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Reviewer: AMK78 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 12:30 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action

We love Emmett!!! Mwah!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!  I love Emmett too!

Reviewer: AMK78 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking

tell me! tell me!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: AMK78 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 12:18 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This

loved this chapter - glad you posted it

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!  I am glad you can see why I chose to leave it in...

Reviewer: AMK78 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 12:13 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage

cool

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Reviewer: AMK78 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 12:07 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough

love it - gives me goosebumps. Edward's gonna freak

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Reviewer: AMK78 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 12:06 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough

love it - gives me goosebumps. Edward's gonna freak

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!  Um, yeah.  Edward's not going to take it too well.

Reviewer: AMK78 (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2009 11:59 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail

i love this story!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! So glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: AMK78 (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2009 11:53 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar

so sad

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!  Poor Emoward.

Reviewer: AMK78 (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2009 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living

heartbreaking...

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: AMK78 (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2009 11:41 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation

captivating

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Reviewer: AMK78 (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2009 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation

captivating

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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: karenlillie (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2009 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless

Love the story and truly cant get enough as it is sometime in the early AM and i cant stop, but i truly need to know.....
Why all the spaces in between and whats with the a/n's being longer then the chapters themselves....

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!  The spaces are merely how my word program interacts with Twilighted.  We've tried to fix and unfortunately, it's just a glitch.  As for the A/N, most of them are not, but if I put a long one out there, there is a reason....

Reviewer: jettabugfox (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2009 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

Oh.

 

My. 

 

God.

 

I just started (and finished) reading this today.  damn girl.  this fucking rocks.  I am CRYING my damn eyes out right now.

Please tell me that this is not the end, that you are going to be updating this soon, and that I won't have to sit here wondering not only what she decides for now, but what she decides forever.

I have a bunch of things that I wanted to respond to as I went, but, since I thought that this was finished (as in, a completed fic - damn me for not reading the description very closely) I just thought I'd leave a big review at the end.  And now I figure out that its NOT DONE.  Damn it all.

Hmmmm...  I hope and pray that she chooses to go to the Cullens, for the very selfish reason that if she doesn't choose to get back with Emoward in your story, I will be writing my own alternate ending (*wink*) and for the unselfish reason of I know what its like to be a new mom, and a new mom with injuries (I was in a car accident before my daughter was born and then had a VERY difficult delivery), so that she has plenty of help with Lizzie.

I love the voice that you have given all of your characters.  I think they are very realistic.  I LURVE Jasper - I think I am kinda a closet Jazz freak, and I particularly am enamored with your version.  I like my men crazy. Hehe.

I can't wait for the next chapter.  I just started on Twilighted (I stumbled in here from Fanfic.net) so I am not 100% on how to put you on alert, but dammit, I will figure it out so I can read the next chapter!

I am giving you a 10 for the whole work.  I really love it and can't wait for more.

 

And SQUEEEE about shirtless Daddyward!  Nothing is hotter than a new daddy holding his new daughter - and that is something I have first hand knowledge of!

Esme should talk some sense into her.  She does well with dear Eddie. 

 

Thank you for sharing this story btw.  I am immensely impressed with people who are brave enough to put their shit out there.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!  I so appreciate and am honoured by your words.

PM me or email me if you need assistance with adding stories to favourites...

Reviewer: tigerlivie (Anonymous) · Date: November 28, 2009 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Nightmare of a Love Story

Hiya,

Just wanted to say that THAT right there, that phone conversation, was so perfectly written. Just .. *speechless*

I am literally in tears right now, and I admire you for being able to do that! I'm also slightly jealous.. just kidding. Thanks for writing this amazing story! I love it! I really can't wait until Alice gets her booty over there and saves Bella. Edward is being a smelly bottom and should not be released yet in my opinion.. a few more chapters? Please? 

Loved it so far!!
--Olivia (;



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!  I am so glad you are enjoying and their are many more chapters to read....

Reviewer: captivatingsaggi (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2009 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life

Very wonderfully writte.Hope you continue more stories like this!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

I do have one other story out there... a collaboration with venomousgal called ...Becomes the Swan.

Reviewer: Kristal_Victoria (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2009 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

Aaaaaaargh!!! I hate it when I get to the end of the last published chapter and find it's not complete and I have to wait for next chapter. This is an absolutely amazing and breathtaking story. It's got some funny moments, definately lots of angst, and some sweet romance. I will admit I don't like "PottyMouth Jasper"... though I like his points of view. When you finish this story, I sure hope you are working on your own original works, because you are extremely talented!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!  I am honoured by your thoughts on my talent.  Thank you.

Reviewer: dsfq (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2009 10:31 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

NO!!!!!! I need more!!!!  PLEASE!!!!!????!?!?!?!?!?!?!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!  More is now available.

Reviewer: dsfq (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2009 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

I just keep crying and crying.  Keep writing!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: mychild (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2009 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

oh, go charlie! he rocks my socks (total DILF)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

PS - Charlie is a DILF

Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2009 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

awww...Charlie is so enlightened in ur story...thanks for having him step up and be a great dad.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Dydear (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2009 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

I love Charilie!  You did a great job with his point of view.  Your different POVs are really moving this story along!  I love it!  Otherwise, we'd have chapter after chapter of Bella angst, Edward angst, Bella angst, Edward angst.  Not that I don't love the angst.  But we all know what they're feeling now (thanks to your fabulous writing skills.)  I can't wait to read more!  Bring it on!  A happy squeal-worth reunion is in here, somewhere, I just know it!  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!  There is a reunion coming!  Just wait:)  And thanks for your comments on POV's.  I'm glad you enjoy them.

Reviewer: rosmarinastar (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2009 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

Aww, loved the Charlie POV. He had some sage advice. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2009 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

ok, i love and where is my next chapter, oh you dont have it yet, well think my your editor! now get that copy to my desk pronto!. LOL seriously i need to see what she decides. so please post the next chapter asap. thanks



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!  I sure do.  It's up...

Reviewer: jerogers06 (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2009 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

Love this fanfic... can't wait for more! I started reading it and read through it in 2 days. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2009 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway

damn to predictable and yet a shock, i was hoping for different for that happy ending... but i guess its not the ending yet.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!  We're definitely not at the ending yet...

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