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Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
Really loving your story, can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying! Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: maravilla (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
I love your story!! Can't wait for more. I feel so bad for Bella.
Author's Response: More will be up soon! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
Go Alice! She's always the one to save the day, isn't she? lol Great chapter. I loved Alice's point of view on things. Good job.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: fallenangel126 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
I love this story!! I feel like you can't write in fast enough... (hint, hint) sorry just kidding.. cant wait for the next chapter!! and hopefully emmett doesnt kill edward next chapter :)
Author's Response: Lol! I am doing my best to keep them coming! You may be surprised by the reactions. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: PLV (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
Well at least someone else knows. I am sure Bella isn't goingto be happyabout all of this but she isn't able to take care of a baby. I am sure Angela is frantic and is heartbroken that she told on Bella. Bella isn't the only one who is suffereing. The baby I hope will be alright. Um Edward is not going to be happy and I feel his family is going to be more than PO'd with him.
Please update soon.
Author's Response: So much more is about to happen to complicate things soon as well. Angela did what she felt she had to, and for the right reasons. Let's just see how it pans out. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Beautiful_Distraction (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
Ellie! Love this story, girl! 100 percent love it! Hmmm....next guess Emmett and Rosalie! :) keep them coming!
Author's Response: Trickster! Seriously, this story would be a file on my laptop without my dear CR ladies! Thank you!
Reviewer: oceanwaters2006 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
Love it! Alice is such a great friend to Bella and she's so torn apart about the whole ordeal...although...I'm having heart palpitations thinking about the chapters to come! GAH!
Love ya girl!
XOXOXOXOXO Jess
Author's Response: These poor, wonderful folks have no idea what is about to hit them! This story would be nothing without you, so thank you!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
I WANT TO SEE EDWARD, BELLA AND THEIT BABY HAPPY TOGETHER!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Oh we have miles to go before we get there! Hang on and enjoy the ride! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: swingate (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 11:51 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
WRITE FASTER! LOL! I love this story. I have read a lot of them on the site, but I have not reviewed many, and if you need reviews to write, DARN IT, you will get them!
Author's Response: I am honoured that you chose to review mine! The next chap should be out soon!
Reviewer: Jadalulu (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
Aaaahhhh the suspense is killing me!!!!
Author's Response: Hang in there! The next chapter should be out soon!
Reviewer: mahonm2 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
Maybe it is split between Edward/Alice or maybe Carlisle/Esme. I have no idea, but I know that you said that 17,18 and 21 are tearjerkers, so I am just bracing myself. Thanks for the quick updates.
Author's Response: There are some others too. But there has to be a few surprises! Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: trutwilightfantasy (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
Jasper and Esme? Can't wait to see Edward shit a brick! hehe.
Author's Response: You have until Chapter 17 for Edward to find ou! But it is coming out fast! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: ABH (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
I'm sure Bella will let the Cullens be part of the baby's life, but I don't know if she has the selfconfidence to let them (Well Edward) be part of hers again. It would be hard to swallow "Hey, I said I don't want or love you, but I didn't mean it. Your having my baby, let's ba a family." I would take that as you just want me because of the baby, or to "Do the right thing" and not because I'm me and I happen to be quite fantastic.
Author's Response: You are very right. This is not going to be easy for Edward and it is actually going to take a lot more than just his word. But love always finds a way. Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
You believe in happy endings... you believe in happy endings...
I have to keep repeating that to myself, because I can see the black hole where this is heading. You're going to drive me nuts you know. But I still love this story. Keep up the great work.
Author's Response: I am glad that you believe in me! I really do believe in happy endings but things are going to get FAR worse before they get better. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: cindy75 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
yay...keep going!
Author's Response: I am glad you are enjoying it! Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: corriander (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
you have to make these chapters longer otherwise i feel like Im reading paragraghs at a time. No fair. BUT I LOVE THIS STORY
Author's Response: They are short for a reason. At least I give them out often! I am glad you are enjoying and thanks for the review!
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life
Poor Bella. She couldn't even tell him. But I see why she didn't. Good job!
Author's Response: Alas he will know before they meet again. But they will have plenty to talk about. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: skies78 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
oh oh oh a update I do love updates!! This is magnificent, can't wait to read more and thank you for sharing!
Author's Response: I am glad my update made you happy! Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: lisa54aa (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
I hate when a chapter ends..... It never feels like it is enough. I loved C's comment about being a grandfather and will enjoy reading about E being forced onto a plane. I wonder if he will be clueless or get an idea that something is up with B. Apart from the B/E initial meet up, I can't wait to read about B's first meeting with A. I am hoping that is coming soon, but I have a bad feeling that this holiday is going to interrupt my scheduled fix (because it is all about me, anyway...:)) This story keeps getting better and better.
Author's Response: Holiday schmoliday! I am poor and have a toddler! Not going anywhere! I will submit this weekend. Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: JohannaL (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
My guess: Emmett and Esme!
I <3 your story!
Author's Response: I.am so glad you like it! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
Short and sweet, but I like it. I thought Edward was supposed to be left in the dark for a little while. Hum, I guess I will see.
Author's Response: He will be in the dark a bit longer. I know the chapters are short, but they are for a reason and have a lot to do with POV rotation. I try to get them out quickly, tho! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: CT Twilight Fan (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
I am thinking it is going to be Jasper and Esme.......
I also am going to go to forum and look for what the wrinkles are.
Update soon please
Author's Response: Keep in mind, I can only go to the thread to answer in the evening, but I always do! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 09:18 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
Loved how Alice handled Lauren in this chapter. She may be a pixie but she is fierce. She got down to business and didn't beat around the bush or sugar coat. Carlisle took the news very well and as expected was a voice of reason. The whole exchange was a testament to the Cullen clan dynamic and I am so pleased that you've stayed so true to this characteristic.
I'm also very happy that this is not going to drag out. The next POV ... heads it's Esme, tails it's Jasper ... tails ... so Jasper it is.
And while your girls are working out a deal on bulk big girl panties do you think it's realistic to request something lacy in midnight blue.
Sandra
Author's Response: I am trying to stay true to the spirit of the story and the characters while still telling my own tale. Request away! We are also trying to negotiate deals on bulk liquor and possibly valium! (j/k). Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: starcrossdlover (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
i love it beyond words...and i love words, so that's saying something...i can't wait to read more and i am very eager for how esme, edward and emmett will react to the news...here's hoping an update is coming soon!!
Author's Response: I try to update often! Hopefully you won't be waiting past the weekend! I am so grateful for your review!
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
I just read through the first 13 chapters and I have to say this is the best fan fic I have ever read, I am so hooked and really wish there was another "Next" button to be pushed. I can't imagine what both families would be going through but your writing on feelings and emotions is amazing. I am looking forward to much more! :) PLEASE update again soon!!!
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks so much for this amazing compliment! I appreciate it more than you know!
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