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Reviewer: Mallers (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life
Oh my goodness it's so good! Update! Hurry!
Author's Response: Chaptet three is in queue! Hopefully, it will be out shortly! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: JessicaB923 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life
Please write more soon!
Author's Response: The next chapter is already in queue and should be up shortly! Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: kenziemorton (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life
oh that butt head edward! i know you will make him pay! i love it so far. how often do you update????? i hope be;;a is a good mommie.
Author's Response: I have quite a bit written, so I will update fairly often for now. Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: Sunfeathers (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life
Oh wow. That was so incredibly sad. You took the saddest part of the Twilight series (Edward leaving Bella) and made it even WORSE by adding a pregnancy. Yikes!
But gosh, I do love angst and I can take an ultra-angsty story if I know there's a HEA out there waiting for me at the end. :)
I sincerely hope Bella goes on to have a happy life and that when Edward ultimately returns he feels like crap for leaving her.
Looking forward to your next chapter!
Author's Response: Oh, they will all feel like crap, Edward especially. Seriously, they will all suffer for their choices. And there will be a happy ending. Unfortunately, there is far more angst before we get there. Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: cindy75 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life
wow .keep going please.....
Author's Response: More is on the way! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: RaeRae (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 11:23 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End
awesome! this is really good. keep writing
Author's Response: Next chapter should be up soon! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Melsie (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life
OK i'm a big girl I can admit I wept! Heartbreaking! Damn that asshat Edward!! oh and I cringed at her finding out she was pregnant at a KFC! ok well I giggled then cringed! Did she get some popcorn chicken before she left though? those are yummers lol =)
Can't wait to see how this plays out!
Melsie!
Author's Response: Lol! I know, right? Poor girl gets life altering news in a public toilet! And no chicken to boot! There is more angst to come. Next chapter should be out soon.
Reviewer: BrightEyes (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life
I feel so bad for Bella. It's so sad. I was crying by the end of the chapter, but seriously it's great. I love it and thanks for the monkeyman Emmett bot. :)
Keep up the great work. Can't wait to read more.
Amber
Author's Response: Aw, shucks! You deserve the bot! I know it is sad, but I think it will turn out ok. I think...
Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End
Poor, desperate Bella.
I didn't mean the STORY sucks. I mean, the situation sucks. Edward sucks.
And I hope the Cullens really, really PAY for what they did.
Author's Response: Thanks for the clarification:). For the record, if the story ever does suck, I need to hear it!
Yes, the situation is tragic all around. Trust me, they ALL suffer for this. I know it will not be enough for some and too much for others, but they do pay.
Again, thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: dancing_in_my_underwear (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life
I have really enjoyed this story so far. Keep up the good work!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad you are enjoying it!
Reviewer: thailighter (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life
chapter 2 -
The angst is killing me here.
I think I need a tissue *sniffs and wipes eyes* poor Bella. Stupid Edward.
I am excited though to imagine a little Edward or Bella running around ;)
cant wait for the next chapter...
keep up the good work!!!
-ty
Author's Response: Again, many thanks! Your reviews are definitely a huge confidence boost! I should have the next chapter up shortly.
Reviewer: thailighter (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End
chapter 1 -
brilliant, brilliant, brilliant, well written and the storyline looks very promising.
im so happy i've finally found a story that seems interesting enough to read past the first chapter
keep up the good work!!! :)
- ty
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the wonderful review! I certainly hope the rest of my chapters live up to the first!
Reviewer: bryantjess (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life
AMAZING, AMAZING, AMAZING! I love it! I usually don't read anything that isn't at least 10 chapters long when I find it, but I couldn't pass this up; and you def. didn't dissappoint! Thanks!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! What a great review! I tend to only read fics that are further along as well, but I am so glad you took a chance!
Reviewer: kARLOTITA09 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life
Poor Bella, this breaks my heart, if it gets worse but then it was to come to a point where it can only get better right?
anyways... im very curious to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Alas, it will get worse but you are right. Eventually, it will have no choice but to get better. Hmm, how long will it take me to get to that point?
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: angiepie02 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life
Oh please update. This sounds like is going to be an amazing story. Please update as soon as you can!
Author's Response: I am so glad you liked it! The next chapter should be up shortly.
Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: Beautiful_Distraction (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life
Hey Girly!
Wow!!! I am floored...I feel so bad for Bella, but Edward is going to be reeling when he finds out she's pregnant and he left her! OMG! I love it and it just keeps getting better! Thanks for the Dimple Edward Bot!!! I can definitely have a good time with him! :) LOL!! Great story, Girly!! I will talk to you soon!
Author's Response: You are completely welcome for the Bot:) Hopefully, he will live up to his potential!
Thanks for the review! I hope I live up to all of the great reviews I am getting here! I wrote the chapter(s) when Edward is ... informed... of the situation and cried while writing them. I only hope they get a good reaction here.
Thanks again!
Reviewer: flute_genevive (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life
Oh man, it just keeps getting better!
I absolutely adored the way you worked the New Moon dialogue in, and I have to admit that I'm a bit masochistic and so enjoy reading angst stories that rip my heart out...meaning that I'm in for the long haul with this.
This is quickly moving past great into the land of glorious and beyond.
Author's Response: Wow. And could I say wow again?
Thank you for this amazing review. I am grateful for your love of angst (because this story is full of it!) and for your amazing review. I got the warm fuzzies!
Next chapter should be up soon.
Reviewer: flute_genevive (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End
Holy...beejesus.
Um...powerful, epic, beautiful, chilling. How's that?
If you can't tell, I loved it. There were a few times when I thought that the word choice was a little awkward (I think there was an "Even still" in there somewhere that I would have changed to "Even now"), but it didn't detract from it at all.
I thought that your continuous voice, the way you maintained the same essence, really made the time-shifting workable. Great job! I'm moving to chapter two now!
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much for the incredibly thoughtful review. I appreciate your constructive critique so much. I am glad it moved you and truly hope you continue to enjoy the story!
Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life
oh so sad...please ud soon
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! Next chapter should be up soon!
Reviewer: Edward_Bella_Nessie (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life
this is so sad. but really good.
plz update soon.
Author's Response: I am truly glad you enjoyed it. I wish I could give you an end to the sadness, but, alas, not yet!
Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: STONERMOL68 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life
I am loving the start of the new story. What I really like about your writing is how you are using Bella's voice. Sometimes when I read a story, I get stuck with the pacing of the dialogue- you really do this very well. Plus- I am totally intrigued with the start of your plot. Glad to hear you finished this- I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you for the feedback! I tried to write all the characters from what they think and feel, rather than just describe them. I am glad you are enjoying it. There will be several more voices in the chapters to come.
Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: Twilight_fan_girl (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life
I...omg...that's so sad! Must...not....cry...too....late xD This is a good set up btw will be looking forward to the rest.
You rock xox
Author's Response: :::hands you tissue:: Sorry you cried! I hope you like the rest of the tale, even if there are more tears to come!
Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: starcrossdlover (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life
i like where this is going...even though i don't know exactly where that is...looking forward to reading more :)
Author's Response: LOL! Well, even I am not sure completely of where it's going, but it shall go! Hopefully, it will be a satisfying place for us all!
Thank you for the review.
Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life
Well, that sucks. I don't think I can read this anymore. How low is Bella going to sink, pregnant and alone?
As for Edward, he needs to be shot. Please don't have her forgive him for what he did the instant he comes back. NONE of the Cullens deserve forgiveness without some sort of effort on their part.
Author's Response: I am sorry that you felt that it sucked. That wasn't what I was going for! I also hope you will continue to read the story and find the justice that you hope will be served.
As for the Cullens, they do suffer. Trust me on that one. Effort to make this right will abound, and even then, may not be enough.
I truly hope you stay with the story and that you, in the end, enjoy where it goes.
Thank you for reviewing.
Reviewer: oceanwaters2006 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 08:45 AM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life
*cries* This chapter is ever so sad. *sighs* But I do love this story so so much!! :)
Silly Edward leaving Bella....GAH....sooo sad that he doesn't know what it does to her. :(
Thanks for the mad props woman!! You know I loveth that Jasper!Bot!! LMAO!!
*hugs*
XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO
Jess
Author's Response: Seriously Silly Edward! If he only knew what he did to her, right? You know it only gets sadder from here....
You know you will always have the Jasper!Bot and the mad props in my mind:) Thank you for all you do!
And thank you for the review!!!
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