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Reviewer: wearefanpires (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Nightmare of a Love Story

OMG! So intense! So much love and sadness! I love it with a burning passion of a thousand suns! Please write the next chapter soon! I just HAVE to know what Bella's reaction is going to be. Can't wait for Edward to find out! What's he gonna do!?! :-)

 

PLEASE CONTINUE! I think I'm in love...with the story of course!

~wearefanpires



Author's Response: Oh dear. I wish I could prepare you for these events, but you are about to get hit with a bit of a complication. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: DebBee (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Nightmare of a Love Story

*cries* So sad, so tragic, but beautifully written. I honestly felt like I was there, with Alice, with Angela, feeling their pain, their heartbreak, their helplessness, but mostly their need to make this right. *braces myself for the the next curve ball you're going to throw at us* I couldn't duck, because I didn't want to miss it...lol. Thanks for all the posts recently. :)



Author's Response: I am glad that you felt that conversation. That really is my goal for the story-to allow folks to feel what the characters feel. I am so grateful for your reviews!

Reviewer: twilight girly 1901 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Nightmare of a Love Story

OME! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!! i cannot wait to see where you are going to go next in this story, its amazing, and i want to read more :]



Author's Response: I am glad you enjoy it! There is a major twist on the way. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: flute_genevive (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Nightmare of a Love Story

TELL EDWARD. (please?)

Author's Response: I will, but not for a bit. The infamous upcoming chapter 17. It is a tough chapter to read. Thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: anna123 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Nightmare of a Love Story

Oh wow, I've been scrolling past this story for some time now...I just don't handle angst well so I usually stay away from it, but damn, this story is good! It's not over the top painful, like in a way that makes you downright miserable while reading, but enough to make you 'feel the pain' the characters are going through. I'm glad I decided to give it a try, and I can't wait to read more! :)   



Author's Response: I am so glad you stopped to read. It is angsty, but not pointlessly so, and there will be a happy ending. Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 06:40 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Nightmare of a Love Story

PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!GET HER AND EDWARD TOGETHER ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!IT'S KILLING ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response: Be careful what you wish for and remember, I do believe in happy endings! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Beth818 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 06:16 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Nightmare of a Love Story

I LOVE THIS STORY!!! Update soon!

Author's Response: I am glad you are enjoying it! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: secamimom (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Nightmare of a Love Story

I loved this chapter!  I am hoping Edwards point of view is next, but I really have no idea.  can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response: Edward is coming soon, but not yet. I am glad you enjoyed the chapter!

Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Nightmare of a Love Story

i am kinda hoping its alice and angela again or maybe even bella...i just know i cant wait to find out!!



Author's Response: It won't be long to wait. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Shadowdragon13 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 05:27 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Nightmare of a Love Story

If ever I needed an update, it's NOW!  Awesome chanpter!  I feel the ache in my chest for Alice.  Please update SOON, PLEASE!



Author's Response: Lol! I am going as fast as I can with a full time job and a toddler! Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Burrberry Bugsy (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 05:02 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Nightmare of a Love Story

Ellie loooove, oh my gosh! You got this out SO fast! You're amazing!

And now onto the brilliance that is your story. Wooow, felt my heart pang a bit when Angela admitted Bella's pregnant. And as, errr, masochistic as this may sound, I cannot wait to read the EPOV once he finds everything out. Their baby, how broken she is - everything. It will be crushing, I'm sure, but you truly have a gift when it comes to writing out these types of emotions. This story is so heartbreaking and irresistibly amazing at the same time! I'm preparing myself for the angst I know will come since I'm assuming Bella won't be too happy once she finds out what Angela did, but I'll just wait and see.

Thank you for such a quick update! And look at you with 627+ reviews! I told you you're well on your way to 1K! :)

-BB



Author's Response: You so rock! Thank you for being my own personal cheerleading squad! I wish I could adequately prepare you for just what Edward finds out as it is more than what you think. I hope I make it to a thousand! Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: 3 little cullen boys (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Nightmare of a Love Story

When I read the summery for this story I realy had no interest in reading it, boy was I ever wrong, amazing story, love it!



Author's Response: Well, I am glad you gave us a try! Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 04:56 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Nightmare of a Love Story

o man I can't wait for him to find out. it's going to be so crushing!



Author's Response: The infamous chapter 17. Please have extra big girl panties! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Funnygirl (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 04:47 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Nightmare of a Love Story

Love it, love it, love it! Just found the story and tore through it! Please update soon!



Author's Response: I am so glad you found is and that you are enjoying the story! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: scottslass (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 04:47 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Nightmare of a Love Story

How could you leave it there?! I want to know the other Cullen's reactions to the news. 

Washboard ab sundaes sound sooooo good right about now. Hmmmm.....



Author's Response: I am sorry for the cliff. So much more is about to happen. Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 04:36 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Nightmare of a Love Story

I hope Alice helps her out! I am assuming it will not be easy. Lovin the story, post again soon.



Author's Response: It will be anything but easy, but they will be okay in the end. Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 04:24 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Nightmare of a Love Story

Well my tears started about the time Angela told Alice that she and Ben were buying groceries for Bella.  I do have a question I hadn't thought of before ... is Bella getting prenatal care?

The conversation went quite well.  I love Angela and the way she handled this dilema was so spot on.  Despite my tears I feel comforted in knowing that Alice will be there soon.  And at this time my mind is running amok.  So much to consider, so many variables, so many scenarios. 

My heart cries for Bella a little more with each chapter.  However she is not the only victim here.  As a parent I can't begin to imagine what I would have done had this happened to one of my children.  Charlie's devastation haunts me.  Esme ... is there any way she can be there for Bella when the baby comes?  Maybe Carlisle?  And Edward's knowledge of the baby can make or break him further.

So who do we hear from next?  Good Question.  Haven't heard from Bella in a while or Edward.  Alice will be going out to see Bella so perhaps Jasper.  So perhaps Esme?

Thank you for frequent updates!

Sandra

 



Author's Response: I am so grateful for your reviews! Yes, Bella is getting prenatal care but bare minimum, state agency level care. Almost all of the Cullens, plus a surprise or two will be present when the baby gets here. Edward, sigh, his reaction is... Very hard to read. Again, many thanks for your wonderful reviews!

Reviewer: venomousgal (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 04:22 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Nightmare of a Love Story

This chapter is so emotionally charged I can only imagine how its going to go from here.....

I needed tissues for this one....and I love Angela....



Author's Response: And it gets so much harder from here. Thank you so much for your support on this story and in life! Hugs!

Reviewer: littlebit (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Nightmare of a Love Story

happy endings, happy ending, happy endings.......oh god happy endings...

 

I freaking check several times a day for updates on this story. LOVE IT! Can't wait for them to finally get back together. Quick now, like rabbits! LOL!



Author's Response: We have a ways to go and it gets much tougher from here, but they will be together again. Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: BrightEyes (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 04:19 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Nightmare of a Love Story

Love hearing from Angela and Alice in the same chapter. This story just keeps getting better. I can't wait to see where this ends up.

*hugs*

Amber



Author's Response: Thank you so much, Amber!

Reviewer: saranic (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 04:17 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Nightmare of a Love Story

Gah, that was hard to read.  Angela is one good friend for doing this, knowing it could be the end of Bella's trust.  I wonder how Bella will allow Alice back in her life.

Edward should be told about it, but I understand that Bella is so hurt that she won't allow it.  I have no idea how you will make this right again, but I have faith!!  It won't be some magically thing where he comes back.  It is gonna take a lot of work.

So good bb!!

 



Author's Response: It will be a lot of work and circumstances will become far more tenuous as well. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: BrightEyes (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 04:15 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action

Love the convo. between Angela and Emmett. Great chapter girl. Keep up the great work.

Hugs,

Amber



Author's Response: Thank you so much for your support through this story. I would be lost without you.

Reviewer: culleniwish (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 04:14 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Nightmare of a Love Story

Yay! I guessed right that time. I'm so glad that Alice knows about Bella now. Can't wait for Edward to find out. Maybe the next POV will be from him??? I know he won't find out about the baby in the next chapter but we haven't heard from him much and he's got to speak sometime. I know I'm probably way wrong but I thought I'd throw it our there. :0)



Author's Response: He is coming up, I promise, although he won't know about the baby yet. We have several chapters before he finds out. Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: OCD - ObsessiveCullenDisorder (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Nightmare of a Love Story

*Squeals* An update.... an update *bounces around like Alice on redbull* - yeah I am that hyper

OMG this just gets better.... please please please..... for the love of all things that sparkle in the sunshine.... update soon..... I don't think I can wait too long....

You totally rock

LOVE IT <3

 



Author's Response: Well for sparkly things I will do about anything! Lol! The next chapter should go up soon! Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: StephanieCullen (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 04:00 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Nightmare of a Love Story

Excellent chapter!  The conversation between Alice and Angela was just the way I hoped!  Great job! 



Author's Response: I hoped it would live up to everyone's expectations. Thanks for the review!

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