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Reviewer: latinabeauty70 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 03:25 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
Loved it again - Love Emmett as always
Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 03:16 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
If i had to guess...I would say Alice is next...but that's obvious...so could be someone totally different! LOL! But when whenever the Alice/Angela call happens...I don't think Angela is going to make it easy right away. Though I can't wait until they all find out Bella is pregnant!
I loved it from Emmetts POV...I loooove me some Emmett!
I got my big girl panties ready for the angst....i think! LOL! Great job as always!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Glad you liked Emmett! He will be much needed relief from the angst storm coming. I think you will be pleased with the next chapter!
Reviewer: culleniwish (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
I love Emmett :0) Well I'm guessing the next POV will be Alice actually I'm hoping it's Alice and I hope it's the phone call with Angela. Wonder if Angela will tell her about the baby????
Author's Response: Hmmm... I think you will have your answer soon! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Shadowdragon13 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 02:53 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
Update soon, I need more Bella and Edward!
Author's Response: The next chapter is already completed and I will submit tonight! Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: sjones5199 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 02:40 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
Great chapter>>>>Alice up next?
Author's Response: I think you will be pleased with the next chapter. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: saranic (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 02:32 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
That was too funny from Emmett's POV! A little break before the angst? Thank you.
Really looking forward to the Alice/Angela phone call.
Author's Response: Absolutely. You will be thanking me for the comic relief soon! Thank you!
Reviewer: Abimaddevil17 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 02:18 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
Please please please update soon!! This story is just simply amazing! I need to read more!
I love that you gave Emmett Facebook cos Kellen Lutz actually has one! lol
This story is awesome!!!!
Abbie :D
Author's Response: Lol! I hope his Facebook has not seen any chats like that! Next update should be soon. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: CT Twilight Fan (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 02:11 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
Alright I love Emmett. He is so becoming one of the myfavorites. And I can guess that it is going to be Alice calling Angela. I can't wait for the family... not necessarily Edward (Because it won't happen yet) finding out that Bella is pregnant.
I am enjoying the fact that you update so often. Please keep that up.
Update again really soon please
Author's Response: I am glad you are enjoying it! You should like the next chapter! And if you like Emmett, wait until you meet Jasper! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: kuntrygal (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 02:05 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
Awesome chapter! I love Emmett!
Author's Response: Me too! Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Steelerfan (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 02:01 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
Okay I cant wait until they find out
Author's Response: Hang on. You should be pleased with the next chapter. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: LisaLoo (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 01:18 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
I love Emmett. My favorite was when he called Edward a bastard. He is such the big brother to Bella. Thanks for the update. (Sort of dreading the big girl panty angst, but looking forward to moving ahead in your tale.)
Author's Response: Emmett loves his brother, but he does NOT like what he did. Still, he will do everything he can to bring them all back together. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Edwardia Maven (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 01:17 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
yay you gotta get Edward to see his kid born
like yr story a lot x
Author's Response: He will get to her before she has the baby, although it is slightly more complicated than that. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: bellasunderstudy (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 12:34 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
I just found this story earlier this morning and I have been reading but not reviewing up to this point. First I want to tell you what a beautiful story you are weaving. It's incredibly painful but beautiful still. I chose to review now mostly because of the a/n you left at the beginning of this story. I wanted to let you know how much this story has touched my heart because you stated that you were worried about posting this chapter in particular. I feel that you have captured the desire that these two have to have a complete life with one another beautifully. The have parallel dreams for their life but as you have mentioned many times in your a/n's choices have been made and they are both paying dearly for the decisions they made. This story is beautiful and heartbreaking but I have enjoyed seeing this take on the lovestory that is Bella and Edward.
Reviewer: HisAngel8 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
Ok so I am curious about what Angela says on the phone to Alice. I am not sure its going to be pretty. She really cares about Bella and knows Bella is in a bad way. Of course the Cullens are going to freak when they find out that Bella is pregnant. Gosh i just love the story line. Good Job!
Author's Response: You will find out soon! Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: foxishot (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 12:08 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
I'm really enjoying this story. I really hope the next POV is Alice. That will get the plot moving along. Not that I didn't love Emmett's POV, but I wanted to know what happened next when I saw your story had been updated. This was kind of just a rehashing of the last chapter. But yeah, I'm way excited to see the family's reaction to Bella's situation. They are going to be so pissed with Edward!
Author's Response: I included Emmett both to show the Cullen POV and for a little comic relief before the real angst hits. I think you will like the next chapter. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: dancing_in_my_underwear (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 12:02 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
YAY Emmett!!!! I didn't mind seeing the conversation from a different POV cause it was like reading it for the first time again. Lovely chapter and I can't wait for the next :)
Author's Response: I am glad you didn't mind reading Emmett's POV! I thought we needed a little comic relief before the storm hits. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: OCD - ObsessiveCullenDisorder (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 11:57 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
OMG OMG OMG..... I found this over my breakfast this morning..... so taken in by it I actually called in sick so I could carry on reading... who needs work when there is all this angsty goodness going on....
Please please please update soon.....
THIS IS BETTER THAN WAKING UP NEXT TO JACKSON EVERY MORNING FOR THE REST OF MY LIFE..... ok... maybe thats a slight exageration... but its certainly close.....
More.... now..... please?
Author's Response: Holy moly! Now there is a compliment! I am so glad you found us and that you left a review! Thank you!
Reviewer: numberedheartbeats17 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
Yay they are going to find her soon, but I can't wait to hear the phone call.
Author's Response: You should be very happy with the next chapter! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
Come on Alice, get Angela to tell you where she is! If anyone can be convincing it's the pixie!
Author's Response: Alice could get blood from a stone! Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: fallenangel126 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
cant wait for the alice/angela convo!! great story.. update soon please!!!
Author's Response: You should be happy with the next chapter! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: edwardnbella4ever (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
I really liked hearing the Cullen's perspective of the chat and Emmett's POV. I especially liked Emmett's swearing and Carlisle's reaction to Emmett's swearing, but dammit, I was hoping that we would get to hear the conversation between Angela and Alice :( I really really want them to know Bella's pregnant and living in what sounds like a rat hole (well kept though it may be). If it's not Emmett that punches Edward, I'm guessing Rosalie. Even though she was never close to Bella, she just seems more likely than anyone else to get a bit violent. I don't see Alice ganging up on her twin brother. It would be pretty funny to see Angela punch him, though. I'm guessing (and crossing my fingers) for the Angela/Alice conversation next. Hopefully from Alice's POV and in the presence of other Cullens.
Wishing you speedy validation :D
Author's Response: Thanks for the great review! I think you will be pleased with the next chapter. As for who punches Edward, you mentioned the name, but I won't tell you which one!
Reviewer: original audience (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
I just found this story today and I love it!
Thanks for writing!
Author's Response: I am so glad you found us! Thank you for reviewing.
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! I, TOO, HAVE AS SOFT SPOT FOR EMMETT....... BUT YOU KNOW WE ARE ALL EXTREMELY ON EDGE!!!!!!- WAITING FOR THEM TO CATCH UP TO BELLA.........AND THEN GET EDWARD AND BELLA TOGETHER AGAIN...
Author's Response: Well, it wouldn't be as much of a story without a bit of suspense! You should be pleased with the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
So is Alice next? Maybe more Bella/Angela interaction?
Loved my man Emmett in this chapter. And Angela, too.
My heart swells at the thought that they are going to find her and at the same time it breaks because they are going to find her. Does that make sense? But will they find her before the baby is born? I just want them to find her and surround her with love.
And Edward? The whole thing is tragic for him as well. You've already shown us that there is a very strong bond between them, it's as if they can feel one another's pain. If they are not yet united by the time the baby comes will he know?
Tomorrow is laundry day. Guess I'll get the big girl panties out from the moth balls and wash them in prepation for the next chapter.
Sandra
Author's Response: What an amazing review! Thank you! And to answer your question, it does make sense. I will tell you that they will find her before the baby is born, but, like the rest of the story, it is more complicated than just finding her and making it right. I think you will be pleased with the next chapter!
Reviewer: Lyanna Whitlock Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
Emmett i love him and i liked the valium crack classic
Author's Response: He has a way with words! Thanks for the review!
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