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Reviewer: lolabee (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 06:55 PM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s

 Thanks so much.



Author's Response:

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary

alice and edwards relationship is good...ive seen other twin stories where they arent like twins would be but this is exactly right...good job



Author's Response:

I am glad I got their relationship right!  It's important to the story.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: jjjmom (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 02:53 PM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s

You know, there is no law saying you can only do one more epilogue!! :)  Do as many as you feel like, I guarantee you will have mega-readers!!  I have loved, loved, loved this story!!! Thanks!



Author's Response:

Ah, it's time.  If I go much past where I am going in the final epilogue, we will start having to deal with the death of the senior generation.  Readers of this story have had enough angst!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage

lol i love emmett....great story so far...its interesting to see edward more devastated then bella but then again she does have to exist for her baby too...i cant wait till they find out abut that one



Author's Response:

I don't know if either one is more desperate or devastated than the other, but they both have slightly different ways of coping.  And yes, you're right - Bella has to at least try to go on for the sake of her child.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar

i dont understand how he could be that down on himself for a minor injury.....then again he is emoward lol



Author's Response:

He is emoward.  And, on top of that, teenagers can make almost anything life-threateningly tragic if they try hard enough!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: srogers108 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever

What a wonderful story! I just found it and couldn't stop reading. I love the way you have developed the characters, they are really right on. I am glad that you gave a happy ending to Edward and Bella and I think it is just perfect the way it is. Congrats and hoping for many wonderful stories in the future!



Author's Response:

I wanted to keep the story as real as I could while still connecting it to the canon tale.  I'm glad this worked for you:)

And I'm a happy ending girl, so it had to end well!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 10:23 PM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s

I loved it, that is how I picture her!  I still crush on daddyward big time and I am not ready to let him go just yet (Thank God I can come back and read whenever I want) I am soooooooooo sad this story is almost over but I am thankful for the epiloges because we get to close all the doors one by one if that makes since cause I love knowing their HEA truly lasted!

Great writing and wonderful love story.  Just beautiful!  You are very talented, thanx for sharing!

Melissa



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!  ALas, the last one should be up any day now.  It was hard to let these guys go but it was time.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Edward_Loves_Bella_1988 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 09:20 PM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s

Oh, haha!~ Totally loved it! He so walked himself right into that one! Great job! Made me totally bust up laughing. <3



Author's Response:

He did walk straight into that one.  Poor guy didn't have a chance.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: blackbird 1959 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 08:45 PM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s

such a nice homely chapter ......................... just like life ..................

 



Author's Response:

I am glad it had a sense of home for you.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: grabadietcoke (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 08:29 PM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s

Okay - so this is by FAR my favorite of the epilogues. I really thought it was the last one, with Carlisle and Disneyland, but seeing the world through the next generation AT THAT AGE. Excellent! Loved loved loved all of the friends crushing on dad and grandpa. So freaking funny!



Author's Response:

I can imagine poor Elizabeth's sleepovers turning into stalking Dr. Daddy.  Poor kiddo!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 06:54 PM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s

After your review reply, I realized that it would be Elizabeth's pov.  She's quite amazing.  I love her snark.   Daddyward has turned into an amazing dad and quite possessive of his little girl.  I also love Bella, she really knows how to reason with Edward.  I don't know how I would feel seeing my parents tongue each other in public as Elizabeth had to endure, but that is all kinds of nice that they're still hot for one another.



Author's Response:

I imagine that Elizabeth exaggerated a bit as well.  I can't imagine Daddyward and Mrs. CUllen the English teacher NC-17 kissing in front of her students.  I imagine it was just affectionate and Elizabeth took that and ran.  But either way, I'm glad that these slightly older versions are still into each other as well:)

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: 17KCullen (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation

YOu have done an amazing job taking the original storyline and making it AH.  I am so impressed.  I love it.



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!  I tried to stay in the spirit of the canon story, but put a different spin on it...

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: pamirvine85 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 12:56 PM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s

that was great... love how her parents gross her out... and her friends think her dad is fuckhawt!!!! very funny



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!  I can only imagine how Elizabeth would feel about her parent's PDA at that age!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Hecate-Luna (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

ahh Jasper..

see? this stuff is so good its yet again got me screaming in frustration at this stupid computer.

touch screens, they sound so high-tech and out there then you just wanna smash it.

so yeah.. i just had to review, despite the touchy.

keep it up honey, sometimes you just need a bit o' Looney Tunes;)

Luna.

 



Author's Response:

He is looney tunes, but he's more perceptive than the rest, IMHO!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: arguien (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 11:35 AM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s

I loved Liz's POV. That was too cute. I couldn't stop laughing at all the comments her friends were making about the Cullen men. Damn, it brought tears to my eyes.



Author's Response:

It's nice to write comedy once in a while.  I had a vivid image of that scene in my head.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Hecate-Luna (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 34 - Deals

 awesome! iM totally in love with Jasper, and this  brings out that sexy  I-dont-give-two-shits  attitude/language which he needs more  in his fanfic, keep up the good work, in the story and building my dream man/men (winkwink)

 

p.s  this took ages to write, keyboardless touch computer 'not fun. Only good for  reading fabulous fanfic  till 3am.

p.s not being rude, but if you reply  I doubt ill be checking  any inboxes anytime  soon, so unless you  really just have to  don't bother

 

all, for now, Luna

:)



Author's Response:

I love writing Potty Mouth Jasper.  He's just how I envision the character in my warped mind.

Alas, it's a compunction to answer reviews.  I've answered every one, so I must keep going:)

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: bridesmaid (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 06:04 AM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s

Awww.  You still makes me smile and all with all these epilogues!  I love DADDYWARD and the Cougar Pen!  Naughty Mom-ella too!!



Author's Response:

Bella definitely knows how to get her way with Edward, and it's not always with a blush;)

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: jwcullen (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 05:14 AM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s

I have SO enjoyed this story! They truly are the perfect family. Great job.



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: susyq (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 04:01 AM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s

Lizzie is snarky and sassy and I like her! (the great Ho-Ho incident of 2024 ROFLOL)  And the names her friends came up with for Edward...that was hilarious! 

Thanks for sharing :)
~Susan



Author's Response:

Elizabeth is definitely a new breed of Cullen.  She has so many attributes from so many relatives, blood and not.  But she's a good girl and she does well by her parents.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: slayerjules (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 03:49 AM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s

:)



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: edwrdcu77enlover (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 04:19 PM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s

this one turned out very sweet and funny. Teenagers crushing on her grandpa? haha that was hilarious, even though Carlisle is hot. Though Edward is hotter yay!

I guess Elizabeth become a very mature girl cuz of the help and guidance of the cougar pen ha?

pretty gooood!



Author's Response:

Elizabeth became a very balanced girl.  A good girl, for the most part, but snarky and sassy enough not to put up with things she doesn't agree with and *with* a sense of humour.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Gidget (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 03:43 PM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s

I freaking love this family, I want to be adopted by them. Great job as always.



Author's Response:

LOL!  They're a pretty great family to belong to!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: elina (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 12:03 PM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s

nice!!! love u as ever!!!!

 

more to come?



Author's Response:

Just one more left.  It's in the queue now.  Make sure to read the A/N at the end!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 12:03 PM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s

I love how you brought Jake into the story.  He'll be perfect for Elizabeth.  Daddyward didn't stand a chance in the cougars den.  LOL   Can't wait for the ending.  Although I am very sad to see it end.



Author's Response:

I like Jake, as long as he's not with Bella:)  I am glad you like how I fit him in here...  Last chapter is now in queue.  Just remember to read the A/N at the end this time!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Lalaranya (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 10:02 AM · On: Prologue - Pretty and the Starlet

hehe no problem-and my friend has got a Twilighted account and she is reading this now! well, she was...

Omg new moon was out for me today (in England -.-) and i just finished watching it.....yer still recovering from gooey 'heeehheeee itss aammaaazziinngggggg' feeling......even though i've alredi watched it....wow.......lol

 



Author's Response:

I hope she didn't give up on it!  I'm grateful for your support!

Yes, I got mine Saturday and watched it same day.  Now I'm working my way through the special features....

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

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