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Reviewer: wordplay (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase

Update! Update! Update!

Patience? Pffff. Not happening!
Siiiigh, okay. I will just have to find it in myself to be patient. I mean, I've waited the entire 49 chapters for them to come even THIS far in their relationship.. so I do believe I can wait a bit longer.

I'm so sad for this story to come to a close, but damn was it heart-breakingly, earth-shatteringly beautiful. Tragically beautiful. Right down to Jasper's cursing and insanity. You wrote each character so well that it was impossibly NOT to know who's mind we were looking into during each POV. Love, love, loooove. Not just your creativity with the plot and stunning way with words. but your hilarious A/N's as well.

I'm moving on to experience Chubward while I wait for that lovely email stating one of my favourite authors has updated!

smb.
xo



Author's Response:

The final regular chapter is now up!

I hope you enjoy Chubward!

Have a wonderful holiday!

 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!



Author's Response:

The final regular chapter is now up!

I hope you enjoy Chubward!

Have a wonderful holiday!

 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!



Author's Response:

The final regular chapter is now up!

I hope you enjoy Chubward!

Have a wonderful holiday!

 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: wordplay (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together

Perfect chapter. They don't have a rating for perfect, ten doesn't cut it. Not even close.

smb.
xo



Author's Response:

Aw, shucks!

 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase

Oh dearest Pomme, such a beatiful chapter.

The whole house is on the mend as is witnessed by Bella as she entered the mirth filled room.  The sight of Edward holding Elizabeth as he spoke with Carlisle was so natural as were the conversations going on about them.  The ease in which Bella is accepted makes my heart feel light but it is when Edward cuts her pancakes into bite size pieces that it begins to soar.

The walk, just the two of them, oh what can I say.  Once again I felt my tears as they escaped but this this time they are tears of joy.  I can certainly understand why Edward needed to embace you in a hug. 

Before I sign off I want to take the time to thank you for sharing this story and wish you and yours a very blessed holiday season.

Sandra



Author's Response:

I am so glad that they were happy tears this time.  I can only hope that you will feel the same on the next chapter.  Have a wonderful holiday.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: wordplay (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

Gosh you sure know how to wrench at the heartstrings. Heartbreakingly beautiful chapter.

smb.
xo



Author's Response:

That one is definitely a tough one...

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: newmoon-luvr (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See

i LOVE daddywards attention here. i hope half of these things people notice about me with my daughter.

 

great chapter. love the story



Author's Response:

Daddyward is truly a great little dad.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: fudgie (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 01:53 AM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase

Love it!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: wordplay (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Sound of Music

I adore Jasper!! Yes, even in his crazy, angry and someone depressed self. Great chapter, you wrote him so well. :)

I also wanted to thank you for sharing such a personal piece of your life a few chapters back. It was brave and I hope it gave some insight to those who were mistaken about where you were taking this story.

smb.
xo



Author's Response:

I know a lot of folks were frightened of the direction and I just wanted to show how clearly I understood that...

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

 

Reviewer: Nanavette (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls

This chapter made me cry. Loved it.



Author's Response:

It's definitely an emotional chapter.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: wordplay (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough

Siiiigh.. sometimes my Carlisle crush is so much bigger than my Edward crush. Like right now, he's so fabulous.

Totally hooked on this story, which is why I've waited until chapter 7 to review. I got sucked in a little bit! Onto the next. <3

smb.
xo



Author's Response:

LOL!  I love me some Dr Daddy!

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Jamieson (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase

Awww...I loved Bella's realization, and it's so on the mark, too.  I'm sad we're getting to the end of the story, but at the same time I can't wait for them to finally find their way back to each other and be a true family.



Author's Response:

I hope you like the way that I get us there...

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase

Wow, it is all so worth the wait, so so good! I can't wait for the rest, I will miss this so much! I may have to reread it :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: BrightEyes (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase

This is such a sweet chapter. I can't wait for what comes next. Great job. Ellie, as usual, keep up the amazing work.

Xoxo

Amber



Author's Response:

*hugs you*

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: readeronly (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 01:49 PM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase

great last 2 chapters!!! i am really excited to see where this story goes next!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vanessarae (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase

I love it. I love this small resolution between them, and the babysteps. It makes sense without compromising either of them, or Elizabeth.

Can't wait to see the end...well, you know what I mean.



Author's Response:

Babysteps are the only way to go with these two....

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase

OMG Sniffle!!!  That was a beautiful chapter!  So sympbolic to her current mental state.  I absolutly loved it!  Goose bumps all over my arms when he touched her face to raise her eyes up to meet his I swore he would kiss her I hoped but sigh too soon and daddyward knows it.  Can't be completely happy until the vase is put back together and standing up right on its own. 

Great work can't wait for the last chapter and all the Epi's to come!!



Author's Response:

Just wait for the next chapter!

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: fretlin (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 02:50 AM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase

I can't even think What to say in here. I just found out today about this amazing story. And I read every single chapter with all my heart bleeding for Bella, trembling for Edward. I don't either to thank you or what for making me cry so much today lol.

This is an amazing story. There's part when I need to stop reading it, cos is just so damn to much for me to handle. but in the end I survived.

Thank you for sharing you story to the world. I can't wait to read the next chapter, when the broken vase has been repair piece to pieces.

xoxo

 

Mia

 

 



Author's Response:

I am so glad you gave my story a try.  It is much appreciated!

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: dellatwi (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase

Its still sucks that he left but they should make up now. Just be more careful with the hot make up sex:)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: twi-sessed (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary

Thank you so much for your heartfelt revelation before this chapter.  I, too, have experienced the pain as you have.  I miscarried three babies between my older two and my third.  I commend you for telling us your insight and for your convictions.

I am reading through your story straight through to as far as you have posted, although it will take a couple of days with work, five kids (18, 16, 10, 9 year old twins), husband, work, and Christmas concerts.  I'm caught hook, line, and sinker.  I'm loving your story and would stay up all night to read if I could.  I will be reading every chance I get.

I hope you post more chapters soon.  I'll be caught up with you in two days at the most (I read all four of "The Saga" in nine days). 



Author's Response:

I am so grateful for your kind words and that you decidewd to give my story a shot.  Please enjoy the remainder!

 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: katiecave (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase

okay...I'm passified. As far as i'm concerned you are now safe.



Author's Response:

LOL!  I breathe a sigh of relief.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: jettabugfox (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase

omg, the tears, they are spilling...



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: wsharp30 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase

I say it every time, but I so love this story! I hope Bella can forgive Edward and that they get their chance as a family.

Author's Response:

*cross your fingers*

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Shonla (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase

YAY!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Lui1313 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase

Ohhh! I love this chapter and your metaphorical vase. Bella is FINALLY back. I mean, her old self. And Edward's sparkling eyes! (I really, and I mean really really wish I had a chance to see them. but no. life's sooo unfair) I'm a bit sad that this story is coming to end, but it's a good news! Edward and Bella will be together forever! (I know, I know, I'm such a pathetic romantic). I definitely adore your style of writing and I'll be waiting for next chapter :).

Have a great time and thank you so much for such an amazing story :).
Lui.



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: EdwardsWifey (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Strong Enough

Good story.. alot of POV's makes it hard to follow.. But I like it



Author's Response:

Alas, that is part of the story.  It's an experiment (as explained in the A/N) and wouldn't work without the POV changes.  At least not in the way I wanted it to.

I am glad you are sticking with it...

 

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: heatherbug (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase

I've got one thing to say. AWWWWWW.......



Author's Response:

LOL!  And there are not too many "awww" moments in this fiction!

 

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