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Reviewer: lovemesometwi (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 04:48 PM · On: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
you did awesome as usual. I am suprised you still need the reassurance. You ROCK!
Author's Response: Well, some people are really not happy with preggy lemons, surprisingly. I wanted to make sure, if I went that route, I did a good job with it....
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: LadyTx (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 04:47 PM · On: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
Awesome... My husband should have taken Edward lessons when I was pregnant. Not that he wasn't wonderful and loving and all but I definitely missed out on that bathroom scene there.
Author's Response: I am with you there! Mine has been wonderful, but yeah, he's no Daddyward:)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: shanno716 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 04:25 PM · On: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
This was great.
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 04:14 PM · On: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
You nailed it! That was so beautiful!
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: dejr88 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 04:07 PM · On: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
Every woman definitely deserves a Daddyward like this. :) Excellent job!
Author's Response: I agree! Daddywards all around!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 03:59 PM · On: Epilogue the Fourth - From Paris to Milan
Squee!! Holy room full of people see thats what I loved about my doc he made thsoe exceptions for me to sniffle squee Daddy Jasper!!
Author's Response: When I had my son, the woman next door probably had 15 people in her room! LOL! I had a c-section so mine was restricted to just me and the man (and the docs)...
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: FanNan46 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 03:49 PM · On: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
You did wonderfully!!! Yes, we have all felt that way and I thank God I have my own version of Edward (though not as perfect as our dream Edward) who always told me how sexy I was to him - even when I was a whale with our son. I could totally relate to this chapter. Edward was a wise man to stay home!! :)
Author's Response: I am with you. I felt that way and I had a great man who always told me I was beautiful. No Daddyward tho! LOL!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Lotte (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 03:34 PM · On: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
I have silently wished for this story for a long time.
Being pregnant myself (33 weeks now, and huge...) I can totally relate to Bella's statement about pregnancy in the beginning of the chapter. Sadly, my husband is no Edward, so please... If he could spare a day, night, weekend, whatever... Send him my way. Please. That was seriously hot!!
Author's Response: We all deserve a Daddyward at these times... Congrats on the new baby!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: angelica1 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 03:31 PM · On: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
Great job! I love seeing them so happy having come through all their earlier difficulties. I really hope you'll keep adding. It would be fantastic to see them both enjoy the birth of this baby after so much pain when Elizabeth arrived.
Author's Response: There are 3 more epilogues written and all are complete (well, except for the last few paragraphs of the last epilogue as they are KILLING me). You'll definitely get a few more glimpses, although one of them isn't the birth of baby #2. Don't worry, though... you'll meet... it:)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: lisamichelle17 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 03:11 PM · On: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
Of course, you did Bella and Edward justice. I truly believe that every pregnant woman goes through the phase that she is just not attractive to her husband/lover.. It's going to sound strange but as much I loved the sex'in between Edward and Bella I also equally loved the conversation between Alice and Bella. The brief exchange between Edward and Alice was very cute and the way you wrote it made me feel as if their bond as twins has grown a lot in the past years. I also for some reason didn't think Bella could have a child after the rough pregnancy she had with Elizabeth. I absolutely loved the utter devotion Edward has for Bella. His wife, his lover, his everything. I loved the words he spoke to her. It was beautiful. I am curious as to whose pov we get to see in the next chapter :-) Thank you so much for the update :-)
Author's Response: Aw, you're so good to me! I was hoping the dialog would hit home too. We all need support during these times...
Hmmm... who could the next chapter be?
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 03:10 PM · On: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
You did fabulous! I LOVE what Edward wants to do with the boobies, it's stupid but men love that shit and why not? Boobies are like the origin of life and they're pretty (at least until AFTER you nurse the second one for 18 months!) and soft (ESPECIALLY after you nurse that second one) I loved this chapter and always hope for more!
Author's Response: LOL! Daddyward absolutely enjoys the jublies:) My own personal Daddyward chased me around to get a good grope in when knocked up!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: heatherdawnc (Anonymous) · Date: February 20, 2010 03:08 PM · On: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
Unf! That was a fabulous daddyward chapter! Sad that he couldn't be there and felt like he missed so much :( Loving these outtakes!
Author's Response: Daddyward doesn't want to miss a thing. But, alas, life does go on - even when big events are happening.
I'm so glad you're enjoying the outtakes.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: venomousgal (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 02:52 PM · On: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
I fucking love this epi and I fucking love you, you silly girl! That was the icing on a fantastic story....hot, sweet and lemony. Yum.
Great job, LB! You should be so proud of yourself.
<3
RB
Author's Response: *hugs* You know how much I lurves you, bb! I couldn't have kept on without your support....
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 02:50 PM · On: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
HOt, hot, hot! I have to say, my husband said the SAME things that Edward did! He loved me pregnant, even if I didn't feel pretty or sexy. He made me feel sexy! Great job!
Author's Response: What a lucky gal! I'm glad you had a Daddyward of your own:)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 02:11 PM · On: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
one of the my fav chapters...u did an amazing job!!!
Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 02:11 PM · On: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
one of the my fav chapters...u did an amazing job!!!
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Earthbound Angel 24 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 02:07 PM · On: Prologue - Pretty and the Starlet
Wow! Only the first chapter and I'm hooked. I will continue to read and I will review when I have completed the story. :)
Author's Response: I hope you enjoy the tale!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Giselle Giselle (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 01:59 PM · On: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
I do believe that this was favorite chapter so far. I'm pregnant right now and I am constantly feeling not nearly as beautiful as before. Although my husband is away, has been away and will continue to be away until after the baby is born, I'm always thinking that this is how he'd act if he were home. It was just nice to read and sexy as hell and I loved it to death!!!! Fantastic!!!!
Author's Response: I am so sorry your hubs is away. I hope you have a good support system, darlin! Glad this chapter gave you happy thoughts!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 01:56 PM · On: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
can't wait for more
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 01:55 PM · On: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
Oh, wait, hold on while I run to find a cold shower somewhere *runs around mall looking for any cold, wet liquid*.
Yeah, could find anything and now I feel all warm.
Bb, that. Was. Fabulous!
Can I get me some Daddyward for a little while?
And ooh, I gots me a shout-out! I about did cartwheels with that right there!!
It was hawt, truly OMG worthy!!
Great job!!
I'm wondering what's next up your sleeve...
Author's Response: Aw, you're too good to me, darlin'! Every girl should have a Daddyward:)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 01:36 PM · On: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
Aw, the whole time he was showing her what he loves most about her and how beautiful she truly is....sweet but oh so very sexy! Loved it!
Author's Response: He is a sweet, yet naughty, Daddyward:)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: kaybrans (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 01:30 PM · On: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
How many more chapters??? I love this story...:)
Author's Response: I will be posting 3 more epilogue chapters....
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 01:24 PM · On: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
ABSOLUTELY DELICIOUS! I loved that you have given our beloved E&B a passionate love that has, and will continue to last for the rest of their forever.
Thank you so much for that. Truly, thank you.
Author's Response: They will have that attribute forever. Passion. I'm so glad I did this scene justice.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 01:06 PM · On: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
I think it was one of my favorite pregnant bella and daddyward scenes of all time!
GREAT!
I know I felt like that.I had to do 6 months of hormone therapy to get pregnant. I gained 30 pounds, it SUCKED! So that 30 pounds plus the 30 pounds from baby weight......I felt huge...I was huge...I was no size 2 to start out with...more like a 5'7" size 14.
I just wished my husband was that overly loving and made me feel as sexy as Edward did Bella.......
on a funny side note........I had watermelon boobs! 42 H............that suuuuuuuuuuckkkked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Holy Bejebus on the knockers! Wow. Poor thing!
I wish we all had a Daddyward to get us through those times. I'm so glad things worked out for you though:)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Katrela (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 01:03 PM · On: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
I loved it! I guess I never really though t that Bella wouldn't be able to have kids again, but now I know! At first I thought that you were going to redo her sex dream from when she was Pregnant the first time but this was even better!
Bethanne
Author's Response: It had the same theme as that dream, but yes, a very different set of circumstances.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
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