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Reviewer: samasa (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action

please please please let it be the conversation on the phone...can you make the chapter's a little but longer? i'm loving this sotry! but i know that you have a life outside of twilighted....

good job



Author's Response: Lol! A job and a toddler too. But the chapters are short because of the revolving POV. Thank you for liking it and reviewing!

Reviewer: Jaenelle Masen (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action

my bets are on Alice and Angela..."the conversation"  i still can't wait to read what the rest of the Cullens will think once they find out that Bella is pregnant with Edward's baby....: ) update soon please i cant handle the suspense! 



Author's Response: I think you will be very pleased with the next chapter! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Burrberry Bugsy (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action

YAY FOR EMMETT'S POV! Great job on this chapter. I was so excited to see that this would be through action man's eyes. I'm eager to read the call now, and I know the chapter's probably already been submitted, so I won't have to wait long :) Congrats on 500 reviews, my dear! You totally deserve it! I'm guessing 1K will be yours within a few more chapters. I'll help you get there :) Again, great chapter and thanks for such a fast update!



Author's Response: Thank you so much for all of your faith in me and your support both here and in the forums! I appreciate it more than you know!

Reviewer: XodazzlezoX (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action

yay new chapter!

I love when emmett has a point of view its more down to earth lol

and maybe its his sarcasm too lol.



Author's Response: Emmett just doesn't suffer fools. He tells it like it is. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: KellyCullen (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action

Ahhh still waiting for the reunion..amazing story!



Author's Response: It will come, but we are a ways off from actually having them in the same room! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: iliveforthis (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action

omgomgomg drama enfolding next!

 



Author's Response: I think you will be pleased. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Jadalulu (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action

I need more! Don't make me beg!!!!

Author's Response: More will come soon! Thanks for reviewing! It makes me faster!

Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action

I really need more from this story...please ud soon. UD UD UD



Author's Response: I will submit another chapter tonight! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action

Wow!  An update so fast!  Thank you!  I look forward to the next one.



Author's Response: Thank my awesome beta and validation beta! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: v1cky84 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action

I love it... I can't wait to see the Cullen's response when they find out Bella is pregnant. Please update soon.



Author's Response: Well, one Cullen's response you will see very soon. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Burrberry Bugsy (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking

Oh, man! I didn't even know this was updated twice since I've last read it?! I have this on my favorites for a reason: to be e-mailed when this has a new chapter up, and I never got that e-mail! Lol. Oh well, better late than never :) I was holding my breath all throughout the Angela/Emmett conversation, and thank GOD she agreed to let him call. I'd be anxious, but there's another chapter up, so I'm going to read it right now. Yay!



Author's Response: You may still be anxious after, but I promise not for long! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: fato_profugus (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action

man of action.  how freakin' true is that?  i loved it.  can"t wait for more.



Author's Response: He definitely just wants to get a move on! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Elizabeth Keller (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action

Hmmm, Bella, perhaps?  I can't wait to read more!



Author's Response: I am glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: clark9andlanakent (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking

I'm really enjoying your story  I read the first 9 chapters in one night.

 

I just hope that when Edward finally finds out about Bella and vice versa, that she does not forgive him so easily.  He needs to earn back her trust and she needs to regain her confidence after he made her believe he didn't love her.  (Stupid ass, he must be watching Smallville.) 

 

I hope the rest of the family embraces her and the baby, which I'm sure they will, but Edward needs to suffer, a little.

PPMS.

 



Author's Response:

Edward suffers.  Trust me.  There are 26 chapters written and I can tell you that for certain. 

I am glad you found the story and thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 04:12 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking

OMG!  Yes!  They are able to talk to Angela now.  I can't wait to read more.



Author's Response: The next chapter should be up soon! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking

I love Emmett. I was wondering when he would come along. Great chapter. I am hoping that Bella won't find out what Angela has done. It would be the ultimate betrayal.



Author's Response: Emmett is a blast. Fun to write as well! As for Angela, she knows full well she is betraying Bella, yet she does what she thinks is right regardless. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: kuntrygal (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking

OMG NOOOOO!!!!  LOL!  I'm so disappointed there is no more to read!  LOL!  Great chapter!



Author's Response:

I have already submitted the next chapter.  It will be up soon.  Promise!

Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: 8vamp8 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking

ahhh, why must writers torture with cliffies? ha, who am I kidding - it's always a cliff until the end. I can't wait to find out how alice breaks the news to ange and how she takes it. : D keep up the great writing!



Author's Response:

I am sorry!  But I update fast!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: kuntrygal (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage

Loved the nickname Blushy Mc Clumsypants!



Author's Response:

LOL!  Just seemed like something Emmett would call her.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: kuntrygal (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough

I'm glad Charlie called Carlisle!



Author's Response:

Charlie likes Carlisle.  He knew he wouldn't lie to him.

Thanks for reviewing!

 

Reviewer: kuntrygal (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail

God Bless Emmett!  LOL!  God I love that big doofus!  Great chatper!  I'm glad she convinced Bella to contact Charlie.



Author's Response:

I am so appreciative of all of your reviews!  There is definitely more Emmett to come!

Reviewer: kuntrygal (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation

Still heartbreaking but I'm completely enthralled.  Great story!



Author's Response:

I know it is... just keep repeating that I do believe in Happy Endings!

Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: kuntrygal (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 09:22 AM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life

Oh this is heartbreaking! 



Author's Response: More to come! Thanks for the review?

Reviewer: skies78 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking

WOW can't wait for another update! I'm following this story like crazy! Thanks for sharing with us!



Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying it! The next chapter has already been submitted. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: redk9 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking

Gah! I always get to the end of the chapters just when it's really getting good! Update soon, please!



Author's Response:

The next chapter is already in queue.  It should be up soon!

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