i loved charlie in this chapter! he was sweet and understanding to his daughter!...
amazing chapter as usual!
looking forward to the next one :D
xxx

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Charlie is such an amazing guy!  He gets Bella better than she thinks...

 

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charlie was beeing areal god dad there so understanding and to the point he did well for a guy with so few words .

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Charlie is such an amazing guy!  Maybe a man of few words, but he makes them count!

 

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awww!!! Charlie's so awesome!!!!! bestest daddy...with clothes on at least ;)

and omg yay!!! for once i'm not upset when there was an update!!!! just stressed from all the goddamn homework...grrish...but this is so goddamn amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D:D:D

loooovvvinnnnn ittttttt

(and wow...i didn't go on for ages... my friends would be proud xD)

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Charlie is such an amazing guy!  I am so glad that I left you before the holidays without being upset!

 

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Makes me love Charlie even more. That he's willing to let her go and stay with them, even if he isn't totally sure about Edward and even though Bella and Edward aren't on the best of terms, but all because it is what's best for Lizzie.

I wonder what Bella's going to decide. Loving it! <3

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We shall see what she does with Charlie’s pearls of wisdom…

 

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Way to go Charlie!!! Can't wait for more!

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Charlie is such an amazing guy!

 

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Charlie really was sweet opening up to her.  He didn't pull any punches, though.

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Charlie is such an amazing guy!  He definitely presented her options in an unbiased way and left the ball in her court.

 

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Awwwww, I love Charlie.  Hopefully Bella understands what he is trying to say. Cant wait for more!

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Charlie is such an amazing guy!  Hopefully, Bella will make good choices.

 

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Can't wait to see what she decides. I'm also hoping to hear from Jasper again soon. I like his spin on things. In my mind I hope for a chapter from Jasper's pov after she's left the hospital and at the Cullens house. I can almost see it. You're great and now I'm off to read the update for Becomes the Swan.

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Aw, thanks, dear!  So glad you're enjoying both stories....

 

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I sincerely hope she chooses to stay with Carlisle but doesn't kick Edward out. Keep hope alive right?

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Keep Hope Alive!  Maybe a Thanksgiving miracle....

 

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I love that last quote!  It's so cute.  sigh

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I wish I could take credit for that gem, but my lovely venomousgal shared that with me.  She’d heard it long ago and it stuck with her.  I just thought it fit perfectly here.

 

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Awww! I loved this chapter!!

I've said it before and I'll say it again - I love how you made Charlie's character in this story!

It really got me with where he's thinking about looking, not in his daughter's face, but in an adult's and what he saw there. :( :)

Keep up this FANTASTIC writing!!

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Charlie is such an amazing guy!  He's definitely struggling with the fact that Bella is an adult now, but he's treating her with the respect she deserves.

 

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I do love Charlie! He's so... Charlie xD. Bella...eh. I know that it's very difficult for her and all that stuff, but - come on! - sometimes she's  such a drama queen! Life isn't easy or simple and there's nothing we can do about it. However we shouldn't complain all the time - it isn't worth it. I hope, she'll see it, too. And like I said in my former comment - I hope everything will work out and Edward will get his own second chance.

Once again, have a good time and update soon, please!

Lui :)

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I must admit this is a valid and well done chapter.  This chapter could have taken the place of about five of the previous ones.  There is more substance here then listening to everyones irrelevant point of view.  We have become so engrossed in those pov's that I feel like I don't know Bella (or even like) or Edward anymore and they are the focus of the story.  Please stay to the plot line and not this other noise.  I still stand by my conviction that is is just being dragged out.  There have been too many points of view chappies about the hospital and they began to feel like filler.  If you had just started to read the story it probably went fast but for those of us who started at the beginning, it may be becoming a bit long winded.  I recalled you saying that this story was going to be about 25 chaps and that you were working on their life after.  That is what I have been holding out for and now, I don't know.  I am so sorry to send this your way because I initially loved this story so much and I still love the plot line. It has just become one of those stories that never seems to progress and updates slowly.  Please go back to your initial way of presenting, it is what made this story so wonderful.

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This story was always meant to be about all of them, not just Edward and Bella.  It was meant to be a revolving POV taking in the perceptions of all characters and thus creating the whole.  That was the goal from the outset and it was an experiment.  I am sorry that you don't enjoy that. 

The story was never meant to be 25 in total.  Just the first part of the story.  The main story ends at chapter 50 with a multi-chap epilogue.   I submit every chapter within 48 hours of the last chap going live but alas have no control over how quickly validators can get to my chapter.  It can take 4 days to two weeks.

Sorry to disappoint.  Thank you for sharing your thoughts.