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Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears

She should let him suffer.....major kissing licking tata to ass type begging for forgiveness...

Author's Response:

Oh, he definitely suffers.

 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

We need more Jasper's in the world! Can't wait for Em's turn.

I'd probably have Alice buy me a leather suit- that dominitrix attire- I'm sure Emmett would appreciate a woman in control... here's to whipping Em in submission...Whack baby!..aren't alternate universes fun, especially when real life is so lame? Lol

Author's Response:

LOL!  AU's are the best.  We all need an escape.

 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 37 - Don't Give Up

Carlisle is awesomeness!!! Can he be my daddy?

As for epilogue idea--- maybe each character reflecting on these hard moments and how it changed them, what they took away from such an experience, how it benefitted their own relationships- trust, communication, forgiveness, unconditional love, treasuring family and friends despite all the dysfunction....oh oh oh, how about Charlie and grandaughter moment, feeling he has been given a second chance

Author's Response:

Dr Daddy is my second favourite Cullen man and by far the easiest for me to write.  I know, weird, right?

 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Throw the Truth

Pounding chest "me want Edward!" yeah, I could be pissed all I want but let me see his face and sex hair no matter how thin and I'll want more than just a hug and apology....yeah yeah, I know, she's got emo stuff to figure out... I need a friend like Angela...

Author's Response:

They both have stuff to figure out.  This kind of damage is not solved overnight... 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: dsfq (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever

This has been a wonderful story!!  THANK YOU!!!



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!

 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Totoro (Anonymous) · Date: December 27, 2009 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever

This made me tear up just a little, and I almost never cry.

Once again, excellent job. :)



Author's Response:

I hope they were good tears.  We're on the road back to where we should be... finally. 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

Doin the happy dance the happy dance~^~^~^~

Author's Response:

She's coming back! 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 32 - Classics

Thank you!!! The name is perfect.... A classic.... I was holding my breath cuz renesmee is what the hell!?

Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 32 - Classics

Thank you!!! The name is perfect.... A classic.... I was holding my breath cuz renesmee is what the hell!?

Author's Response:

LOL!  I hated that name.  Bella would have never gone that route, IMHO.

 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

Amoxcilln! That really eased up the moment there....needed that...hmmmm... What would he name her? Renesme?

Author's Response:

Oh heavens no.  Not Reneesme.... 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls

**sniffle sniffle** no words... Too choked up....

... I realized this is your parrallel to Bella being torn , broken when her baby was being born in breaking dawn...you know I hate that book... Your version is better anytime! Her daddy is there at least....Ok I'm strong enough to read the next chapter now...

Author's Response:

Yeah, I wasn't happy that there was zero bonding between Edward and Nessie in BD.  I hope this working better for you.

 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings

Ok... I had to read the next chapter... My kids are eating popcorn to hold them off... Yay!!!!! For baby Bella!!! I'm calming down now, kids are back looking at the tv... I think I'm freaking them out but I'm good now...

Author's Response:

Oh, don't scare the wee ones!  It'll be okay! 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

I need to take intermission before I go to the next chapter... This is feeling too real.... My kids are looking at me if I've done lost it.., how do I explain to them I'm crying over fictional characters?! You are good....

Author's Response:

I need to post more warnings, methinks! 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No

I need a Valium! Something to calm my racing heart.., I swear you are torturing us(I love it)..,story is so angsty I can't even stop reading to feed my kids!!! I trust you to not kill Bella off.....here I go to the next chapter

Author's Response:

Make sure to feed the tots!  The story will still be there when you are done! 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands

I finally cried! Poor Charlie! Having to see his little girl like that...thank goodness he left his gun behind...ohhh stop the pain!

Author's Response:

Charlie - gosh did he have a lot to swallow in a short time... 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless

He should have been slapped a few times! Ben should have punched him... But since it's sexy Edward, one is ok. What a depressing chapter. He is sooo emo!

Author's Response:

He's definitely an emo kid.  He has a lot of growing up to do in a very short time. 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile

Ahhhh!

Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

Yeah, I'm loading my shotgun ready to shoot! This wasn't a wrinkle Missy! It's a heart attack! I'm scared to keep reading.

Author's Response:

Keep going.  It'll be okay - I promise. 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking

Yeah I'm bouncing too!

Author's Response:

A little more hope, perhaps? 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This

That's sweet. Connected in dreams... Not impossible.

Author's Response:

It is not impossible - especially not for these two. 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage

Let the search begin! Woohoo!

Author's Response:

The troops have been rallied. 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough

Hope!

Author's Response:

There is more hope to come. 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail

Thank God for Angela. At least Charlie can have some peace knowing his daughter is alive and googling the cullens! Genuis! This reads more real.

Author's Response:

 I wanted the story to remain as real as I could while still loosely following the original.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar

Ughh! I honestly just want to slap him around! Men are dense!

Author's Response:

He is a bit dense, isn't he?  Don't worry, he gets his slap in more ways than one. 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living

That was heart wrenching

Author's Response:

There are definitely rough moments in this story... 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

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