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Reviewer: loolupe (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage
Blushy Mc Clumsypants...BUAHAHAHAHAHAH! How much do I love Emmett?
Author's Response: Emmett brings in the much needed tension relief! He breaks it up with his humour a lot in this story. I am glad you are enjoying it and thanks for your review!
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage
Thanks for the quick update. Always nice to hear from the Cullen's. I am hoping we can hear from Edward next?
Author's Response: You are on the right track. I think you may be more surprised about what you hear. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Saturn (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage
Cool - now I just can't wait till Emmett gets on his Facebook account and sees that Angela has some news for him.. I can't wait for the next update :-)
Author's Response: The next chapter is like no other in the story. But we will be getting to Facebook soon! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage
Really great i loved it...I can't wait for them to find bella...and for edwards reacation...Ud soon
Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage
Really great i loved it...I can't wait for them to find bella...and for edwards reacation...Ud soon
Author's Response: His reaction is difficult to read. It was hard to write. I do hope it is worth the wait!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage
Emmett needs to look on his face book page! Can't wait to see what Angela says to him.
Author's Response: I know, right? I look at mine every 10 minutes!
When they do connect, it is a conversation not to be missed.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage
I'm glad the whole family is getting into finding Bella, including Rose. This will be very intersting to see. One thing they have going for them, Edward doesn't seem to care about much right now.
I'm thinking it will either be Edward or Emmett up next. Since you haven't said anything about him accepting the invite from Angela yet. Or maybe Jasper...
Author's Response: Yes, every last one of them plays a role in trying to find her. What is coming next is unlike any of the rest of the story, but I hope you like it. The action comes back right after. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: CT Twilight Fan (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage
well I love this story very much!!!!!!!! I am so happy to see the updates like you are doing. I can't wait to see who is next.
I am hoping it is going to be Emmett or Alice but I guess we will have to wait.
I am so loving this..... u r great. Don't stop writing ever.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Well, there are 26 chapters pre-written. I need to write more, but I was working on another project this weekend. Don't worry. I fully intend to stay well ahead and to see this through.
I appreciate your reviews!
Reviewer: DebBee (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage
Blushy Mc Clumsypants...lol...cute. *grin* I'm happy that the whole family is in the "know" with the exception of Edward and that the "troops" have been dispatched, along with a private investigator, but I completely disagree with their decision to delay bringing Edward into the loop. I also think that they should spring Jasper...he deserves a chance to be a full time part of the search. Good chapter...more please...lol. Seriously, I can't wait to see what happens next. :)
Author's Response: I know I say it all the time, but the story is so much about choices and consequence. Carlisle made a choice that I can't say I agree with either. But he made it all the same. All of the characters have done this so far, or will.
And Jasper is coming into the picture eventually. Don't worry about that. Even not with the family, he's still going to be a part of this.
The next chapter is in queue. I am so grateful for your reviews!
Reviewer: Shadowdragon13 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage
Loving it so far! I'm looking forward to the "contact" between Emmett and Angela. I can't wait to see how it all plays out. Update soon! Thank you!
Author's Response: Next chapter is in queue, but it is something completely different. Contact is coming soon, though!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage
This story is amazing! I love Carlisles point of view!!
Author's Response: Thank you. You'll definitely hear more from him shortly.
I appreciate your review!
Reviewer: sjones5199 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage
This story is truly AMAZING...I am hooked!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! What a compliment?!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: 8vamp8 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage
I LOVE THE NICKNAME FOR BELLA! haha!
love the whole story so far, but that's my favorite part!
I cracked up for forever! tears were streaming down my face within seconds. : )
Author's Response: About time I gave you guys a laugh, right?
I'm so glad you are enjoying the story!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: kenziemorton (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage
loveit!i think it will be from emmett or rose! and what's up with the whole facebook thing with em and angela? how often will you update?
Author's Response: Emmett is coming, I promise. But not next. And I haven't forgotten the Facebook thing. That'll be back in a *big* way!
I submit for validation the same day/following day from when the current chapter goes up. Validation takes about 4 days. So I usually update about twice a week, give or take.
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Burrberry Bugsy (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage
I'm thinking Emmett might be next? Just because he's the only one who hasn't said anything as of yet. I was so excited to see that you updated! I dropped everything I was doing to read it! I'm hoping the next chapter is already in line to be validated, but if not, that's okay too. Keep up the great work and I very much look forward to another update sometime soon!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you!
No Emmett yet, but I assure you he *is* coming soon. The next chapter is *completely* different. I hope you enjoy it.
The next chapter is written and beta'd, I just need to submit it for validation. Either tonight or tomorrow, okay?
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage
Blushy Mc Clumsypants. LOL!!!
Author's Response: Thanks:) Emmett is so much fun.
I appreciate the review!
Reviewer: Beth818 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage
I LOVE IT!!! and hurry with the next chapter...I'm dying from the suspense. please?
Author's Response: It's already written and beta'd, just needs to be posted! I promise it'll be soon!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Little Miss Whitlock (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End
wow im really getting into this chapter and im gonna go ahead and read the next one to see where you're going with this!
Author's Response: I hope you read them all and enjoy!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Sweetheartwithfangs (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage
I love it. No words to describe to intrigue. You have definitely left me wanting more, so please post soon!
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much for your kind words. I truly appreciate it and your review!
Reviewer: venomousgal (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage
Love the little illegal Cullens! Ellie, your story has me captivated. It is emotional and insightful to your character's pysche.
I would recommend this to anyone loking for a fantastic read. It pulls you in and snares you, leaving you wanting more.
Keep up the fantasmagoriffic work, love!
Tammy
Author's Response: Aw, hun, thanks! I truly appreciate your support and for allowing me to bounce ideas off of you all the time! Thank you for being there for me and for loving my story (as I love yours!).
I appreciate the review!
Reviewer: edward08 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage
that was great
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I am glad you are enjoying it.
Reviewer: ABH (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage
Please update soon. Would like to hear from Jasper and/or Emmet
Author's Response: You will absolutely hear from both. Jasper was a hoot to write!
Next chapter won't be either of them, but they *are* coming.
Thank you for reviewing.
Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage
And now let the search begin....great update!
Author's Response: Oh, it has!
One more chapter, totally different from the rest, and the search hits full throttle.
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Venus (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage
Ok first of all I have to say, I really like the premise of this story and you stay pretty in-character for all of them, but I feel like everything so far has been introductory, like we haven't gotten to the main plotline yet. All the chapters seem transitional to me. From what I've read so far, its seems like the whole fic is going revolve around everyone trying to find Bella and Bella hiding, I was hoping for more of seeing Bella struggling with depression and having to make ends meet as her belly swells or having sweet moments with her pregnancy and Angela, or watching the family interact without her. I just feel like the real story hasn't started yet, so maybe I'm just being impatient, but that's just my impression so far. Sorry if that sounds harsh, I'm just really honest and I'm so amped for the potential of this fic! I really do look forward to more! : )
Author's Response: No, I appreciate the honesty. Thank you.
The story, alas, won't be about Bella's struggles or a narrative about her depression. I understand it's unusual and it's in a strange format. You're right. There has been a lot of intro up to this point. The next chapter is completely different and insight into two characters. And then the action will kick in.
The action, however, is the emotional impact of questionable decisions made by each character, hence the revolving points of view. It's about how the choices they make effect far more than just the person making them. And it is about finding Bella and what happens from there. Forgiveness or no?
The main action in the story will be the search for Bella and what happens when she is found.
Again, I appreciate your comments and hope you continue to read. Thank you for reviewing.
Reviewer: Canadian Ginger (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage
Hmm, I'm guessing Jake will be next! :D
Good chapter by the way!
Author's Response: I'm getting a lot of interesting guesses tonight!
You will see soon, but it is someone we've heard from before.
Thank you for reviewing!
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