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Reviewer: Alyxandria (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
So excited to see an update - it seems Alice & Angela both have their hands full with those two.
Looking forward to more!
-Alyx
Author's Response: I know, right? The poor A girls have much to do....
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
Oh come on..............You can't leave Bella alone and pregnant with nothing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: You are completely correct. But if I went straight to the happy ending, it wouldn't be much of a story. Bare with me and I hope it will be worth it!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Lacey0186 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
I really hope Alice finds Bella or Angela contacts Alice.
I don't think these 2 can take much more.
Author's Response: Hmmm... who do you think will find whom? I can say it probably won't be who you expect...
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Dragon81 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
Hello, I just discovered this story the other day but haven't been able to post a review because I was reading on an iPhone and typing on them is slightly difficult. I think this story is very interesting. It flips New Moon on it's head and yet manages to stay interesting which some New Moon fics don't achieve.
I really liked the last chapter in Angelas voice. She's not one that we hear from often so it's really cool to see a fic that includes her. Keep up the good work and I'll look forward to reading the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! This review means the world to me. I tried very hard to make the story relate to the characters and plot line without having them stagnate. I appreciate your kind words and the fact you reviewed!
Reviewer: BrightEyes (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
I know Edward done this to himself but I still feel bad for him. I think it would be hard to make the decision he did.
Great job girl, keep it up.
Amber
Author's Response: Thank you. I don't expect anyone to let Edward off the hook, but I do want people to see that this is a choice he honestly felt he had to make and he is, and will continue to, pay dearly. Thanks for reviewing, dear heart!
Reviewer: Edward11 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
please update soon...
Author's Response: I hope to submit either tonight or Friday. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: absoluteTE (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
Really love your story!!
Author's Response: Thank you! Thank you even more for reviewing!
Reviewer: runner28 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
poor stubborn guy.
Author's Response: That is it in a nutshell. He is so convinced that this was morally right that he is willing to suffer indefinitely. Makes you want to kick him and hug him at once!
Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
so sad but really good ud soon
Author's Response: Thank you. I will submit either tonight or Friday!
Reviewer: numberedheartbeats17 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
This was a good chapter and I liked how you showed us both sides but I want Alice to find Bella now. I want them to be there before the baby is born. All this waiting is killing me. Anyways, love the story and keep the updates going. Please.
Author's Response: It is a long wait before Edward finds out, but I hope what happens in the meantime is worth it. Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: secamimom (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
I loved it! My heart breaks for Edward. Thank goodness you believe in HEA though. That gives me hope.
Author's Response: A lot of folks thought he could never suffer enough. Trust me, he will. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Sunfeathers (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
Oh my gosh. These two are just so miserable without each other. I'm glad you've assured us of a HEA because this is so SAD!
Great chapter, though - can't wait for the next.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review! Yeah, they are two lost souls. Eventually, there will be a happy ending.
Reviewer: venomousgal (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
Edward needs to pull himself together, re-attach his testicles and get on with it. It hurts, yes, but he is the one who made the decision to leave her. I know he loves her, but now he is making not only him, but his family pay for his deceit. Either man up or go get the damn girl!
This chapter made me feel, and that's good writing Ellie! I can't wait until he finds out about her pregnancy! He is going to have kittens......
This chapter was better than nutella covered Cullen boys....
*high five*
Tammy
Author's Response: You rock out, Tammy! Thank you for reviewing.
I agree. He needs to either go get her or someone needs to grab him by the junk and drag him back. Alas, this is Edward and decisions are black and white.
Methinks he needs a little gray!
Reviewer: VampireInTraining (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
You're driving me crazy here pomme_de_terre, honestly and truly crazy. Edward -sigh- Edward Edward Edward what am i going to do with you.
Author's Response: So many people thought he would move on and he is more stuck than Bella in many ways. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: VampireInTraining (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
I cried... I cried a lot... This is so sad. Edward needs to get his head out of his ass, and save his kid and Bella.
Author's Response: Yes, Edward made quite a horrid mistake. We will hear from him in the next chapter and see how he is fairing.
Reviewer: LisaLoo (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
Oh Angela, what a great friend. I'm glad she is going to stick her nose in where Bella doesn't think it belongs. Thanks for sharing your story. I can't wait for the Edward update.
Author's Response: You should hear from Edward very shortly. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: tisaveeone (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 01:17 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
I like this one a lot. I like the flow...the pacing is really good. I feel movement in each chapter so far, and that is something that keeps me entertained in fanfics. Keep going because you have the makings of something really nice here. Just don't do anything crazy like turn them all into vampires in the middle of the story...I'm still trying to recover from the last story that did that to me.
Great stuff I don't even have to think twice about adding you to my favs list!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! No zany plot twist, I promise. Just an angsty story! I appreciate the review.
Reviewer: Sunfeathers (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
Angela is an angel, and I can't wait to see what changes she might bring to Bella's life.
Looking forward to EPOV - I think. I hope he has been miserable without her. I hope he has not "moved on."
Reviewer: Sunfeathers (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
Angela is an angel, and I can't wait to see what changes she might bring to Bella's life.
Looking forward to EPOV - I think. I hope he has been miserable without her. I hope he has not "moved on."
Author's Response: Ask and you shall receive. The next chapter, which is Edward POV, is in queue and you should see it soon. I think you'll be surprised...
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: twilightsagafan (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
I read the chapter again and I love it even more than I did the first time around, glad to hear that the next chapter has already been written and submitted, I can't wait. Thanks for responding to my previous reviews.This is currently my favorite story on the site.
Author's Response: Wow! There is no greater compliment than that. Thank you dearly! I have written through 23, so hopefully I will be able to update regularly.
Reviewer: Beautiful_Distraction (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
Hey Ellie!!
WOW, girly! You're amazing! I absolutely love this angst fest and rock on to Angela! Great job! You deserve every review! I promised to review and you can bet, I'll be here waiting anxiously for the next one! Awesome story, girly! Thanks for the shout-out! You rock!
XOXO
-Whitney
Author's Response: Thanks, sweet! I am so glad you are reading and enjoying!
Reviewer: Alyxandria (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
I'm glad you brought Angela in. This is great. So angsty & entertaining!
-Alyx
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Angela is pivotal in the story and truly is the hero. I appreciate the review!
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
Oh.My.Goodness! I loved this chapter. I love Angela and can't wait to read more about Bella and the Cullens.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! Angela is so important to the story from here on in. You will see a lot of this tragedy throug her eyes.
Reviewer: AngelicPegasus (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 05:52 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
I'm almost in tears, poor Bella. Hell, poor Alice, Jasper, even Edward (though he brought it on himself). Hope Alice finds her soon, before the baby is born. Great job!
Author's Response: You will hear from all of them and it is truly tragic. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: dancing_in_my_underwear (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
OMG poor Bella! I'm glad she has Angela to comfort and help her! Lovely, sweet and moving chapter. :)
Author's Response: There are so many destroyed people in this story. Angela is such a savior to her at this point. Thank you for reviewing!
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