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Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 10:56 AM · On: Epilogue the Final - Full Circle

I loved it. Jake passing out in the delivery room made me laugh. I never pictured Jake to be like that.



Author's Response:

LOL!  I know, right?  That actually happened to the father in the operating suite next door when I was having C-Section with my first child.  Thankfully, my son's delivery was much more like Masen's in the story....

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: FanNan46 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 10:45 AM · On: Epilogue the Final - Full Circle

Thank you for ending it in a most delightful way!!  It has been a terrific journey with this Cullen family and I appreciate all the love, blood, sweat & tears you poured into your writing.  You are a talented writer and I look forward to more from you in the future!

THANK YOU!!!  :)



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it and, truly, it was my distinct pleasure.  My mind runs CONSTANTLY, so I'm sure it won't be long before more starts to dribble out....

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: BeyondDreams19 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 10:44 AM · On: Epilogue the Final - Full Circle

Beautiful story - thank you for writing this and allowing us to experience this journey with Edward/Bella.  Much congradulations on baby number two :D



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!  It was definitely a journey of my heart!

Many thanks on Tater Tot the second!  It was hard not saying anything before this!

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 10:39 AM · On: Epilogue the Final - Full Circle

Ahhh, beautiful ending.  :)  I've gone all teary and I am glad.  Births are good. 

 

Thank you again for this amazing story.  It's been a heartbreaker in so many ways, but you've balanced everything wonderfully and I've enjoyed seeing everyone do their thing.

 

Thanks for taking the time you did with this tale and for the heart you've displayed herein.  :)

 



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!  I thought the birth was an appropriate place to bring the story back into itself.  Your kind comments mean the world to me.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: wendygirl47 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation

Enjoying your writing....Go Alice Go!



Author's Response:

I know it's a different style.  I'm glad you like it.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: wendygirl47 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 09:17 AM · On: Prologue - Pretty and the Starlet

Nice start.  :)



Author's Response:

I hope you enjoy where it goes from here:)

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 08:16 AM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s

This whole story has been amazing, but this chapter cracked me up. It was awesome! I will miss it, but I plan to read it again and again. I will watch for the last epilogue, but after that you have a new mission.

You are charged to "go forth and start another awsome story"!

Thank you for this one.



Author's Response:

LOL!  The last chapter is up now:)  There are some announcements in the a/n....

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: ObessedMama (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 07:42 PM · On: Epilogue the Sixth - World of Magic

LOL!!!!!  I loved this and could not stop laughing!!



Author's Response:

I love to write Carlisle:)

 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: ObessedMama (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 07:17 PM · On: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso

Perfect!!!

 

 



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: ObessedMama (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever

I started this story last night and just finished.  I love this story so very much!  I absolutely loved Rosalie's POV but my favorite had to be Jasper's.  I can't wait to read the epilouges!



Author's Response:

I think Potty Mouth Jasper has his own fan club:)

 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 02:31 PM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s

can't wait for more



Author's Response:

The last chapter just went up...

 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: seanin (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls

please let bella be ok!



Author's Response:

It will all be okay in the end.  Hang in there!

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: KimmieB (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 09:16 AM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s

I love how all of Elizabeth's friends are falling over Edward and Emmett.  I can also see how uncomfortable it would be for Elizabeth.  You are right, Edward did not stand a chance in the cougar den, especially when second chances were mentioned.  I think Elizabeth is turning into a great girl.  Yes, she has a little bit of teenage rebellion in her but she seems to be grounded and have a good head on her shoulders.  It is sad that it is almost over but I have enjoyed the ride very much.



Author's Response:

I think Elizabeth is a fairly normal teen.  A good girl, but no angel.  What real teen girl is?  At least none I know (and I certainly wasn't)!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: wazzoes (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 12:22 AM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s

Brilliant couldn,t wait to finish the lot was gripped from the start.



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Blkjklady21 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 37 - Don't Give Up

Crying again. 



Author's Response:

There are some tough chapters in there....

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Blkjklady21 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls

I just started reading your story, I tend to only read stories that are finished.  And all I can say is WOW.  I just finished Chapter 30, Little Girls and I couldn't stop crying.  The love you have written into this chapter was amazing.  I hope that you are seriously considering a career in writing.  I read a lot of fan fic and this has been by far the most powerful that I have read to date.  I will probably end up staying up all night to read the rest of the story and know that I will not be disapointed.  Please don't stop writing.

A Fan



Author's Response:

Wow.  I don't know that I have received such an amazing compliment before.  I very much appreciate it.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: april09 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 09:19 PM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s

Ellie--

Elizabeth is so sweet!  Love all the squick factor for her with her friends' reactions to her dad...I mean really, he is so young, likely 35-36 here (my age), so of course they're swooning over him!  LOL at his reaction to Bella in her robe, trying (and succeeding) to distract him.  Oh to have this in EPOV too!

Great outtake!

--Melanie



Author's Response:

Yup - he'd be about 35 here (actually younger than me!) so I'm sure he's still totally a Hottie McHotterson and definitely still easily swayed by his wife in her barely there robe.  Go Bella who can wear the pants without wearing any:)

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: sorelle (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 06:08 PM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s

I can't believe this is almost over! I have to go and cry in the corner now. = (



Author's Response:

You and me both!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Mi_Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 05:50 PM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s

Awww... loved Elizabeth... she is so cute... and hey, who wouldn't be like her friends if you saw a daddyward like that, huh??? gotta love a hot and older daddyward!! lol   great chapter!!



Author's Response:

Who could blame her friends indeed, but I bet it's tough for poor Elizabeth!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: stephyc (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 05:31 PM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s

Really great story.  I loved how you said it isn't a regular narrative, but different character's feelings and observations.  I liked your style, even if at times the dialoge seemed too formal.  Great story, great characterization.  I loved it!



Author's Response:

Well, the story is canon-based and Edward, as well as Carlisle, often use stilted and formal speech so that carried to this story.  It was a concious choice.  I'm glad you have enjoyed it!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 

Reviewer: lmpeel (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 10:22 AM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s

this kept me up till 7:30am.  Incredible and awesome story.  The character develoepment and the POV are awesome.  Really loved me some Jasper in this one too.  The girls at the end are hilarious.  I am just starting to get into this with my girls and my PDA's with their dad.  LOL  Again, awesome story, definitely on my list of fav's 



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it and appreciate you giving the story a chance!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals

awww charlie is a great dad



Author's Response:

He's definitely a good guy.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

love jasper!



Author's Response:

He's definitely his own man!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: MEL24FAN (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 03:26 AM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s

Sorry for my late review.  I read it on my phone as soon as I got the alert but couldn't review for some reason.  This epi was so cute and fun.  I love the banter btw Elizabeth and her friends.  Oh my and Edward not liking Jake was perfect and the Cullen women coming to his defense.  I am so sad there is only one epi left but I'm sure chubward is happy that he won't have to be sharing all the ladies with daddyward anymore. lol.



Author's Response:

Don't apologize, darlin!  I'm just grateful for the support!  I'm sure Chubward will be happy with the extra attention, now that I'm done writing Daddyward!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls

That was so beautiful....i loved edwards conversation with his daughter and charlies pov....i really hope he can forgive and love edward as a son someday like carlisle does bella....that would be nice for edward...cant wait for the happy ending



Author's Response:

You'll definitely see how those relationships turn out!

 

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