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Reviewer: lowbatterysound (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

GREAT Charlie chapter! Love that quote at the end.



Author's Response:

I wish I could take credit for that gem, but my lovely venomousgal shared that with me.  She’d heard it long ago and it stuck with her.  I just thought it fit perfectly here.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

That's one smart Dad. Really well written and 100% in character. Well done!

Author's Response:

Charlie is such an amazing guy!  I'm really glad you think I got him right.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Jacque (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

Charlie is a wise, wise man



Author's Response:

Charlie is such an amazing guy!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

Another amazing chapter! 

Charlie is an awesome father.  I knew he would probably tell her that staying with the Cullens would be her best options, but also telling her that true loves takes work and is worth the risk is something she needed to hear.

Bella's pov is next?  I bet she'll need to talk to her girls to get their input.

 



Author's Response:

 I wish I could take credit for that last line, but my lovely venomousgal shared that with me.  She’d heard it long ago and it stuck with her.  I just thought it fit perfectly here.

Charlie definitely laid the options out there in an unbiased way Bella could not ignore...

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

love it.



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Reviewer: Lotte (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind

I just love Emmett's voice!

Author's Response:

Emmett is such a big bear, but he's incredibly intuitive as well.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: GracieGracie (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

Charlie is much much wiser here than in the movie. I like that.



Author's Response:

Charlie is such an amazing guy!  I find him pretty wise in the books, at least:)  In his way...

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: JenelleCullen (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

Rosalie's POV! Come on Rose! She's fiercely protective of her family. Everyone else has said their two cents it's her time. Come on Rose, be in your brother's corner....it's lonely over here



Author's Response:

Trust me, the corners are disappearing... Really no need anymore...

 

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Reviewer: dh_director (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

Yay!



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Reviewer: venomousgal (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

I love this chapter.  Charlie has some good advice for her.  I can't wait for more and for her decision.  Great work as always...fucking brilliant!



Author's Response:

Charlie is such a DILF (in both stories)!  And I've had to clarify in a million reviews that you spoon fed me that last line!  Too perfect!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: 1ljreader (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

Can I just say, how awesome is Charlie? I really hope  she takes the time to digest all that he's shared with her. And maybe, hopefully she'll move in with  the Cullens. I mean I can't emagine him helping her with bandages and showers and such.....I Love This Story. 



Author's Response:

Charlie is such an amazing guy!  He laid down the truth exactly how she needed to hear it...

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: seekingbecca (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

Oh my God!! *tears down my face*



Author's Response:

Aw!  But there is tons of hope here!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

Awwwwww Charlie!



Author's Response:

Charlie is such an amazing guy!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

I love me some Charlie!  You did good by him.



Author's Response:

Charlie is such an amazing guy!  I am glad you felt I did him justice.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: arguien (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

Whipcream covered daddyward!!! Oh, I like the sound of that..

So I would like to hear Rose's POV. I want to know what is running through her mind with all of this. If anyone is really going to knock some sense into Bella it's going to be her.



Author's Response:

Ah, the wonders of Whipped Cream Covered Daddyward....

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: 1twilightfan4ever (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

Good Ole' Charlie...I knew he would give her all the options and not make them for her.  Who would have know that all of the actions that he made as a young man with her mom would help him state his case to his own daughter later in life.  I really do hope that she stays with the Cullens and that she allows Edward to see Elizabeth.  Still not sure that is what she will do though....she could very easily say she wants to stay with Charlie. 

I do know that her deciding factor will be what is best for Elizabeth...atleast what is best for her in her mind.

I think that next up will be Edward/Carlisle.  I think that Carlisle will discuss with him his conversation about Bella and Elizabeth.



Author's Response:

Charlie is such an amazing guy!  He definitely laid the options out in an unbiased way that Bella couldn't help but understand...

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Kiwibeme (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

I LOVE CHARLIE!!!! I actually found myself clapping at the end!!! For a man of few words...he's so wise! LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this chapter!!! You need to update more often! This once a week business is making me insane! =)



Author's Response:

Charlie is such an amazing guy!  I generally submit the next chapter w/in 48 hours of the last one going live, but sometimes validation takes time. 

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: twilightbookaddict (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

I love this story so much but it always seems like just when the chapter is getting good, it just ends!!! And then I have to wait for a week or more. You're such a great writer and this story is fantabulous. I'm just so anxious to see what happens next. Thank you for writing

Author's Response:

Aw!  I submit the next chapter within 48 hrs of one going live, but sometimes validation takes time.  I'm sorry, but I am so glad you are enjoying the story!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: bommarkm (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

God, I love Charlie!  He just laid it all out there in the end.  Brilliant!



Author's Response:

Charlie is such an amazing guy!  Cuts straight to the chase!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: mom2kandg (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

Sweet Jesus, Ellie a whipped cream covered Daddyward now that is what I am talking about, hehehehe.....Really, truly loved this chappie....I really love Charlie, his advice I feel will go along way with Bella, well I am hoping it will anyway....I love the last line he told her love was about putting someone on a pedestal and them falling and being there to catch them, that was truly beautiful....



Author's Response:

I wish I could take credit for that gem, but my lovely venomousgal shared that with me.  She’d heard it long ago and it stuck with her.  I just thought it fit perfectly here.

And a whipped cream covered Daddyward is a thought I can think my teeth into!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

so good, I need some more edward time! :)



Author's Response:

You'll get a little Daddyward in the next chapter...  More soon after.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: april09 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

Charlie's the best, as are you, Ellie!

--Melanie



Author's Response:

Aw, you're too good to me!  Thanks, darlin!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: cullenfan8 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

Best advice Charlie ever gave. Love that last quote. Its true!



Author's Response:

I wish I could take credit for that gem, but my lovely venomousgal shared that with me.  She’d heard it long ago and it stuck with her.  I just thought it fit perfectly here.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen30 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

Charlie is as wise as Jasper, without the potty mouth...LOL



Author's Response:

Great analogy!  I love them both!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: luckymac (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

That's right Bella, you and Edward keep on calling her Elizabeth, it's YOUR baby, not anyone else's!! Yet another sign your meant to be. No offense to the Lizzies out there, but Lizzie is just too close to Lizard. I knew a poor girl who was called Lizzie the Lizard straight into high school, so I cringe whenever I hear it. Do people not understand the bullying potential and wish to spare their child that? Kids are cruel without your help! For once Charlie's right, dude,  go live with the Cullens and be waited on hand and foot in the lap of luxury, with a doctor sleeping down the hall or stay with Charlie with Alice sleeping on the couch... hmm decisions, decisions. Damn girl, who cares how badly he hurt you, kick him out to the guest house temporarily and enjoy some pampering courtesy of Esme and company. Let him woo you back with some nice piano playing and flowers every day. I'll take care of Daddyward while you write the next chapter towards his happy ending.



Author's Response:

LOL!  Yes, neither she nor Edward is fond of Lizzie and they won't bend!  Alas, Alice and Charlie have their own minds!

I am sure Daddyward could use some cuddles....

 

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