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Reviewer: appletini (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
I love your story, but I don't love the rehashes of chapters already done.... its quite unnecessary. Oh, and pleaase please please let Bella go into labor into the next chapter! The drama, the tensions.... keep updating!
Author's Response: I am sorry you found it unnecessary and I respectfully stand by my choices. There will be big info in the next chapter, but we are a long way off from the baby coming. Thank you for the review and I respect your honesty.
Reviewer: Beautiful_Distraction (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
Oh yes, my man, Emmett to the rescue! Loved the chapter with Emmett's jokes and lightheartedness! You rock, girly! Thank you for all the bday fun stuff! :) hehehe!
Next up: Alice!!!!
Great job, Ellie!
XOXO
-Whitney
Author's Response: Emmett is always fun! Maybe not as fun as the bot!
Glad you liked your bday prezzie! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: absoluteTE (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
Gahhh i love this story!
Author's Response: I am glad you are enjoying it. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 07:20 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
Wow! I just stumbled across your story & sat & read all the chapters this afternoon. I was crying my eyes out just as much as I did when I read New Moon!
Author's Response: I am glad you found us, although I am sorry for your tears! It is about to net much tougher. Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: Alyxandria (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
Great chapter, as usual. :) Can't wait for more!
-Alyx
Author's Response: I am glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: lollipopstick28 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
I'm dying to read the next chapter. I can't wait for the Cullens to find out shes pregnant! I love Emmett and can only imagine the amount of four letter words that mite come out of his mouth lol!!!
Please, Please, Please update soon!!!!!
Louise x
Author's Response: I will submit the new chapter tonight! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
Woop woop, I'm getting excited as they get closer and closer to finding out what happened. I'm curious as to how they will react to the baby.
Can't wait for more. As usual, another fantastic chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And the big reveal is coming up shortly!
Reviewer: DebBee (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 05:03 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
I usually don't care for changes in POV that go over the exact same scene, often offering little added to justify the repeat, but that was not the case in this chaper at all...no redundancy to be found. I enjoyed hearing the other side of that conversation, with plenty of Emmett humor liberally sprinkled throughout...lol. You also gave us some insight into what a lot of the rest of the family was feeling/thinking, although I noticed that there was no mention of Esme saying anything, and couldn't help but wonder why since I was pretty sure that everyone was there except for Edward or was that just the first meeting. *goes back to check* Thanks for posting so regularly; I'm really enjoying this story and am happy to get updates so often. :)
Author's Response: Thank you for putting up with my redundancy. I did it for 2 reasons. First, I wanted everyone to see what the Cullens have been doing and thinking. Second, a bit of comic relief before the real angst starts. Much harder material to come. You made a great point about Esme. When I wrote it, she was not there in the room. I never did explain or make mention of that. Thanks for keeping me honest!
Reviewer: twilight girly 1901 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking
OME! the cullens are going to geek out when they know bella is pregnant with edward's baby! i totally can't wait for the edward and bella reunion lol :]
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Author's Response: Oh dear. If you only knew what their first meeting will look like. Please but tissues. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 04:54 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
Man of action indeed!!! You just gotta LOVE Emmett and his lovely choice of words and phrasing! "this situation calls for a "fuck" or two! LMAO!!!!
LOVED IT!!!!! Oh man closer and closer...............they just won't know what hit em when they finally SEE Bella in her "state" and Angela so lovingly put it "a skeleton that swallowed a basketball" HA Loved it!!
Can't wait for t he next chappie!!
I'm bouncing up and down like Alice....however I have no Jasper Valium LOL I liked that alot.....prolly just real valium LMAO!
Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying the story! Hang on to your hat, because the storm is about to hit. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: skies78 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 04:37 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
Very Nice, can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: I will submit this evening so it should be up soon! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking
I don't really think that Reviews are better than Ice-cream Sundaes served on Edward's lickable Abs! *swoon* But THANKS so much for that VISUAL! uhhhhhh :P
Ok so GREAT chap!!! We are getting closer and closer!!!! YAY!
LOL @ Emmett having a FB Acct! Leave it to Facebook to save the day!! lmao!
Author's Response: You are right. Ab sundaes are better! But I am grateful for the review!
Reviewer: runner28 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 03:42 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
so good.
Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Brianna Newth (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 03:30 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
Just found this story and I LOVE it. Can't wait to read more!!
Author's Response: I am glad you are enjoying! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: EASEmama (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 01:49 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
I (heart) Emmett!
Thanks for writing Emmett's POV. The big lug doesn't get nearly enough face-time around here. :)
Author's Response: Emmett has a couple of chapters all to himself this far. He may still get more! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 01:46 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
Who's next? We have not heard from Bella in a few chapters. I would like to hear from her. I am loving your story keep up the freq. postings! Thanks!
Author's Response: It is funny how the main characters of the story don't do much of the talking! But you will hear from her again. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: SJR888 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 01:43 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
The Cullen's are in for the shock of their lives. Loved this chapter it was a nice break from some of the more heavy chapter in the way of saddness. I just need a hint how bad will the new be taken, I don't need to know anyrhing more than that. Love it can't wait for more!
Author's Response: The news they are about to get will not be nearly as heavy as what is to come. Buy tissues in bulk! Thank you for reviewing!
Author's Response: The news they are about to get will not be nearly as heavy as what is to come. Buy tissues in bulk! Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: smiles (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 01:29 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
I love this story a lot. Wish this chapter wasn't so short I was hoping for more to happen in this chapter. I'm so excited for the cullens to find bella face to face. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: I know the chapters are short but it is for a reason. At least I update often. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: StephanieCullen (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 01:10 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
Your story has sucked me in....hook, line and sinker! I love it! I love everything about Emmett! Keep up the good work and post often!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I am glad you are enjoying it!
Reviewer: Telly21182 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 01:04 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
I am so anxious to hear how that convo with Alice and Angela goes!
Author's Response: I think you will like the next chapter then! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: venomousgal (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 12:56 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
This chapter calls for a fuck or two.....It was ahmazing! I love Emmett in big brother mode. I want to see him and Edward have a lil showdown eventually.
Ellie you rock and I can't wait for more of your brilliant story. It's my brand of heroin....
love ya
Tammy
Author's Response: Aw thanks, girl! You are such an amazing help to me and I cannot thank you enough. Maybe we do need a little more Edward and Emmett interaction! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: booknerd (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 12:53 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
Love the story so far but could we go a little bit faster in the story there is only so long that readers can take. They should find out about the baby and soon please!
Author's Response: Hang in there! There is a method to my madness! At least I update often! Thank you for the review.
Reviewer: cindy75 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 12:42 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
more please!!!!
Author's Response: The next chapter should be up soon! Thank you for the review.
Reviewer: oceanwaters2006 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
I think I got ahead of myself when I was reviewing the last chapter...
THIS is the chapter where Emmett is trying not to curse in front of his parents!! LMAO!!
Love both chapters and holy hell...the real tear fest is only just beginning!!
Love ya girl!
XOXOXOXOXOX Jess
Author's Response: Lol! People will be begging for little Emmett breaks soon! The real angst has yet to rear its ugly head! Thank you for all of your help!
Reviewer: Tarkheena (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
Well I hope they start locating Angela and buy plane tickets now. There's no point waiting for the next day for a phonecall when they can easily get more info in person. Desperate measures. That way Angela won't be able to escape them and it's the fastest way to communicate and tell her their story at the same time she tells them about Bella.
Author's Response: The only problem is that they don't know exactly where she is. Do not worry, though. They won't waste time. Thank you for reviewing!
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