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Reviewer: luckymac (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

That's right Bella, you and Edward keep on calling her Elizabeth, it's YOUR baby, not anyone else's!! Yet another sign your meant to be. No offense to the Lizzies out there, but Lizzie is just too close to Lizard. I knew a poor girl who was called Lizzie the Lizard straight into high school, so I cringe whenever I hear it. Do people not understand the bullying potential and wish to spare their child that? Kids are cruel without your help! For once Charlie's right, dude,  go live with the Cullens and be waited on hand and foot in the lap of luxury, with a doctor sleeping down the hall or stay with Charlie with Alice sleeping on the couch... hmm decisions, decisions. Damn girl, who cares how badly he hurt you, kick him out to the guest house temporarily and enjoy some pampering courtesy of Esme and company. Let him woo you back with some nice piano playing and flowers every day. I'll take care of Daddyward while you write the next chapter towards his happy ending.



Author's Response:

LOL!  Yes, neither she nor Edward is fond of Lizzie and they won't bend!  Alas, Alice and Charlie have their own minds!

I am sure Daddyward could use some cuddles....

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

Oh, Pomme, I love Charlie.  I love how he spoke to Bella.  On the father/daughter level he let her know she was still his little girl and he would be there to help her and take care of her.  On the parent/parent level he let her know he was still his little girl and he would be there to help her and take care of her.  I guess the point I am trying to make here is that he laid her options out for her in a manner that she could accept and let her know that the choice is ultimately hers to make and he will support what ever decision she makes.  

I did like that fact that she does not want to banish Edward from his home or family by placing him in the cottage.  I would hope that means she realizes that he too needs the support of those that love him.

One thing for certain, I could not help but see her smile at the prospect of taking Elizabeth home.  This bit of optimism has me feeling hopeful that she and Edward will become the family that Elizabeth needs.

Sandra

 



Author's Response:

Charlie is such an amazing guy and definitely laid it out in a non-biased way to Bella.  Now it is up to her.

And there is definitely hope!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: duchess_amy (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

You know, nobody ever gives Charlie any credit.  I mean, he's the strong silent type.  I always see him as a rock, someone Bella can depend on even if she doesn't fully realize it.  He's someone that doesn't always express his emotions, although, they are always simmering just under the surface.  I really like your portrayal of Charlie and I think you've nailed his personality.   Love the story and wish it would never have to end.  I would especially love to see some Daddyward in the next chapter!  I'll cross my fingers.



Author's Response:

Charlie is such an amazing guy and I try to write him that way in any fic I write. 

We'll see if Daddyward can make an appearance soon:)

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

I'm really glad that Charlie talked to her and gave all the options.  Plus she got upset when they suggested Edward move out of the house!  Good, that's a good sign.  Charlie was really good about it, as much as he wasn't 'pushing' her towards any one direction, he did give the pros & cons of the options she did have.

I honestly look forward to seeing what her decision is.



Author's Response:

We shall see what she does with Charlie’s pearls of wisdom…

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: EmeraldRomance (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

"Okay, remember Immaculate Conception.  No one had seen her private parts."

That line reeks of awesomeness!!!!!! LOL

I also ADORED the final line.  That is fantastic advice! Ranks up there with what he said in the movie; "Sometimes you've got to learn to love what's good for you."

Yeah Charlie!!!  I think he may have planted the necessary seed for Bella's heart to blossom once more for Edward.



Author's Response:

I wish I could take credit for that gem, but my lovely venomousgal shared that with me.  She’d heard it long ago and it stuck with her.  I just thought it fit perfectly here.  Let's just hope Bella can move from here...

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

Gotta love Charlie!



Author's Response:

Isn't he the bee's knees?

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

Way to go Charlie!  Give him the Dad of the year award!



Author's Response:

Charlie is such an amazing guy!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: PerennialAddict (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End

Just started reading, the first chapter pulled me right in. :D

Author's Response:

I am so glad you gave my story a try!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: dinx (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

I love Charlie in this chapter and I am glad that Bella was actually sticking up for Edward and not wanting him to get kicked out of his house. I really want to see what she decides and see some more interaction with Bella, Edward, and Lizzie.



Author's Response:

Charlie did a great job in a tough spot.  Bella still loves Edward despite being hurt.  She doesn't want to hurt him further.  She's just been protecting herself.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

Wow, Charlie had some pretty profound words for Bella.

Ok I vote that Bella go stay w/ the Cullens, it's for the best for everyone. Besides, Charlie would be mortified handling the girl stuff!



Author's Response:

Charlie can be a profound guy when he wants to!  We shall see what Bella does with the info...

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: janna479 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

loved charlie's last two quotes

would love to have EPOV with a little father-daughter snuggle time



Author's Response:

I wish I could take credit for that gem, but my lovely venomousgal shared that with me.  She’d heard it long ago and it stuck with her.  I just thought it fit perfectly here.

We will definitely get more Daddyward shortly.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Kaydence (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

So glad you referred to Charlie as a DILF. I always think Carlisle gets too much of the credit--I'd take Charlie with or without a porn stache over him any day! :)

Author's Response:

LOL on the stache!  I am a lover of Dr. Daddy, but I love Charlie too!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Patsy (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

Awe, Charlie really hit the spot!  He handled a very difficult conversation with master skills!  Props to you!



Author's Response:

Gotta love Charlie!  He did his best in a truly uncomfortable spot.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: twimom143 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

I love this!!! Great way to bring Charlie's perspective into the story. Please update soon!



Author's Response:

Charlie is such an amazing guy and had a lot of wisdom to give his daughter.  Let's just see what she does with it now...

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: memmem95 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

Love Charlie with all my heart. Poor Bella and the two bad options.



Author's Response:

Charlie is such an amazing guy!  No option will be easy.  There's no easy road from here.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Iwant2sparkle (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

Aw, I heart Charlie so hard.  He is the greatest.  Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Charlie is such an amazing guy!  He did good by his kiddo.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: jermak99 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

I hope Bella moves in with the Cullens!! I loved Charlie in this chapter! :)

Thanks for updating.

 

xo



Author's Response:

Charlie is such an amazing guy!  Let's hope Bella makes the right choices based on his guidance.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Laxmom (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

I need a Team Charlie shirt....sigh..

Loved the honesty...and he really gave her a lot to think about!  Loved it as always....and anxious for more.



Author's Response:

Charlie is such an amazing guy!  He told her the truth in a way she could understand and accept...

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

WOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW!!!!

That was---wow! Charlie??!??? Dang I think 'ol Char is my new hero!! His parting words to Bella..Kewl

Well I hope Bella DOES stay with the Cullens, & I hope she DOESN'T want Edward away at the cottage. He needs to be there to help get up  during the night with Elizabeth, feed her, bathe her etc.. no matter what he & Bella's issues are!

Like the parents were saying--time to move on & quit dwelling in the past!! What's done is done--time to move on



Author's Response:

Charlie is such an amazing guy!  He has more wisdom than anyone gives him credit for.  We shall see what Bella does with those pearls....

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

OMG! * Runs over, grabs Charlie and hugs the hell outta him...beers on my later old man* My dear that was FABULOUS...I never thought I could love more. What a great dad!!



Author's Response:

Charlie is such an amazing guy!  I'm sure he'll enjoy the frosty one later.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Tuesday Jane (Anonymous) · Date: November 23, 2009 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

Slowly but surely... thanks for writing.



Author's Response:

I should be dropping the next chapter in queue tonight!  Won't be slow much longer as we're almost to the end of the main part of the story...

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 

 

 

Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

Excellent job, bb! Bella has so much to think about and I hope that she takes Charlie's words seriously.

Can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response:

Charlie is such an amazing guy!  Let's just hope that she can make something of his words of wisdom...

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: JessicaB923 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

I love the last line.  So very true!!



Author's Response:

I wish I could take credit for that gem, but my lovely venomousgal shared that with me.  She’d heard it long ago and it stuck with her.  I just thought it fit perfectly here.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: vanessarae (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

Ah, Charlie with the wise words...now, Bella, man up and do the rigth thing!!  You know what is right, NOW DO IT!



Author's Response:

Charlie is such an amazing guy and one can hope that Bella will listen to what he had to say.  Guess we'll find out!

*hugs*

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: guady23 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

Loved Charlie's words...!!



Author's Response:

Charlie is such an amazing guy!  He's a lot wiser than he's given credit for...

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

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