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Reviewer: thailighter (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life
Finally!!! I can review. I have been going crazy since chapter 4 came out because my ipod touch wouldnt let me review and our main computer died.
Anyways...
Its very very rare to see Angelas POV on stories, it was a great change and I'm so glad bella has such a great friend to look after her. It was a very touching chapter!
Im going to re-read chapter five now so expect another review very very soon!!!
-ty
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! Angela is integral to this story and you will be hearing from her quite a bit!
Reviewer: numberedheartbeats17 (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End
Love the story
Update please, I need to know what happens next
I feel like I've been deprived
More please
Author's Response: There are 5 chapters up and 6 is in queue! Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: DebBee (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
I feel sad for Edward, but more than that I feel mad at him for being so blind and stupid. Either he doesn't have much faith in Bella's love for him or he is too selfishly lost in his own pain and regret to realize that he willfully sent them -both- to that purgatory, and like Alice said...if he would have actually listened..."she's probably more hurt now"...and this isn't an accident. Grrrr...pigheaded, tunnelvision males drive me nuts...and Emoward is ranking among the worst...lol. It sucks when people suffer from things that are beyond their control, but even worse when they bring it on theirselves...and others. Ok,I'm getting off my soapbox now...lol. It just means that you are doing a very good job if you can get me so riled up because I'm that involved in your story. Thanks for posting! :)
Author's Response: I am glad for the rant! It definitely means I am doing this right. I completely agree with feeling both mad and sad with Edward. He did this and he can fix this, but he is too lost to do it right now. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
Great story!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 10:38 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
I feel as though I am in Peter Pan repeating "I do believe in happy endings" instead of faries. ;)
Thank you for the insightful view into Edwards life right now. I look forward to the next update.
Author's Response: Lol! I know it's nearly impossible to believe! Hang on your fairy dust and stick with me!
Reviewer: oceanwaters2006 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
Ah Vey....Edward...how he makes me want to cry and slap him all at once.
Where is Jasper to hand that boys balls over when you need him? LMAO!
Love it bb!! And Love you!! You know I love betaing this story and having you as an awesome friend!! You're the bestest!!
*huge hugs*
XOXOXOXOXOXOOXXO Jess
(Emmett!Bot too? You spoil me! hehehehehehe)
Author's Response: Aw shuck, thanks! Your awesomeness grows every day! And now you're helping me with real life! You so rock!
Many hugs!
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
Yup, Edward is totally losing it, as he should be! Now he needs to stop wallowing in self pity and go find his woman before it's too late!
Author's Response: He's a broken man now and will be no use to her until he is fixed. Still, I think he still has it in him!
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
Love it...love it...love it!!!
Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying it!
Reviewer: CT Twilight Fan (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 02:11 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
I really am enjoying this story. Poor Bella, but at least Angela is now there with her. I just hope that Alice can step in and find her.
Update soon.
Author's Response: We hear from Bella and Angela in the next chapter. It is beginning to come together now! Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: tisaveeone (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 01:22 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
Oh this is so frustrating. This two have to be soul mates cause they are the king and queen of overreaction. I see why SM said she would never write BD from Edwards POV, this one little chapter of yours was hard to read, I can't image almost a whole book of this level of dispair.
Alice can't wait for him to come around. She's going to have to force his hand the same way he forced theirs.
You say it only gets worst...holy smokes I'm going to need to be medicated to read more of edwards sorrow. You're really getting me emotionally invested in this story, and that's a good thing.
Author's Response: I truly am sorry for your sadness but you are right. If you can feel it, I must be doing something right! It does get harder, but it also begins to come together, so there is hope. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: lexiecullen17 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 12:44 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
this hurts so much to read, but i can't stop it. i must be a massochist. i'm really enjoying it, despite how painful it is to read.
Author's Response: Aw! Just think, it will make the ending even sweeter! Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: dancing_in_my_underwear (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 12:26 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
Oh this chapter was so sad. :( Poor Edward... Written beautifully my dear. Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you. I am glad it was written well enough that one can feel his loss and remorse, even if he brought it upon himself. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
Alice is trying to pull him out of it, but it's so hard to get out of that kind of pain.
I wonder how he will react when he finds out she went missing the day he left...
Author's Response: He is so deeply gone, it will take a miracle to pull him out. Then again, I think we have one of those! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Melsie (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
GAH So I hesitantly have to say that I do sympathize, (a teeny tiny amount) with Edward in spite of the pain he has caused Bella. I didn't want to, I wanted to revel in his heart ache but I just couldn't! Damn you for making me feel compassion for his pain, even though it was completely self inflicted!!
=)
Melsie!
Author's Response: I know! I am a meanie. It was easier to hate Edward abjectly for what he did, but seeing a little more about why and the consequences make him harder to hate. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
I am going to be so ready for that happy ending you keep talking about it wont be funny! Anyway...great chapter and story!
Author's Response: I know! I am sorry. Just stick with me and it will be worth it. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
Oh poor Edward. Why can't he see reason?? It gets worse? ugh...my heart.
Author's Response: Well, it gets sadder, but, strangely, it makes more (tragic) sense as we go. Again, there will be a happy ending. But there's a lot of angst to get through first.
Thank you SO much for reviewing.
Reviewer: Edward_Bella_Nessie (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
this so sad... but really good! plz update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you! Next up is Bella and Angela....
Reviewer: KBfan (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
Edward is so miserable... When will all this suffering stop... great job... please keep writing
Author's Response: I wish I could say it was just around the corner, but there is so much suffering left to do. And so much hope...
Thank you for reviewing.
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
wow, this was hearbreaking :( I feel so bad for Edward. He is so masochistic isn't he? You wrote his pain well.
Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you. Yes, he is a sick, masochistic, lion isn't he? Poor guy. But he does have to pay for the mistakes he made, as does everyone else who made a poor choice in this story.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: latinabeauty70 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
I jumped in my seat! You made me so happy with the update! Great chapter and my favorite line was “No, Edward. You grieve,” she said simply. “For someone that doesn't have to be gone.”.
That broke my heart. More please!
Author's Response: Alice has a good grip on Edward, hunh? I am glad you liked that line. It was a tough one to write.
Next up, our poor Bella. Hopefully, I'll submit tonight, but Friday at the latest.
Thank you for the review.
Reviewer: LisaLoo (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End
Poor, broken Edward. What an idiot. I love it. Thank you for the angst and sweetness. If I wasn't enjoying the story soooo much I would ignore your updates for a few chapters and then catch up all at once when the skies are a bit sunnier for E/B. However, I'm hooked. According to your story notes, the seas are going to get rougher. Oh, the anxiety, but I will still read the next chapter as soon as it is up. Thanks for sharing your talent!
Author's Response: Aw, hun! This is an angst-fest! The skies will be stormy for chapters to come, but I'd like to think that will make the resolution all the sweeter.
Thank you for hanging in there with me and for your wonderful review!
Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
oh can edward be working ( or student or something) at the hospital bella goes to have the baby... ha ha hah that would be funny
Author's Response: That's a thought! Alas, not quite the direction this is going. Still, very interesting idea!
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
Aw, Edward...you silly, stupid boy! I can see where he's coming from by wanting to protect her...but dude you're miserable!!! I'm sooo glad that Alice tried to talk to him...though I think it will take a lot more on her account.
Excellent as always...here's a bag full of chocolate chip cookies for you! Much deserved! :)
Author's Response: :::munches happily on the chocolatey goodness:::
Thank you for the review! He really really thought he was protecting her. Of course, we know he's wrong, but he doesn't... yet.
Alice has definitely NOT had her last word with her brother. More of that fun to come!
Reviewer: Venus (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
I'm glad now we know all sides and we can move forward with the plot, please update again soon! Oh and maybe you're doing this on purpose to slow down the reading or whatever, but I feel like there's too much spacing in between each line of thought, just sayin'.
Author's Response: The spacing isn't on purpose. It's just how it translates in copy from my word doc to the submission. I apologize if it distracts you and hope you stay with the story!
There are still more sides to be shown and voices to be heard.
I appreciate the review.
Reviewer: Beautiful_Distraction (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 03:33 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
Hey Ellie!
Rip my heart out, girly!! UGH! I love the angst and at the same time I just want to shove those two together and make it all better! lol! Thanks for the shout-out and bot inspiration! I heart ya! :) Keep those updates coming! The story's amazing!!
XOXO
-Whitney
Author's Response: Aw, :::snuggles:::. Thank you for all of your support.
Yeah, these crazy kids need some divine intervention. Seriously. Sooner or later they'll get it right!
Thanks for the review!
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