any time a story is released in parts, it feels that way.  There will be more soon tho.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking

FUCKING RIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  ****GIGGLES AND BOUNCES LIKE CRAZY.......MORE SO THAN MY 3 MONTH OLD IN HIS BOUNCY SEAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!****



Author's Response:

Hahaha!  Emmett will do that to you!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This

i don't think there was a single thing wrong with the chapter!  Sex is a natural thing....especially when one is pregnant!!!!  AHHHHHHH  the memories!!!!!!!..........



Author's Response:

LOL!  Seems like we all have those!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: marrisa (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway

Can we really be surprised that the story went this way for now? I like the reasoning you gave Bella to want to see Edward.



Author's Response:

You would be surprised at how many people were shocked!

Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage

I just love emmett!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Emmett is the bee's knees.

Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living

i am totally in tears now.........i have a three month old...remembering my pregnancy........i can't imagine what it would be like for bella............who cares about HIM...fuck him............i'm so mad at him........but i love him...:)



Author's Response:

This is a very painful time in the story.  I have a child too and it must have been near impossble to survive it.

Thanks for reviewing!.

Reviewer: Louisa Williams (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway

I think you did a beautiful job. This is the only way that makes sense for right now. A lot of damage has been done and it isn't magically going to repair over night. However, the hurt does eventually go away, and they should find their way back to each other. I have complete faith in your writing and I know you will do what is best for the story. This chapter just about broke my heart.



Author's Response:

 

Thank you for understanding why I went this way with the story.  I will make it right.  I promise.

 

I appreciate your review!

Reviewer: HSE (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

THIS CANT BE WHY OH WHY!!

HOW FAR AWAY IS THIS HAPPY ENDING?

seriously im going to end up dieing of heart failure if u keep ending chapters like this!

update soon or else u will be needing tht steel reinforced door :P



Author's Response:

Hang in there!  I’m not done with these two yet!  Not much longer now.

 

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: kuntrygal (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway

*sniffs*  I'm chanting over & over in my head that I trust you...........



Author's Response:

I do believe in happy endings!  Hang in there!

 

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Tuesday Jane (Anonymous) · Date: November 01, 2009 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway

Yep, that was seriously depressing. But I'm going to hold out for something better. It's good the hiding behind the door. :) You'll be safer there. :)



Author's Response:

Hang in there!  I’m not done with these two yet!

 

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: lisamichelle17 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway

This chapter was all I thought it would be. Edward shattered Bella's world when he left her. Edward loves both of them so much but he has a long ways to go in gaining Bella's trust back. I am happy Bella is also thinking of Elizabeth because she needs her daddy too. I understand why Bella had to tell Edward that she couldn't be with him anymore. Like you I believe in happy endings but in order for that to happen Edward has to show that he will be there for her and Elizabeth. Edward has a chance to redeem himself in Bella's eyes. It was his choice to leave and his family went along with it. I also believe that Bella will trust Edward again. I think that trust can be earned in a lot of ways. I can't wait to see how Shirtless Daddyward shows Bella how much she can trust him again. I like the idea of baby steps :-) Can't wait for more :-)



Author's Response:

Thank you for understanding why I went this way with the story.  It just felt like it needed to go that way right now.

 

I appreciate your review!

Reviewer: nicoleihca (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 05:32 AM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway

well that was a cheerful start to my sunday morning. lol no, though, it was well done, and the main thing is that it was realistic. your whole story would lose something if she said 'oh everything will be perfect' and all that. so, yeah. x



Author's Response:

Thank you for understanding why I went this way with the story, even if it is a bit un-cheery!

 

I appreciate your review!

Reviewer: sparkle_me (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 05:32 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End

Ahh, you really feel for Bella with this chapter.

First love is always the truest because it was the first experience.

She has to be secure in herself in order to validate Edward's feelings.



Author's Response:

And Bella is not secure in herself.  At all.

Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: sparkle_me (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 05:28 AM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway

Oh No!!! My just dropped when she said that!! OMG Edward you poor thing!!



Author's Response:

Hang in there!  I’m not done with these two yet!  But Edward is going to be hurting...

 

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: asoulenchanted (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway

That was heartbreaking!

i totally agree with her decision but i believe she just needs time and to be able to trust him again and he needs to work for her trust!

I have followed this story since the first chapter and this is the truth, this is the only fan fiction story that has ever made me cry!

I think that just shows how amazing your writing is and i cannot wait for the next update!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for understanding why I went this way with the story.  I am so grateful for your readership and your amazing compliments.

 

I appreciate your review!

Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway

Remember not the end of the story, not the end of the story.......crying here!  Wont she give him a chance please!  That was awesome, pure torture though, very well written, Bella needs to change her mind!!!!  Going a little crazy with worry!  Love your story (Love both of them)  Now I have to go and reread!!   ~Melissa



Author's Response:

Hang in there!  I’m not done with these two yet!  It'll be okay...

 

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: venomousgal (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 05:07 AM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway

Awww! Poor Daddyward!  My heart is breaking for both of them.



Author's Response:

*hugs you*.  We'll comfort Daddyward (and keep him shirtless)

 

Thank you for reading and reviewing and for being the other half of my brain!

Reviewer: luvnrob (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway

She cant end things with him!!! It has to work!!! Crying now....



Author's Response:

Hang in there!  I’m not done with these two yet!

 

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: 8vamp8 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway

all I can say.......

:O



Author's Response:

I do believe in happy endings!  Hang in there!

 

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: lizzierichards (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 04:34 AM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway

OMG! Poor Edward. However, I truly understand Bella. It's not easy to forgive and forget considering what she has been through. She's going to need time to trust him again. She has a right to be wary. It's probably be awhile but I know they'll find their way back together. Dont' take too long though, ok? Seriously, Elizabeth needs both her parents together.

Great chapter. Very emotional.
Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you for understanding why I went this way with the story. Don't worry, I'm not done with these two yet... I appreciate your review!

Reviewer: chasityc (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 04:15 AM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway

..... damn u.. lol i'm glad they are finally talking but i'd rather it have been "i've never stopped loving u Bella, I've never stopped loving u either Edward... Kiss Kiss, hug hug..happy happy".. lol but i understand and can't wait to read when the happy comes, i'm sure it will be all worth it in the end... thanx for writing

chasity



Author's Response:

Hang in there!  I’m not done with these two yet! Although that would have been nice, it wouldn't have been very realistic, alas.

 

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: tinywit3 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway

what!!!!!! i cant believe you left me hanging....lol =)

 



Author's Response:

Hang in there!  I’m not done with these two yet!

 

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: MEL24FAN (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 03:48 AM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway

so sad.  I understand Bella's decision in not wanting to be hurt again.  I hope Edward doesn't just give up.



Author's Response:

Thank you for understanding why I went this way with the story.  It is just where I felt Bella was at this point...

 

I appreciate your review and all of your support!

Reviewer: nessiebells (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 03:20 AM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway

Uh, you will be the death of me.

There will be a happy ending, there will be a happy ending.I', so sad right now.



Author's Response:

I do believe in happy endings!  Hang in there!

 

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Jamieson (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 03:00 AM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway

Such an intense chapter.  Sure I'm in pure heartfail mode because of what Bella has decided, but honestly I think I would have been disappointed if she just forgave him that easily, you know?  There is a boat-load of things they need to work through, both together and individually, before they could ever fathom being together again, at least if they want it to stick.  So while my heart is breaking for them, I know it was the best decision Bella could have made at that point in time, and I applaud you for making that realistic.  I won't lie though - despite the realism, I'm holding onto that comment in you A/N about believing in happy endings, lol!  Looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you for understanding why I went this way with the story.  I do still believe in happy endings.  Hang in there.

 

I appreciate your review!

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