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Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
I washold the review until I had read all chapter but wth I already know I will follow this story to the end.
Oh Bella, I wish she could have told him. I hate the thought of her going thru this alone and now take some comfort in knowing that Angela has found her and will be there for her as she moves forward with her pregnancy.
I have every faith that Alice will, indeed, find her.
Author's Response: You will be surprised at how they all reconnect, I'd wager!
Thank you so much for finding this story and thinking enough of it to keep reading and review! I appreciate it.
Reviewer: cindy75 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
wow....more please
Author's Response: Your wish is my command. The new chapter was submitted today. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: JohannaL (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
Found your story today and I love it. This is so real.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm glad you found us!
Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
LOL.. Facebook... connecting the world ;)
Author's Response: I know, right? But I want this to be real and what better way to find someone!
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Maplestyle (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
This is a great story so far! Though it does make me cry. Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: I put the next chapter in queue once this one went up. I'm glad you're liking this sad, little tale.
Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: KBfan (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 07:29 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
I love your story even though it is so sad... keep up the good job!!... maybe will hear from Charlie or Alice (not sure though)... How far along is Bella in her pregnancy?
Author's Response: Thank you! I know it's sad and it gets even sadder, but there will be a good ending. I promise!
Actually, Charlie will be coming up in the next chapter. And Bella would be just over 7 months
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: beausoir (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
Loving this more and more. I know things are going slowly to establish the back story, but I can wait for the sparks to start flying when "Cullen Contact" is finally made. I just know it will be great. Keep writing!
Author's Response: Oh, we are definitely getting set to fly into the action of the story. A little more set up to go, but the plot even moves in those chapters.
I am glad you love the story and so grateful for your review.
Reviewer: CT Twilight Fan (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 07:07 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
So Angela is going to contact Emmett.... i think he can really put some light on this situation. I absolutely love this story and I am glad she let Charlie know she is okay. That email to him let us all know that she truly loves her Dad.
Well I am hoping that the update for the next chapter will be very soon.
One of my most favorites stories.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for this review! I am glad you love the story and I'm grateful that you took the time to let me know!
I put Chapter 7 in queue about 10 minutes ago. Hopefully, it will be up soon.
Again, many thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: despi1993 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
Hey! I really love your story! I read the first six chapters at one and i cried at least three times! It's a really heartbreaking plot but i hope Edward and Bella will find their way back together...
Please update soon!!
Author's Response: I honestly do believe in Happy Endings. Just hang in there as it gets sadder before we get there!
Next chapter is in queue!
Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: MyaLuv (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
I just found this story and I have to say it's the BEST (and I'm not joking I mean this) New Moon All Human story EVER written. And Emmet? Thank You! I LOVE Emmett. He's so fun! When Emmett finds out Bella's pregnant can you have him puch Edward? Please? Update Soon!
Author's Response: Alas, Edward won't know yet when Emmett finds out;) Don't worry, Edward gets punched once or twice!
Thank you for the amazing compliments! It means the world!
I appreciate the review!
Reviewer: twitina (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
This is truly heartbreaking!! I'll be watching for updates!
Author's Response: It is a tragic tale, I know. And it gets SO much harder as the chapters go on. But I promise I believe in Happy Endings!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: SJR888 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
Oh man reading this story so far i'm already more than halfway through a tissue box. It really is important that you know that I went through so many because usually when I cry about a FF its just one or two tissues not half a box. So saying that is it to much to ask that you give a warning at the beggining of chapters about tissues lol. The first chapter I had one of those mini packs in the plastic. I went into my brothers room and grabbed the box and he gave me a weird look lol. I really really like this story even though it makes me cry. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Aw, hun! I will be sure to put in a blanket tissue alert and an extra alert for the really hard chapters (Edward finding out, anyone?).
Even though I am sad you cried half a tissue box, I'm actually grateful to hear it made you feel. This whole story is about emotions and points of view and choices. The fact that you feel it enough to cry lets me know I am doing something right.
The next chapter will be submitted tonight and should be up in the next few days. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: bandcampblonde (Anonymous) · Date: May 04, 2009 06:50 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
update, update, update!!
I love this story.
It always seems like Emmett is the one who saves the day, doesn't it?
Author's Response: LOL! Actually, Angela definitely saves the day in this fic, but Emmett is definitely going to help. I think you'll really like his chapter when it comes out.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Next chapter will get submitted tonight!
Reviewer: iyaaan (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
emmett!:D update soon please:)
Author's Response: Who'd a thunk it'd be Emmett!?
He will have a chapter in the relatively near future, but next up are Charlie and Carlisle.
Thank you *so* much for the review!
Reviewer: Cherrie (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
oh my, i cried and cried, reading this story. i hope it is true that you belive in happy endings, cuz i do to.
Author's Response: I promise. I swear. I do believe in Happy Endings:) It's going to be a *long* road to that point, but I hope you will stick with me and enjoy it!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: sherilynn (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 06:16 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
I like the AH of this story.
Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate you reviewing!
Reviewer: LisaLoo (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End
Good update! I was so excited to see it and it did deliver. Angela is such a good friend and Bella needs some intervention. I'm glad she has Angela to move things along for her.
Thank you for having Bella realize how selfish it is to disappear and not let Charlie in on anything. She's a mom now, she's starting to understand unconditional love and the worry that goes along with it....that is very real.
Thanks for a sweet chapter and a light of hope that the Cullen's will get in on the action soon.
Author's Response: Edward made the most obvious bad choice in the story, but all of the characters made poor choices along the way. Bella has chosen to begin to rectify one of hers.
Angela truly is the hero of this tale. She makes hard calls and does amazing things from beginning to end. Well, I haven't written the end yet!
I am glad that you enjoyed the story and am so grateful for your review!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
Wow, a lot happened in this chapter. I'm so glad Bella has Angela, i've said it before and I'll say it again, she is a great gal :)
Loved that Bella wrote to Charlie and the picture was a great wee childs tale to tell. Very cute.
I can't wait to find out what's going to happen next. I'm assuming we will hear either from Emmett or Charlie?
another well written chapter.
Author's Response: This was a necessary chapter in so many ways. Lots of information needed to be covered before the main storyline can pick up. We're on our way now!
Glad you liked the Charlie story. I dug into my own closeness to my dad for that one.
You got it right! Actually, we'll be hearing from both dads. A Charlie/Carlisle chapter! I hope you like it!
As always, thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: latinabeauty70 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
Thank you so much for updating. You make me smile when I see an update! I hope you are doing well.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! It is such a compliment to know that I can make you smile!
Thank you for reviewing. It makes me smile too!
Reviewer: twilightsagafan (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 05:53 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
finally she can get in touch with one of the cullens, I never expected it to be Emmett but I think it was a great choice I can't wait to see what Angela says to him but better yet I can't wait to hear his response. Great update and I'm sorry about the week you had.
Author's Response: Yeah, I had a lot of guesses as to who would be the first to contact whom and no one guessed "Angela and Emmett" but I hope it works for you!
Thank you for your support of both my real life and my story!
Reviewer: venomousgal (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
Ignore my typos on last review....I cut my finger really bad and it makes it hard to type properly.....I am manually challenged *Winces*
Author's Response: LOL!
I'll have to get Carlisle!Bot to come by and make it all better. Possibly by sucking on it as he does naughty things with his tongue...
Reviewer: venomousgal (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 05:40 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
wow Ellie! That's some week you had. I am so sorry to hear about the loss of your friend. I can feel your nostalgia in this chapter and wonder if this a result.
Your writing is brilliant as usual.....I always am cheered when I get your update alert.
As for you Cullen Robotics, I think they should also be programmed to go buy Hagen Daaz or Ben and Jerry's, draw bubble baths, and give massages for when us girs are down in the dumps. Edward!Bot could make you cheer up....
EMPOV next?
*hugs*
Tammy
Author's Response: Guess the chapter did match my mood! Alas, no. This one has been written for quite some time. I'm about 20 chapters ahead at the moment.
Thank you for liking my writing:) You are far too kind!
Yes, you're totally correct. The Cullen Robotics boys have full gentleman programming in addition to their perv-a-licious smut-lovin programming. They are fully capable of all sorts of sweet and romantic gestures. Hmm... I shall have to take the Edward!Bot out for a spin.
BTW, I wrote the first chapter of that bad boy today, if ya wanna see;)
Emmett is coming (LOL) but not in the next chapter. We will be hearing from my two favourite dads....
**HUGS**
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
Of course Emmett has a facebook account! LOL Hopefully he'll be Angela's friend. Can't wait to see what happens.
Author's Response: Oh, trust me, you will hear from Emmett!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
First off...I'm SOOOO sorry to hear about the passing of your friend...I know what it's like....I've lost some people very dear to my heart and it hurts like you won't believe...but you do get through it. And then a little baby....aww...definetely one of the greatest miracles in life...congrats to your friend.
As for this chapter...god bless Angela...I'm so glad that she is trying to contact them so that they at least know Bella is okay. I would hate to see how it would go if Bella found out she did it though..uh oh!
Great chapter!!!
Author's Response: Thank you for your kindness on my real life. It means a lot.
Angela is a saint. Really. Even if she has a devil on her shoulder making her do things like find the Cullens. It's the *right* thing to do...
And Emmett! YAY! That means he'll have his very own chapter soon. But not next. Up next are the daddies...
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: thailighter (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
Poor Edward.. I throughly cried my eyes out in this chapter. Once again your descriptive words really painted a crystal clear picture of a zombie looking red eyed Edward being comforted by a sad distressed Alice.
I have now decided this is on my top 3 best story of twilight fanfiction list, and i have been reading twilight fan fiction on many different sites for along time!
Keep up the brilliant work!!!!
-ty
Author's Response: My gosh, what a compliment! I truly appreciate your words and your review!
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