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Reviewer: kbacon (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail

Thank goodness she contacted Charlie.

 

Trina



Author's Response:

I know, right?  Poor Charlie!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: kbacon (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living

I was so happy that Angela came in at this point to help her. 

 

Trina



Author's Response:

Angela lives up to the "angel" in her name in this story....

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: kbacon (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight

That was great.  You really keep the emotion riding high.  Wonder what happens next.  What will Edward do to fight for Bella.

 

Trina (HookaShewz)

 



Author's Response:

*hugs*

What will he do?  Hmmmm.....

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: BriannaM (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight

I love potty mouth trash talking jasper!! lol. AWESOME EPIC UPDATE BB. I NEED MORE PLEASEEEEEEE.



Author's Response:

Jasper knows how to get his point across like nobody’s business!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Juliamine (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight

You can do it Edward! Fight for her! I can't write too much more... this is taking a toll on me emotionally right now cause I'm a wimp.  <3 u



Author's Response:

Fight!  Fight!  Fight!  Go Daddyward!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Browns (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight

I love Jasper...I hate that you had to make me CRY first.  But I'm better now.  I love potty mouth people. 

Hey, I'm trying to quit cursing, do you konw of any support groups?



Author's Response:

There were definitely tears at the beginning, but I hope Em’s tackle and Jasper’s rant took the sting out a bit!

As for quitting cursing, alas, no.  Trust me.  You can tell I can have a mouth on me by how I write Jasper!

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight

I'm glad Jasper is stepping up. Before he seemed to be there to add more drama that wasn't related to Bella and Edward. Now he has some great  advice. Hopefully edward will listen. That tackle sounded awesome.



Author's Response:

Jasper knows how to get his point across like nobody’s business!  He is exactly what Edward needed at this time.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight

Love your Jasper. He just is to cool.



Author's Response:

Jasper knows how to get his point across like nobody’s business!  I think he has his own fan club....

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Twilightrocks1984 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight

wow I love bad mouth jasper. Great chapter I can not wait to see edward fight.



Author's Response:

Jasper knows how to get his point across like nobody’s business!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: swilson500 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls

Wow! So sweet. I can't stop crying. Well done!

Author's Response:

Isn't Daddyward swoon worthy?

Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: koolchick262003 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight

I live for the next chapter....love the story...love potty mouth Jasper, and Daddyward....keep it up. :)



Author's Response:

Jasper knows how to get his point across like nobody’s business!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: luvnrob (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight

Oh... i love it !!! They have to make it work!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hang in there!  I am definitely not done with them yet!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight

I love that Edward realizes that Jasper has a clear picture and he doesn't.  That's a good sign.  Wow.  Crazy stuff in that there chapter!



Author's Response:

I think his reaction was understandable.  The functional equivalent of Bella’s collapse in the woods.  But his family helped him pull it together and now he’s ready for the fight.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Sadielady115 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight

I loved the chapter you gotta listen to potty mouth Jasper

 

~giggles~ I think it's going to be more chapters then you outlined

 

Love you honey



Author's Response:

Nope.  I wrote 48 last night.  Only two more to write before the epi!  Just call me efficient!  LOL!

Love you too, sweet!  You know where I am if you need me....

Reviewer: magandaangel (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight

Ahhh.. good ol Jasper to put things into perspective for him! :D

Author's Response:

Jasper knows how to get his point across like nobody’s business!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: foxishot (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight

Edward is such a moronic girl. Kind of funny, actually.



Author's Response:

I think his reaction was understandable.  The functional equivalent of Bella’s collapse in the woods.  But his family helped him pull it together and now he’s ready for the fight.

 

But yeah, he can be kind of a girl....

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Beans827 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight

Oh yes, you gotta love Jasper!  What a crazy bag of shit he is but he's so right!  I'm glad someone had the balls to tell Edward that!  Can't wait to find out where this goes!  Great chapter as usual!  Thanks for posting.



Author's Response:

Jasper knows how to get his point across like nobody’s business!  Let's see indeed!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: ImprintedForever (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight

I love Jasper in this story he is amazing... :)



Author's Response:

Jasper seems to have his own fan club!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: bommarkm (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight

Love Jasper!!!  He told Edward!  Now let's see what Edward's going to do.



Author's Response:

Jasper knows how to get his point across like nobody’s business!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: darcy (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight

I don't think I've ever loved any incarnation of the Jasper character more than I love your Jasper in this character.

The Animal Planet analogy--golden! Can't believe Edward couldn't relate. Of course, his knee's dislocated. But it's also a great characterization of the esoteric Edward.

Author's Response:

Jasper knows how to get his point across like nobody’s business!  Especially with the aid of Animal Planet.  I can't see this Edward watching much TV...

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: mebonvicino (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight

i fucking love jasper... yet again another wonderful chapter!



Author's Response:

Jasper knows how to get his point across like nobody’s business!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: dinx (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight

Another great chapter. However, we really need to see more Daddyward and more Edward and Bella together. I can't wait to read the next update!



Author's Response:

They'll be the focus of *most* of the rest of the chapters, with a few small exceptions.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: MsLessa (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight

I agree with Potty Mouth Jasper, pussyboy Edward needs to find himself a set of big boy balls instead of the infant ones he's currently sporting and prepare himself to man up.  It's good to know that he has a freaking inkling of what Bella's been through but he's still got a ways to go.  He needs to make sure he's there at every turn for her but not smother her.  He needs to try and be her friend and shoulder first.  Camp out in her her room to help with the baby. Don't fucking go anywhere should be his main priority.



Author's Response:

I think his reaction was understandable.  The functional equivalent of Bella’s collapse in the woods.  But his family helped him pull it together and now he’s ready for the fight.

 

Thank goodness for Jasper and his Animal Planet wisdom!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: tinywit3 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight

cant wait for the next chapter..=)



Author's Response:

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Anson Longbottom (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight

Jasper!!!! You awesome freakazoid! Jasper, you have the best pottymouth on the planet! Great chapter! Great peptalk!



Author's Response:

Jasper knows how to get his point across like nobody’s business!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

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