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Reviewer: latinabeauty70 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 04:17 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking
Just love Emmett and Angela. I think without them, it wouldn't be the same. I would trust my lives with them. Loved it and please update soon. Thanks!
Author's Response: Then you will definitely like the next chapter. Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: lisa54aa (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 04:13 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking
AHHHHHH!!!!! You must update...... You can't end it here!!!!!!!! I so can't wait for them to learn the gravity of the situation and how Assward is going to deal with it. Bella is going to have some raging hormone fits and no one is going to want to let go of that baby, including it's father. Let the drama continue!
Author's Response: Lol! Well, all of these things will be addressed, I promise. Just some sooner than others and not in the way you expect. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Roselover2 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking
I have been reading your story the whole time and I love it. I really liked the chapter like this I know you said it was not a nessisary chapter to the story but I think (respectfully) that you are wrong. It is nessisary to see that both of thier dreams of being with each other has been taken away from them. and to see that they both still have the love for each other and that if they can get over thier own stubborn side they will be able to be better together than apart (not perfect cause nothing is perfect)
I am anxious for the next chapter
Thanks for the ride!!
Author's Response: I am glad that you understood the importance of the dream chapter. Their bond is strong, despite everything. Thank you for reviewing.
Reviewer: LisaLoo (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 03:50 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking
So exciting. Thank goodness Angela didn't play coy. I'm glad that she didn't spill all the beans, but it was awesome that she let Emmett know that she is whith Bella. Huge development. I love the characters the way you are developing them. Thanks for an incredible update.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for this review! This is a character story, so I am glad that you feel I have developed them adequately! I appreciate it.
Reviewer: sheba (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking
Yes! Cannot wait until next chapter! Loved the "get in line" line from Angela. Go Emmett! YESYESYES!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I think you will very much enjoy chapter 11 then! Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: hbgo (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 02:57 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking
Can't wait to see how this all resloves it self
Author's Response: It is a long road, but it all comes together in the end. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: sweetishbubble (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 02:29 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking
LOVE IT!
Author's Response: I am glad! Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: LVB (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 02:15 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking
Ah Facebook- the answer to everyone's problems!
I hope she doesn't run and they manage to catch up with Bella!
Author's Response: Facebook is a very good solution! Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: oceanwaters2006 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 02:15 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking
DAYMN! That was easy. HAHAHA. I mean...that was fast...just thought I would throw in the Staples slogan to make you laugh. LMAO!
I will get some more chapters beta'd for you tonight and send them over!!
Now...Onto this chapter....HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! I love it!! Emmett is so funny!! Trying not to cuss in front of his parents but not managing it..LMAO!! LOVE IT!
Love ya girl!
*hugs*
XOXOXOXOXOXOX Jess
Author's Response: Staples gets me every time! Yahoo! Thank you for all of your hard work on this! You know I lurves you!
Reviewer: dihenydd (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 02:07 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking
Angela is such a god friend but it is a difficult choice making someone else's decisions for them. things are moving now though, so hopefully things will improve.
Thank you for updating.
Author's Response: Angela had a tough call to make, but she did it for the right reasons. I appreciate your review!
Reviewer: kikabr (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 01:53 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking
please don't let her have the baby without edward knowing... make them solve this as fast as you can...
Author's Response: The Cullens will find her before the baby. Promise. Thank you!
Reviewer: Steelerfan (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 01:25 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking
awwww hope they get her soon
Author's Response: There is still a ways to go, but hang in there! Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: tisaveeone (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 01:00 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking
Thanks for the dose of Emmett, I just love him!
Glad they're closing in on her. I know it won't be easy to get her back, but she's gotta know that staying on the run isn't good for her or her baby.
Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: I think you will be pleased with the next chapter! Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 12:58 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking
Oh... Oh oh oh oh oh..... I love Emmett & Angela!
I can just bet the whole family is about to go NUTS. Please say they'll be flying out right away...
Author's Response: You will have to wait and see, but I think you will like the next few chapters. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: JohannaL (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 12:18 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking
Emmett - the best guy ever!
And Angela - my favorite girl!
Now we are going somewhere, it is about time them to find Bella. Before the baby is born, I would hate if she would have to go through giving birth of the baby just by herself. It is the moment, where you really need to have your loved ones around you. To share that special, magical moment.
Author's Response: Well, they will find her before the baby comes, alas it is not as simple or romantic as people may like. This is a tough journey, but all will be well in the end! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: JohannaL (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 12:14 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Being a mom of three children I can just say that sex while pregnant feels extra special. I don't think I have ever felt as loved as during those pregnancies.
Loved the way you added this chapter to your story, it was perfect. And best part was that they both dreamed about it.
Reviewer: corriander (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking
I love this story! But your chapters are way tooo short! Throw me a frickin bone here! :) LOL! Seriously though....More!!! Fast!
Author's Response: Lol! They are meant to be short because of the rotating POV, but there are lots of them! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking
i was so excited I had my little fists pumping with joy.. YAY!!
Author's Response: Get ready for some more fist pumps, and possibly some chuckles!
Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking
I really like that they known she's safe now... but i want them to know everything...Please ud soon...hope to see some Edward soon
Author's Response: They will find out a lot more shortly. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: edwardnbella4ever (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking
Yay for fast updates! Please update again quickly!! : ) So happy to hear from Angela/Emmett. I was kinda hoping Angela would've said something along the lines of "Horrible, miserable, terrified, pregnant", but I guess she shouldn't spill all of Bella's secrets too soon : ( Hopefully the next chapter will have more Angela/Alice/Emmett or any combination therein, as well as the Cullens reaction to Bella's pregnancy, living conditions and choice of alias' (although I look forward to anything but more Edward moping). I really don't like Mopeward much, but E/B is still my favorite and I can't wait for the happy ending... entailing lots of groveling and no sudden "He really does love me" epiphanies... I am also anticipating Edward finding out all the angsty details and hope it involves some face punching on Emmett's side, although that'll probably only lead to more moping... oh well.Your story has me completely hooked. I have many many favorites, but yours is one of the only ones I constantly check for without waiting for the email. Keep it up, I'm bouncing as well.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! You should be very pleased with the next few chapters! Do not worry, there will be no sudden epiphany and Edward does get hit (although not by Emmett!). I am grateful that your are reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
Damn, I just found your story and now I'm hooked. But I DO have to work tomorrow so I can't proceed until tomorrow. I am loving your story and can't wait to read on!
Reviewer: samasa (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking
again!!!! stop wih the teasing! i can't take it anymore!
Author's Response: I'm not teasing! We're moving forward now! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: lexiecullen17 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking
perhaps alice next? ive kind of missed her, even though she's still around.
Author's Response: Don't worry! She is coming soon! Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking
Thanks for updating so quickly. can't wait till 9 PST!
Author's Response: Lol! It is coming! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: tiffanyanne3 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking
GAH!!! I totes did not realize I was at the end of the chapter already! LOL. I was so engrossed in this chapter--so happy Ang got in contact with Em. Can't wait for next chap! Great work as usual. :)
Author's Response: I have a feeling you will enjoy the next chapter! Thanks for reviewing!
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