Reviewer: lexiecullen17 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
i am thoroughly enjoying this story. im usually not one for the new moon-esque stories (edward leaving is just cruel), but this one is so different -- i love it :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much. It is cruel, I know. I hope to make the angst all worth it though! Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
This is so SAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I know, and there is so much more angst to come. Just trust I believe in happy endings. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: twilightsagafan (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
so sad I want Alice to find her now and get the family back together please update I am dying and I want to know what will happen next. Have I said I love this story yet?
Author's Response: Four is in the queue right now!
So glad you are liking it!
Reviewer: twilightsagafan (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life
Ah so sad but I'm glad she wants to keep edwards baby even though she may never see him again. I don't get why she didn't just tell him she was pregnant though. love your story and can't wait for more chapters in the future.
Author's Response: I hope sincerely you understand a little more as the chapters progress. I don't necessarily agree with any of the decisions any of them make in this, but they make sense to *them* when they made them. Obviously, they will all regret some of those decisions later in the story.
Thank you for reading and the next chapter should be up soon!
Reviewer: numberedheartbeats17 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
I love this story please update soon
Author's Response: The chapter is queue! Hopefully soon!
Reviewer: heathern (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
good story! but is it necessary to space out so far?
Author's Response: You mean the spaces between the paragraph? In text, they are not that wide. It is something about the way it copies here. I apologize if it detracts. Thank you for reviewing.
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
Wow! I can't wait to read more.. Please update soon..
Author's Response: Thank you! Next chapter is in queue, so it'll be up soon!
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 04:25 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
Interesting... I really look forward to seeing where you go with this.
Author's Response: Thank you. I truly hope you follow along for the ride!
Reviewer: effward (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 03:26 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
I am so loving this story. Great Job! Cannot wait until the next chapter!
Author's Response: I am so glad you're enjoying the story.
Next chapter is in queue and shouold be up soon!
Reviewer: Emerald_Rosalie (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
I love Alice!!! I love her hard!!!
And you too!!!
It still gets me, even after I've read it!
Heartbreaking and yet so addictive!
Love it!
Author's Response: Aw, me loves you too! Enough to make you a Carlisle!Bot with an ass on/off switch. Hot Damn:)
Seriously, thank you for all the love and support.
Reviewer: Edward_Bella_Nessie (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
o my gosh! this edward is depressing. plz update soon. i love this story.
Author's Response: The whole story is kinda depressing. Definite angst warning. But that will make the resolution all the happier:)
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Steelerfan (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
hmmm
Author's Response: Hmm is interesting. Which part is hmmm?
Reviewer: lovelikethemovies (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End
Well, yes! A very stunned, happy-with-the-chapter "oh my!"
Author's Response: Well I hope to cause that reaction many more times! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: cindy75 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
keep gping please !!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! Next chapter should be up soon.
Reviewer: lovelikethemovies (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
Oh, my!
Author's Response: I hope that is good!
Reviewer: tmacdon552 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
I am hooked! Update soon!
Author's Response: Yay! I am so glad you are enjoying it!
Reviewer: Tasty1 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
I love it. Keep it coming......
Author's Response: Thank you! I plan to submit tonight. I appreciate the review.
Reviewer: flea (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 04:42 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
Not going to lie, the main reason I started reading is because your penname made me laugh. And now instead I'm sitting in the computer lab of my uni, trying not to cry. Awesome.
I really like the way you've rewritten NM with them as humans. And I desperately want to know what happened to Jasper. And I want to pûnch Edward in the face. Yay, violence. Yay, angst.
Author's Response: Lol! I love your honesty!
I am sorry to make you teary but regret to inform you it gets much sadder. All for a reason, though.
Also, you will get more info on Jasper and Edward will, indeed, get punched both metaphorically and literally.
So glad you decided to read and review.
Reviewer: BonneOri (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 04:05 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
I have been desperately waiting for the next update of this wonderful story and I was not disappointed.
Going with an Alice POV was the perfect choice. Alice is one of the best members of the Cullen family (followed by Emmett of course) and she would be the one who would get the story really rolling.
I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: If anyone can organize a rescue and gather the troops, it is Alice! She is going to get one heck of a helper in the next chapter as well! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Sunfeathers (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 12:55 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
You're doing great! You've built up the suspense so wonderfully. I loved hearing Alice's take on this and I'm so glad she's found out what Bella did. Now, will she find her?
Author's Response: Ah, but even more specifically, will she find her in time?
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
Wow, this story has total got me. I sure hope Alice finds her. What has Bella been doing this whole time?
Author's Response: Bella has been no more than existing. To be honest, there will only be glimpses into the pair's lives during the separation, but really all one needs to know is they are not living at all. Just in survival mode.
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: BrightEyes (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
This is another great chapter. I love Emmett and how he's not willing to hold anything back. You are doing an awesome job keep it up. Can't wait to read more.
hugs,
amber
Author's Response: Thanks! Emmett is a bit of comic relief in the story, but he almost plays the role of the reader in that he questions every decision and points out the flaws. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: BrightEyes (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
This is another great chapter. I love Emmett and how he's not willing to hold anything back. You are doing an awesome job keep it up. Can't wait to read more.
hugs,
amber
Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
AAhhh its getting very interesting!! Im so excited about this story!
Author's Response: I am so glad you are excited! The next chapter should be up soon.
Reviewer: thailighter (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
Chapter 3 -
Another great chapter and it was also really great to see the other sides view.
i'm looking forward to more chapters.
i have to admit i did cry in this chapter when i thought of what Edward and his family are going through, or course then i thought about Bella and had to get a whole new box. Your such a great writer and you really do paint a picture in my mind and evoke strong motions with your words.
keep up the good work!!!
- ty
Author's Response: Thank you so much for this! I am really trying to write it from an emotional perspective. I want the reader to feel the havoc caused to every character by the tragic choices made. I am so appreciative of your thoughtful review!
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