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Reviewer: IsabelleCullen829 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
WOW. That was an Amazing chapter. It made me squeal.
I LOVE this story. its sooo heartfelt and amazing!
Author's Response: Thank you. I chose to write it from a completely emotional perspective rather than as a narrative. I'm glad you are enjoying it.
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: culleniwish (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
I came accross this story this evening and read the 9 posted chapters. It's really good so far. I'm so sad for Bella and Edward and well for everyone really. :0) I can't wait to read more, I'm so glad all of them are going to be in the search to find her. Hope Emmett checks his facebook account soon. :0)
Author's Response: I am glad you found us and have enjoyed it! There are snippets on my thread, if you want advanced notice!
There is MUCH more plot movement in the next chapter, which should be up soon.
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: memmem95 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Poor Bella and poor Edward. I hope more Angela's and Bella's life is coming up soon. I love your story! Thanks so much for writing it.
Author's Response: You will definitely like the next chapter.
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: cheetahfalls (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Hmm...I think Angela is close to setting up the meeting with the Cullens. And I'm totally excited when Edward and Bella reunite and all the angsty goodness that comes with it! Well, I will be waiting!
Author's Response: The action is about to move forward quickly. I hope you enjoy it!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 09:07 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
great chapter! i cant wait for the next one!!
Author's Response: It is submitted and should be out soon. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage
i love this story! i cant wait for the search and i am happy that everyone is helping look for her in their own way. It makes me smile!
Author's Response: The search will kick up soon! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: oceanwaters2006 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Hot mama!! So glad you decided to post this girlie!! Love it!!
You are the best and such a great friend!! Thank you for everything and for holding my hand through my rough week!!
Love ya,
*hugs*
XOXOXOXOXO Jess
Author's Response: Anytime, girlie! You do the same for me! Thanks for making this story what it is!
Reviewer: 8vamp8 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Aw, I like it. : )
The way it should have been..... :D
Author's Response: Had they just followed their hearts. Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: DebBee (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 05:48 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Favorite parts of Bella's POV:
“I'm pregnant, sweet, not dead.”...lol.
"I was so incredibly grateful for that one moment with my Edward, even if it was just a dream, and, at the same time, completely heartbroken when I rolled over in my bed and found that I was alone."
Not one particular statement jumped out at me in Edward's POV, not that it wasn't good or that I didn't appreciate the insight into his thoughts right now, because it was and I did. The thought that stuck out to me while I was reading his version after hers is that even while they were so far apart, they were somehow still connecting, if only in their dreams. This chapter was bittersweet, and seems to belong. I'm glad you shared it with us, and can't wait til they get there. :)
Author's Response: Thank you for understanding why I wrote it. The bond is still so strong. Bella was having a very cogent dream, while Edward is much much more abstract. But they want the same things. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: cindy75 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 05:15 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
more please
Author's Response: The next chapter will be up soon! Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: KBfan (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 02:47 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Good chapter!! Please update soon =)
Author's Response: The next chapter is in queue. Thank you for the review
Reviewer: LisaLoo (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 11:41 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End
Oh the sorrow. I love that E/B are so in tune with each other. It also seems that a baby would not be the end of the world for Edward. Still painful to read, but I was thrilled to see the update. Thanks for sharing your writing.
Author's Response: Quite the opposite. Edward wanted this. Not now, but he would have gladly accepted it. They are still so bonded. I truly appreciate your view.
Reviewer: August Babe (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Oh My God!! This is absolutely amazinggg :)
One of the best fics I have read on here...honestly I lovee it and I can't wait to read more!!
Author's Response: I am so glad that you are enjoying this! Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: dancing_in_my_underwear (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
This chapter was so sweet! I almost cried! Poor Edward! Poor Bella! It was just so gorgeous!!! I can't wait for the next instalment!!! I hope the Cullen's find Bella soon cause then we can have Happy Edward which is MUCH better than Sad Emo Edward
Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed it! The action picks up in the next chapter. Thanks so much for reviewing.
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
They are both so lost without each other. Edward needs to find out she's pregnant and find her, like yesterday! Is Emmett ever going to find Angela's friend request? Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: I haven't forgotten Facebook! Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: corriander (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
I cant wait for them to find eachother!!!! Lets get to the goodness! I love it
Author's Response: There are miles to go before that, but I think you will like the next chapter! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: tiffanyanne3 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Loved it. Though it doesn't contribute to the actual plot, it does contribute to stronger character development and emotion. Great job. :)
Author's Response: Thank you. That is why I chose to include it. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Very hot dream ;) Great update!
Author's Response: I am glad you liked it. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Beautiful_Distraction (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Ellie
OMG, rip my heart out!! Please fix this...I can't take it!
My guess: MY MAN EMMETT!!!!
Author's Response: Emmett is about to strap on the chaps and ride the white horse so be prepared! Thank you so much for the review!
Reviewer: trutwilightfantasy (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Oh gaw, I wanna cry. Poor Bella though, I know how it feels to be pregnant and alone. It's the saddest freakin experience ever!
Author's Response: That I cannot imagine, and my heart is with every person who has been there. I am a mum and do understand the fear and unknown, with or without someone. Thank you for sharing and for reviewing.
Reviewer: Nicole March (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Oh my goodness! This chapter was SOO sweet, so loving, and yet SOOO sad because it was all a dream. I don't know how much more sadness I can handle from these two lovers who never should have been separated (stupid Edward!) Please keep these amazing chapters coming as quickly as possible!
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. All they want is to be together and there is no moving on. They just need to find their way back. His way back.
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Lovin the story! Post soon please!
Author's Response: I'll submit the next chapter tonight or tomorrow:)
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
One of the joys of being pregnant, hormones. In some cases of course, in others you don't want to be touched...
They are both fantasizing about the other. I can't wait until they meet up again. It could be explosive.
Author's Response: LOL. They definitely go both ways, those darned hormones!
Yes, they still think of each other like there is no other - like they should always be together.
Alas, when they do finally "meet" again, it's explosive in a different way. But I do believe in happy endings!
Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: teegee (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
can I say how HAPPY I am you wrote that lemon? seriously. I, for one, think pregnancy is beautiful. (and I think that Edward would as well).
I recently read a fav fic of mine where the author said Bella would not be getting pregnant because that would mean no more lemons. and I was like, what? why? I she said because it's not pretty or sexy and its kind of gross and that no one wants to read about pregnant sex. I was kinda insulted as a woman thats how she thought, tbh. pregnancy is beautiful and sexy and to think people would view it or sex as gross or unsexy? really pissed me off.
I found this chapter beautiful and really really lovely. thank you for it :)
Author's Response: Thank you. I agree. As a mum myself, I find it natural, normal and beautiful for people who have such a dramatic connection to still want each other in a physical manner. I am sorry that not everyone can see that, although I can respect if people don't want to read a chapter on it. I tried very hard to make the content clear so that people reading had a choice.
I am glad you liked the chapter and understood why I wrote it.
Thank you for the review.
Reviewer: Burrberry Bugsy (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Oh, bravo, my dear friend. Bravo! Like I said, you've got nothing to worry about this chapter. Everyone has needs, and Bella can't help that she has them when she's preggs! I thought you did great though. It was sweet and gentle rather than rough and lust-filled. I'm excited for the next chapter, which I know is already waiting to be validated because you're awesome like that! I'm going to take a wild guess and say... Emmett or Rosalie. Thanks so much for putting this up as fast as you did, and keep up the great work! Heading over to the thread riiighhhht now :)
Author's Response: Thank you for the support with this! It was a tough choice, but I'm standing by it. It seems that most have understood why I wrote and posted it. There are needs, and a connection, that I thought needed to be explored.
I will be submitting 10 tonight, and I think you will be pleased:)
See ya at the thread!
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