Reviewer: anabella (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: seattlegirl (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
I really like hearing Angela's perspective and appreciate that you are telling the story so many different voices. I look forward to more!
Author's Response: Thank you! There are more voices to come and they all have different perspectives.
Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
I am sooo glad angela is there to take care of bella and hopefully she will be helping her out more and more as the baby is on its way. I hope she finds some way to contact alice so edward can come and save her. Great chapter and even better fic!!! love it!
Author's Response: Angela is such a good friend to Bella and truly saves her many times in this story. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
I love alice in every story I have ever read...that i probably because alice is always so bouncy and full of life in every story...it even shines through in this story with her determination to bring her family back together. Awesome chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! Alice is an integral part of this story and her persistence pays off!
Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life
ugh edward has to always be sooo...ugh! lol but i like "emoward" that cracked me up. I love this story! I hope you continue to update fast!
Author's Response: Edward just has a very black and white view of right and wrong. He is terrified of how much he loves her and us scared of ruiining her. Does that make his decisions right? No. But they make sense to him. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End
wow!!! This is an interesting story but that is not all that caught my eye.The way you write is beautiful! It is mesmerizing and it seems as though you could sm herself!
Author's Response: Now that is an amazing compliment! Thank you so much. I hope you continue to enjoy!
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
Yes, Angela, go find Edward and Alice!
Author's Response: Hmm... But is that who she finds? Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
I'm sooooo glad that I found this story...such a great twist on the New Moon story...and I can't wait to see how you have it all play out!
I'm offically hooked! :)
Author's Response: I am so glad you found this story and took the time to review! Thanks!
Reviewer: Emerald_Rosalie (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
I love this chapter, Angela rocks! She is such a good friend to Bella!
I love, love, love this.
Have I said I love this enough?
Damn.
It ROCKS!
Author's Response: Girl, YOU rock! Thanks so much for the support!
Reviewer: TwilaEveningStar (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
I normally don't read stories where Bella gets knocked up, but this one seemed to have caught my interest. It's really heartbreaking to see how alone Bella is especially when she's pregnant. I hope she can get her one love back though or maybe even find someone else to love her. I'm always up for a nice love triangle.
*wink*wink*
Author's Response: You know, the story actually has little to do with Bella's pregnancy, except in how it informs her decisions and reflects others. There are not likely to be any triangles, but I think you will be satisfied in the end! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Meikela (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
I really love this story so far. I think you have created a great foundation for what I know will be a very interesting tale. You have a way of translating the emotions of the characters to the reader in a very realistic and honest manner. I really appreciate your talent and am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
Author's Response: This review means the world to me as that is EXACTLY what I am trying to do. I want people to be emotionally invested. The story is about the character's emotions even more than their plot lines. I am glad you realize and enjoy that.
Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
Edward's a big ninny...so I'm guessing he's worse off...if that's even possible...
Author's Response: You got that right. Thank you. Edward is far worse off....
Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
oh will they meet before the baby is born?? atleast alice??
Author's Response: Do you really want me to answer? I can, but I am not sure you want me too.....
Reviewer: latinabeauty70 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 11:51 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
Wow! Amazing amazing writing. My hear aches. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you. I've already submitted the next chapter!
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
I'm glad Angela found her and wouldn't let her go.
Makes me sniffle though. Angela promised not to tell Charlie or Reene, but she didn't say anything about telling Ben...
Author's Response: ... or the Cullens. But she had to do what she had to do to make Bella trust her so that she can help her. This entire story is about decisions. Some of them better than others.
Thank you for reviewing.
Reviewer: Lesmere09 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
again it hurt my heart. but it was a pretty darn good chapter
=]
Author's Response: Again, i am sorry for hurting you. At least the fact that I can evoke feelings means the world. Stay with me.
Reviewer: secamimom (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
I just found this story tonight and I loved it! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Next chapter is already submitted. It will be soon. Be angst ridden all the same. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Lesmere09 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life
damn, that hurt my heart
Author's Response: I am sorry. I know it hurts, but I hope I make it worth it in the end. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: absoluteTE (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
Ahh cant wait for more :)
Author's Response: Soon, love, soon!
Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
So sad...This is a very sad story but I'm hooked on it...please ud soon
Author's Response: I sent another chapter for validation tonight. It stays sad for quite a long time, but there is a happy ending...
Reviewer: runner28 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
these poor kids.
Reviewer: runner28 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
these poor kids.
Reviewer: runner28 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
these poor kids.
Author's Response: Thank you for recognizing that it truly is tragic all around. I appreciate your review.
Reviewer: BonneOri (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
Perfect update. I loved the inclusion of Angela and the insight into Bella's life. I'm glad that you moved the story along several months and that Bella now has someone to talk to.
I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Time is definitely not linear in the first half of this fic. Hopefully, the time cues will keep it from being too confusing. Once we have seen almost every point of view, they will start to converge. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: oceanwaters2006 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
AHHHHHHHH!!!! *cries* This is such a sad chapter when Angela finds Bella!!
*grabs six thousand tissues*
And the part about the only new things in her apartment being the crib and lambie!! Seriously!! The tears pour!! I don't know why, but that part really gets me.
I love this fic so much and I am so honored to beta it...seriously! HONORED!!
Love ya girlie, and another bot upgrade?? WEEE!! hehehehehe
XOXOXOXOXOOXOXO Jess
Author's Response: And most of these poor folks don't even realize that the real angst has yet to come!
You rock out so hard love! Fixing all my mess ups without complaint! I am grateful every day for putting up with me.
Maybe I'll just make you an Emmett!Bot to go with your Jasper!Bot and you can make a sandwich!
Hugs, girl!
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