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Reviewer: lauriatthelake (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
Lovely story. I keep reminding myself that they are just 17 and how overwhelming all of this must be for them...and they've each only had sex how many times? Not very many
Reviewer: lauriatthelake (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight
I love listening to Jasper! He is right on and so funny!
Reviewer: lauriatthelake (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 03:17 AM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith
Shirtless daddy was wonderful, yea Esme! and yea Esme me again in how she talked to Bella, well done!
Reviewer: lauriatthelake (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town
I loved Jasper's banter
Reviewer: lauriatthelake (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid
this is a lovely story, so real. so many bad things have come about without any ill will from anyone. It will take time to heal, but i believe it will be able to be healed
Reviewer: lauriatthelake (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough
I am glad that sense seems about to prevail!
Reviewer: lauriatthelake (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 02:48 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End
I loved their romantic beginning, so tender and loving
Reviewer: Midnight Sunshine (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2010 09:28 PM · On: Epilogue the Sixth - World of Magic
fabulous! I love how Elizabeth has turned out and its great that you used so many of the names ! Masen is perfect! what an adorable scene imagining them all asleep =)
Reviewer: Midnight Sunshine (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
EXCELLENT really really well done, bummed its over can't wait to read the rest though please please write another story!
Reviewer: Midnight Sunshine (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
oh my gosh, i can't gush enough about you and your story, what a PERFECT description with the vase and SO wise, amazing loved it!
Reviewer: mosha (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 12:52 AM · On: Epilogue the First - Pink Tutus and Blue Velvet
xD perfect
Reviewer: mosha (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 12:28 AM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
absolute perfection. :>
Reviewer: Emiline (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2010 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
hate you. =/ boo
Reviewer: Emiline (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2010 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town
i effing love how jasper went all ten titty ho down southern on us lol
Reviewer: Midnight Sunshine (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight
yeah! thank you Jasper! i love the line about how is she going to know you will growl for them... go fight Edward!
Reviewer: Genevieve Blanc (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 05:41 PM · On: Prologue - Pretty and the Starlet
Yup great job, expected nothing less than the amazing story it is. I like though that in the real story you made it different, took longer......idk why...nail biting and lap top slamming is something I did a lot. So..... just great really!
Reviewer: Midnight Sunshine (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
wow, this is the first story I have read that has made me cry like this and I don't even have kids! and I have read lots of stories! simply incredible, i hope you write more!
Reviewer: Midnight Sunshine (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears
amazing, i love how you are making the work so real, one thing that always bothered me about Twilight was how broken Bella was and then how things just click back into place, it isn't real, it isn't human. There are lasting scars and mixed emotions and intimacy has to be rebuilt. Thank you for writing it all in, really great story!
Reviewer: Midnight Sunshine (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Throw the Truth
amazing! and thank you for having her best girl be the first to see her! hos before bros =)
Reviewer: Midnight Sunshine (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 03:49 AM · On: Chapter 32 - Classics
YEAH!! thank you SO much for skipping the whole renesmee fiasco! Elizabeth I THINK is Edward's mother's name.. andGrace is LOVELY, well done =) although I do like Elizabeth Grace Masen too =)
Reviewer: Midnight Sunshine (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2010 02:02 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
amazing! your chapter made me well up several times, fantastic writing! I love how you wind in bits from Twilight, like vampires, Volterra, very clever! =)
please please let Bella survive! ( i know you already wrote it, but fingers crossed!)
Reviewer: Midnight Sunshine (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 11:48 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
whew Go Esme!!! Excellent chapter, your story keeps bringing tears to my eyes! Amazing!
Reviewer: april09 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2010 06:43 AM · On: FGB Outtake the Second - Three A.M.
Ellie--
I don't know how I missed reading these extra epilogues! They were so sweet and perfect. I still like to tink of the actual ending to this story and how it was such a perfect quiet moment and I like how you linked this all back to that.
Great job!
-Melanie
Reviewer: disillusioned (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2010 12:01 AM · On: Chapter 32 - Classics
love the "well butter my biscuit!!!"
it's my new favourite quote!!!!
i absolutely LOVE Jasper, with the 'my kids are going to get f**ked up names like River and there's nothing I can do about it!'
I wonder if you really can die of estrogen poisoning? If anyone could, i'd wager it being Emmett, Jasper or Charlie.
Reviewer: disillusioned (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2010 11:50 PM · On: Chapter 32 - Classics
love the "well butter my biscuit!!!"
it's my new favourite quote!!!!
i absolutely LOVE Jasper, with the 'my kids are going to get f**ked up names like River and there's nothing I can do about it!'
I wonder if you really can die of estrogen poisoning? If anyone could, i'd wager it being Emmett, Jasper or Charlie.
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