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Reviews For Not Like This
Reviewer: sarahmendenhall1 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 05:23 PM · On: Epilogue the Third - Us Together Always

truly awe inspiring story:]

 

i loved it.

thanks!



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!  What an amazing compliment!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: scrapmypieces (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 10:20 AM · On: Epilogue the Third - Us Together Always

Gotta love some Emmy-wiswom!  ;)



Author's Response:

He's smarter than the average bear;)

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: scrapmypieces (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 10:04 AM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.... some sexing finally.... and Lizzy, how could you do that to daddy?? lol



Author's Response:

Toddlers have no respect for grown-up time:)

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: sweek539 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 06:25 AM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life

I'm a little late to the party, but damn, girl! You're killing me with this story! It's so beautifully written, and absolutely gut-wrenching... and I'm just in the third chapter! That's an amazing thing, bb! This story is sure to be absolutely amazing!

 

xoxo,

Starla



Author's Response:

I am so glad you are enjoying it!  It can be a rough ride, but I hope you find it worth the journey.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: mychild (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 06:18 PM · On: Epilogue the Third - Us Together Always

i loved seeing it from emmet's pov.  it was refreshing and different.  i love ur lizzie.  u have made her just right. bravo!



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!  I love Lizzie too.  We'll be seeing more of her before I'm through....

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 10:36 AM · On: Epilogue the Third - Us Together Always

Oh Pomme, just like Alice I find myself wearing a smile larger than my face.  Oh what I wouldn't give right now to own a pair of ballet shoes.  It's odd but I felt like I was there laughing right along with Jasper and crying with Esme.  Loved that Rosalie wore the simple dress and looked beautiful.  The vows were simple and yet so Edward and Bella.  The wedding, the reception ~ everything was perfect.

It is all so beautiful to join  the heart and soul of two people in marriage.  Their union was a party at it's finest to signal their HEA.  The choice of honeymoon made me smile.  Very romantic.  But just like Emmett I look forward to the Disney time.   I hope Elizabeth gets to wear her tiara and carry her wand.  She is so loved in this loving family.  And when it all boils done  isn't it the love that is most important.

Sandra



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!  That is what this family does best - love.  They have TONS of faults, but they know how to love each other.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: april09 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 08:14 AM · On: Epilogue the Third - Us Together Always

So beautiful, Ellie!

I wish I could hear what Edward was whispering to Bella....

=)

--Melanie



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!  Suffice it to say, he was saying naughty things...

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 06:41 PM · On: Epilogue the Third - Us Together Always

Perfect!

I hope you have more epilogues/outtakes planned for Not Like This!!!

Author's Response:

There should be 4-5 more with a slight delay as my computer was wiped out, including written/unpublished chapters last weekend.  But there is a little more to come...

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 06:09 PM · On: Epilogue the First - Pink Tutus and Blue Velvet

That was SO sweet!!! After all the angst and despair in the story, this was PERFECT!!

Author's Response:

Consider the epilogues as thank you's for surviving the angst....

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Isle Esme (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 03:33 PM · On: Epilogue the Third - Us Together Always

Oh, My Gosh!it was really awsome. You actually had my crying when Angela found Bella on the floor with blood alover. Dont stop writing!



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!  There are a few more chapters left of this story, plus there's always Chubward!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever

That was an AMAZING story! The very best Twilight Fan Fic I have read! THANK YOU so much for sharing!!!! I am saving the epilogues for a bit later. i hope you will keep on writing epilogues for this story for a LONG time!!!

Off to check on Chubbyward.....

Author's Response:

Wow!  What an amazing compliment!  I'm so glad you enjoyed it that much...

Have fun with Chubward!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 37 - Don't Give Up

I pulled Edward against me, and he clung to me like that little boy once again, despite the fact he was several inches taller than I by now. His weight slumped against me and the sobs began, his chest hitching, his breath stuttering in my ear. “Dad, how did I destroy everything? How did I mess things up so badly?”

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHH! Oh Edward!!!

Author's Response:

He realizes how bad this is... but he doesn't realize that there is always hope...

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

Thank you for letting Bella wake up!

Author's Response:

I am an HEA girl:)

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 06:34 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands

Poor Charlie! But your writing is superb!

Author's Response:

Charlie is one of the true innocents in this story, even if he doesn't think so himself.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition

That was so hard to read.

Author's Response:

There are a lot of parts of this story that are difficult, but I hope it's worth it in the end...

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

Well, I had wondered if bella had seen a doctor at all, since she had no money. I don't think you have said one way or the other, but this chapter makes me think that she has not seen a doctor.....

Author's Response:

I did, albeit very briefly, mention it and she is seeing a doctor, but is receiving very minimal (no insurance or assistance) care. 

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar

Sobbing Edward?? WHere are the tissues for me?

Author's Response:

He's got quite a bit to lose it over in this tale....

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation

I am so glad I found this story! It is just the kind I like: Angsty with a baby in there for good measure!

THANKS!

Author's Response:

I hope you enjoy it!  There is some payoff for you in the epilogues!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: cjngrls (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 04:28 PM · On: Epilogue the Third - Us Together Always

I have absolutely loved this story. I have followed you from the beginning, I wish it could go on and on...=) You have done a great job...



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!  Alas, we are winding down now...

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!f

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 01:21 PM · On: Epilogue the Third - Us Together Always

I loved being in his head. Amazing choice of perspective for this!

But...

But...

But I really wish he'd've got that box out of his freakin' pocket there just at the end.

 

:)



Author's Response:

I think he got the nerve up, but he and Rose need their own moment, not to piggy back on Bella and Edward.  The realization was there, though, and that is what he needed. 

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: shammy (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 03:49 AM · On: Epilogue the Third - Us Together Always

haa......you're really amazing...i really like everything about your story...hope you could write more about bella amd edwards life as husbadn and wife....really your story is one of a kind...a bit intense  at the same time makes you want for more!!! BRavo!! Bravo!! you did a great job..love it

Reviewer: shammy (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 03:49 AM · On: Epilogue the Third - Us Together Always

haa......you're really amazing...i really like everything about your story...hope you could write more about bella amd edwards life as husbadn and wife....really your story is one of a kind...a bit intense  at the same time makes you want for more!!! BRavo!! Bravo!! you did a great job..love it



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!  There will be a few more scenes between Bella and Edward when all is said and done....

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: damlanrrr (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage

loving it so far:)



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 

 

 

Reviewer: AliKatt (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 06:16 AM · On: Epilogue the Third - Us Together Always

Great chapter! Love Emmett.  I always wondered why Bella and Edward only had sex that one time before he left her???  THX



Author's Response:

Because their relationship wasn't really about that.  I also imagine, as it happened not too long before they started school again (not to mention that Bella's dad is Police Chief), they just didn't find a lot of time alone.  I agree with more "normal" teen relationships, once the "seal is broken", it tends to continue like wildfire.  But there is nothing normal about these two....

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Lalaranya (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 02:13 AM · On: Epilogue the Third - Us Together Always

aaaawwwwWWWWWWWW!!!!!!! ijust completely LOVE THIS!!!! SO MUCH!!!!

and i can't believe it took me this long to finish reading it...!!! life has been too busy with friends breakup's and my homework nd having to get used to seeing my bf once a week -.- but stilll....HOW COULD I HAVE TAKEN THIS LONG TO READ SOMETHING THIS AMAZING?!?!?!?!?! I LOVE IT...SO SO SO SO SO SO MUCH....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 :)



Author's Response:

Aw!  Take your time!  It'll be there when you get to it.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

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