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Reviewer: smalls (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This


so good...and yet not enough.  this was like a little teaser chapter...now unleash emmett's mad social networking skillz and find her!



Author's Response: Lol! Emmett and his mad skillz! Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Maplestyle (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This

I really enjoyed this chapter. I thought it gave a good insight to how they both feel and I feel that this story did need this. Thanks for posting it.

My guess for next POV Emmett and Angela.



Author's Response: Thanks. Posting was a hard decision as it wasn't strictly necessary to the plot, but I felt it necessary to the characters. I think you will be pleased with the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: twilighted007 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This

Another Guess:

The Cullens find Bella...When shes having the baby?

-OR-

Angela breaks her promise and calls Charlie to give him Bella's where abouts...?



Author's Response: Bella is due in about a month and a half. Not quite time for her to be found, but there is definitely progress in the next chapter. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: venomousgal (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This

The hottest pregger sex ever!  You already know how I feel about this chapter......she's just preggers, not dead.  Realistically we all shag when we are pregnant and it is usually better.

Ellie, you are amazing.  Be confident and hold your head high.  This is one of my favorite fics, and I am picky...lol!

I'll take the stable boy BTW......he's my Wesley.....

luv

Tammy



Author's Response: Thank you so much for all of your fabulous love and support. I wouldn't have posted without you and the CR girls! As for the stable boy, "As you wish"!

Reviewer: flormi (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This

amazing chapter

two souls apart but together......incredible.....love it!



Author's Response: I am truly glad you saw this chapter for what it was. Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: sjones5199 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This

Great chapter! 



Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This

I get why you included it (I think) but you could totally have moved on without it.  I think we had already kind of gotten the feeling about what they both would have wanted if things were different, and without the author's note at the beginning, the first part would have been extremely confusing for a while!  It was still well written, just maybe not necessary.



Author's Response: Thank you.for your honesty. I completely acknowledged that in the author note. It wasn't necessary and totally fine to skip, but *I* thought it important to include. I do appreciate your opinion and thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Steelerfan (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This

okay it is so going to be emette hello facebook please



Author's Response: Lol. I think you will be pleased. Thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: envy (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage

I really like this story. Please update soon.



Author's Response:

It is already being validated and should be up soon.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: wearefanpires (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage

OOOOOO! REALLY GOOOOD! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS WHEN EMMETT SEES THE FACEBOOK FRIEND REQUEST!

 

HURRY! WRITE SOME MROE AND POST IT! I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY!

 

      ~wearefanpires



Author's Response:

The next chapter is in queue and I promise I haven't forgotten the Facebook!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage

I love this story.  I can't wait for more!



Author's Response: The next chapter should be up soon! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: BabyBlues (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage

MORE!!!



Author's Response:

LOL!  The next chapter is in queue!  It should be up soon!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: twilighted007 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage

I'm guessing that Bella will find the Cullens, bitch-out Edward, have the baby and then fall in love with all of the Cullens again.

Or...

Bella is about to have the baby.



Author's Response:

Well, definitely not the first.  The last is not *too* far off, but not quite right either.... Hm... any other alternatives?

Thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: Jadalulu (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage

Noooooooooooo! You HAVE to update! PLEASE! I'm dying! I'm begging!

Author's Response: It will be up soon. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage

I loved it...you did a great job of making your characters real. I am enjoying your story.



Author's Response: Thank you so much. The next chapter should be up soon. I appreciate the review!

Reviewer: BrightEyes (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End

I'm still loving this story can't wait for more. It's absolutely amazing.

*Hugs*

Amber



Author's Response: Thank you so much for your help and support!

Reviewer: twilight girly 1901 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage

next chapter please :] lol.



Author's Response: It is in queue for validation. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: corriander (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 03:45 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage

Loving it! But I need more Edward...He's my brand of heroine ;)



Author's Response: He is coming. Promise. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Steelerfan (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 01:24 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage

okay emmett just open your facebook



Author's Response: I know, right? But trust me, I haven't forgotten. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: dancing_in_my_underwear (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage

YAY More Carlisle! HAIL!! I'm hoping for Emmett for the next chapter cause I really like Emmett and I want him to find Angela's "ADD ME" on Facebook but then you said it would be a surprise so it's probably gonna be Rosalie or a character we haven't even heard about yet in this story like Mike LOL!!! Loving the story so keep up the good work :)



Author's Response: T love the guesses! You have heard from the next POV before, just not like this. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: tiffanyanne3 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage

I hope they get a lead soon--I haven't forgotten about Angela's Facebooking. Hoping that'll help... But I also think somehow that they'll end up needing Edward to find her...

Author's Response: Tha Facebook has not been forgotten, trust me! The next chapter is completely different. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: JohannaL (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage

Blushy Mc Clumsypants - ROLF
This is the best nickname for Bella I have ever heard :)

Love your story, can't wait the next chapter.



Author's Response: Emmett comes up with good ones, and I think we all needed a laugh! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage

So great!  I love that they're all getting in on this and starting to hunt...this whole chapter makes me think of an old movie where someone breaks out of jail and the guards release the hounds to find them.  hehe  The Cullen hounds are on the case! 



Author's Response: Tha Cullen hounds! I like that! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage

I hope that Emmett gets the email from Angela soon. The next POV will be either Emmett or Angela....



Author's Response: Ah, the next chapter is a little different, but I have not forgotten about Facebook! Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: HisAngel8 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage

Great story! I cant wait to read the next chapter! I love the story line. Good job!



Author's Response: It should be up soon. Thank you for reviewing!

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