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Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Please have Angela coontact Emmett soon...
Author's Response: It is coming. I haven't forgotten...
Thank you for reviewing.
Reviewer: jslpisces11 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Ahhh this brought me a little case of the sniffles.. poor bella. I hate that feeling when you wake up and realize it was a dream. Get these kids together soon- please please please.
Author's Response: They will find each other. That I can promise. Soon? Not so much!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: mauge (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
awwwwwwwwwww, it was so cute and sweet. I loved this chapter. They really need each other, and I love that Edward needs her so much, Bella seems to be in a better shape (due to her child of course). Keep writing, I'm really hooked on this story
Author's Response: 25 chapters are written, so I'm not giving up anytime soon! I am glad you liked this chapter and grateful for the review!
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage
I Just LOVE Emmett!!!!
Blushy Mc Clumsypants!!! lol
"New car for the first one to fins her?????!!!
That boy is so hilarious!!!
Author's Response: LOL! He has many more funny moments to come!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: STONERMOL68 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
you know- I was so confused when I read your author's note. When you said pregnant girl sex I thought you meant pregnant GIRL sex- which i didn't see how that would forward the story. It did become clearer as I read your chapter, but I did think it was funny.
Author's Response: LOL! Sorry for the misunderstanding! Nah. I just meant sex while pregnant from the girl's POV. Nothing that racy!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Kate17 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
I really like it; can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: I will submit the next chapter tonight or tomorrow.
Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
omg !!! I wonder if Emmett would accept my Facebook friend request???!!
hahahaha!
Author's Response: LOL! That would be fun!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
SO SWEET AND SO VERY SAD THAT THE PREGNANCY SEX IS ONLY A DREAM. IS THERE ANY WAY THAT YOU CAN GET THEM BACK TOGETHER BEFORE THE BABY IS BORN SO THEY CAN MAKE THEIR DREAMS A REALITY???? AND SO SWEET OF EDWARD TO THINK OF HER THAT WAY...
Author's Response: I can tell you that Edward will see her again before she has the baby. Beyond that, I can't promise anything. I answer as much as I can on the thread, if you want to stop by.
Edward wants the same things as Bella. He would have been fine if he hadn't felt the need to leave and if she had told him. Alas, so many poor decisions got in the way.
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: dihenydd (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
I am not sure I agree that this was unnecessary. It feels right to have them feel what they have lost and yet have a taste of it. A moment of grace.
Thank you for the update.
Author's Response: This means a lot to me. I don't know that it was necessary to the advancement of the plot, but I do think it was necessary to the advancement of the characters. I am so glad you understood my motivations.
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: BonneOri (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Sweet and yet heartbreaking. The dream was fantastic. It showed what the both wanted and then it ended leaving them shattered. You are writing Edward perfectly. I like how you have balanced his complete and utter devotion to Bella with his self hatred. I look forward to the next chapters.
Author's Response: Wow. That is a compliment of the highest order. Thank you. I am glad that you understood why I wrote the chapter. I appreciate your review!
Reviewer: Laxmom (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Ok, Emmett needs to check his facebook or whatever NOW!!! They so have to find her before the baby is born!
Can't wait to see what happens next!!!
Author's Response: I know! Who takes that long to read their Facebook! Don't worry. It is coming! Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: CT Twilight Fan (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
I think this chapter was important for us as readers because it gave us insight as to how much they miss each other.
As for what comes next ... I think it is Emmett receiving a message from Angela. Lets hope!
Update soon please
Author's Response: Thanks for understanding the reasons for chapter 9! You should be pleased with the next chapter!
Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
I really liked this chapter. It shows just how much the subconcious of these two still believes in them together. I look forward to the next chapter!
<3 Manda
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I am glad you enjoyed the chapter. The next should be up soon!
Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
I know how you were worried about this...but I don't wanna hear it missy! I totally can see why you did this...even though they are apart...they still feel each other and miss each other big time...but with each passing day...those hearts are breaking more and more! Made sense to me! :)
I think you know I loved it...but I can gush about it as much you need...let me know!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Your support here and on the thread is invaluable! Your gushing has made my day! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: samasa (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
i love this story...but it's like each chapter is just a little teaser....stop teasing and get to the climax...hehehe....
Author's Response: I'm not teasing, I am building suspense! Lol! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Lyanna Whitlock Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 09:22 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
please update soon i wanna know how every one will respond to emmett finding out angila is with bella and how edward reacts to her being gone and pregnant
Author's Response: The next chapter moves the plot forward, I promise. Still a way to go before Edward finds out anything. But Emmett is coming soon. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
I really liked this chapter it was heartbreaking but really good ud soon.
Author's Response: I know it was sad, but important. I will submit the next chapter tonight or tomorrow. Thank you for reviewing.
Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
That was so good. It was an amazing insight into just how much they still love one another and what they want. Perhaps all is not lost.
Author's Response: That is exactly what I hoped you would see. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Aww very nice. Smut but not just smut, it was loving smut. Well done.
Very sad to see they both want the same things, but a lack of communication has left them heartbroken and apart.
Another well written chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you. Yes, smut with a purpose, I would like to think... It is sad that they wanted the same things and could have them, but so many poor choices got in the way. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Wow that is such a sweet chapter. I think it adds a lot.
Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for reviewing.
Reviewer: secamimom (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Oh God, you are killing me here. I love the fact that they were both pretty much experiencing the same thing, in their own way. Bella, in the present and Edward, with what he was thinking was the future but actually the present. That wasn't too confusing was it? LOL. Anyways, can't wait for the next chapter and absolutely can't wait for Edward to find out Bella is missing.
Author's Response: It made perfect sense! I am glad you understood. The action moves in the next chapter. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Jadalulu (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Omg that is heartbreaking! And I'm 6 months pregnant right now so it hits home! If u don't have him finding her soon I'm gonna lose it!
Author's Response: Aw! I am a mommy so I can relate! Hang in there. I do believe in happy endings! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: twilightsagafan (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
I liked the update and at least we know they still love each other and edward would not mind Bella being pregnant. Cullens need to be very successful in this search and soon I don't no how much longer I can wait to see Edward and Bella together again. I hope she doesn't have the baby before they see each other though. What if she goes into labor when she sees Edward again? Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hang in there. The plot does move again next chapter. I will tell you, Edward will physically see her before the baby arrives. Thank you for enjoying and reviewing this chapter.
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Just read 8 and 9.
In chapter 8 it looks like the Cullen clan are about to wage a full out search party and I know they will find her ... I just hope it is soon!
In chapter 9 I like that their thoughts and dreams are on the same page. It's almost like a spiritual joining.
I know they will come back together but I want it to be soon! It is just so sad to see them both so miserable. I think more than anything I just hate to see Bella alone during a time that should be among the best memories of her life. I am just really happy that you gave Angela to her at this time.
I am enjoying this story immensely and thank you for sharing!
Sandra
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your amazing review. I am glad you saw chapter 9 as it was intended. They are still so bonded and so in love that neithe time nor space nor circumstance can change that. I so appreciate your review!
Reviewer: angmclure (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
I THINK IT WAS GOOD TO SHOW THEIR DREAMS AND HOW IT INVOLVES EACH OTHER EVEN THOUGH THEY'RE SO FAR FROM IT. I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER CAUSE I'M REALLY ENJOYING THIS STORY.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I am glad you are enjoying my story. I appreciate your review.
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