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Reviewer: deeks (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 03:02 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
hi! i just found your story while browsing through the All Human forum and was hooked! i read all 13 chapters in one go and i went to press next and realised im actually going to have to wait for chapter 14! :P jeeeze! this story is crazy good. im really enjoying reading it. cant wait to read what happens next.
p.s. i think its esme next.. carlisle would not be able to keep something like this from esme for long ;)
Author's Response: Well, I am glad you found us and are enjoying the story! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: UR_PERSONAL_HEROIN (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough
THIS JUST SEEMS TO BE GETTING SADDER AND SADDER, I WILL BE GLAD TO READ WHEN THEY FIND HER!,BUT EVEN THOUGH ITS SAD TO ME, ITS STILL AN AMAZING STORY.
Author's Response: It will keep getting sadder, but I do believe in happy endings.
Reviewer: UR_PERSONAL_HEROIN (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
oh man thisis soo sad, i actually cried here
Author's Response: I am sorry you cried, but thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: UR_PERSONAL_HEROIN (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
this is another addicting story. lol
Reviewer: UR_PERSONAL_HEROIN (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life
this was so sad.
Author's Response: Alas this is only the beginning. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: UR_PERSONAL_HEROIN (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End
luved it
Author's Response: I am glad! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
Honestly, Edward needs a little less coddling and a lot more bitch-slapping. He's sitting around wallowing in self-pity while his family enables him.
Carlisle needs to go to his room, toss him out a window, and TELL the selfish brat just what he's done!
Author's Response: Oh, it is coming! Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough
Hmm, so Angela is gonna talk to Emmett or already has and now Carlisle and Charlie are working together. I wonder how this is all gonna come together. That and I'm excited for the baby. What it will be and what she'll name it. Hopefully not Renesmee cause that's been done, but hey it's your story and it would fit. Great chatper!
Author's Response: There is no renesme, I assure you! Lots of action but none of that! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: freckles9399 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
oh my god i am hooked !!!! i found this story from reading rescue me ,i cant wait till the next chapter thanks so much keep emm comin !!
Author's Response: Rescue Me is one of my FAVE fics and Tammy, the author, a great friend now. We cheerlead for each other!
I'm so glad you found us and glad you reviewed! Come by the forums for more info and chat!
Reviewer: BabyBlues (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 07:25 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
Love your story, but I have to admit that I'm not too keen about all the Cullens knowing prior to Edward. I understand that everyone have to pitch in to get Edward onboard the jet, and therefore have to know before hand, but in my opinion it would be more appropriate if the rest of the Cullens were told after Edward - with the exception of Esme. Maybe she could tell the others on the comerciel flight???
Anyway, update soon!!!
Author's Response: I appreciate and may even agree with your comments, however, from chapter one, this story has been about questionable decisions and their emotional consequences. Thank you so much for the review!
Reviewer: smiles (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
Oh I wish this chapter was longer! I can't wait for an update. Hope its soon!
Author's Response: The next chap should be out soon! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: dancing_in_my_underwear (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 03:05 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
Im all excited and I want to know what happens next!!!! I don't want to wait for another chapter I want it now!!! maybe i shall reread... Anyway excited that Carlisile now knows and the story is moving along swiftly! I think Emmett will be one of the POV next chapter
Author's Response: You should not have to wait too long! Thanks so much for your reviews!
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:57 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
Aww, Angela and Emmett are gonna make things better. lol. I like that Bella kept up her part of the bargain. Good chapter hun.
Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying it! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
hmmm i think it is either edward and alice or carlisle and esme...not sure but i cant wait to find out!
Author's Response: Hmm. Should not have to wait long to find out! Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
Good. He should be feeling like shit even after all this time. He deserves it. Hehe, loving, I know. Good chapter. I wonder just how long Alice is gonna wait though.
Author's Response: Keep reading, my friend! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Burrberry Bugsy (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
BWAHAHA the sundae reference from the thread! Yet another wonderful chapter once again, as always. And look at you with 750+ reviews!! *Waves pom poms* Almost there, Ellie looove, almost there! I'm so excited for you! If I could put that hyper smiley they have on the threads, I'd use that, but poo. No hyper smiley. Masochistic me still can't wait till Edward finds out. Chapter 17 was it? How exciting that it is almost here! Heading over to the thread to repeat myself in how brilliant your writing is. Keep up the good work my dear! :)
Author's Response: You are such an awesome cheerleader, you can have extra sprinkles on your Cullen sundae! Seriously, thank you for all of your support and for bringing people to the story. Only one more chap and let the fail begin.
Reviewer: ginbelle (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
OMG
I just read al of it and its just so...ugh frustrating
i soo need to know what happen next
please update soon
Author's Response: Lol! It is coming! Next chapter should come out this weekend. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Canadian Ginger (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
Hmm, Emmett and Jasper maybe?
Looking forward to reading more. :)
Author's Response: I think you will like Jasper when it is his turn, however not quite yet. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: tiffanyanne3 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
Gah! I need to get on the thread. More time for me to *not* be writing my latest chapter. LOL. Good chapter--I like that none of them would assume that B got pregnant by someone else. :)
Author's Response: Yeah, you should definitely have the impression that they were each other's firsts and onlys. It wouldn't and won't cross any of their minds to wonder. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
great job...i'm glad alice told him...but i really want edward to know everything.
Author's Response: He will. I promise! I am trying to be fair by giving the chapter number. In 17/18 Edward finds out all. Thank you so much for reviewing.
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
I think that it will be Bella and Carlisle. Now please update soon. I HAVE to know what happens next!!!
Author's Response: I am sure it will be up soon!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: KBfan (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
Nice chapter. I love that the story is now moving forward. Can't wait for the next episode.
Author's Response: I am sure it will be out pretty soon!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Sunfeathers (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
Ooh, things are moving fast now! Thank goodness the Cullens are finally getting informed and taking action. I have no idea whose pov is next - maybe Jasper and Emmett? I can't WAIT to hear what Emmett has to say about this.
Looking forward to your next update!
Author's Response: Oh, he will have plenty to say in time. Much more will happen soon.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Alyxandria (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
Yay an update! Carlisle took that better than most folks would've... I worry about how the other Cullens (Emmett) will react... :P
-Alyx
Author's Response: Carlisle just takes problems, digests them and moves on with solving them. It's his way. The rest... you'll see!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
Aww, I love Angela. That's so sweet! God, I can't even imagine what Bella is going through right now. Man. Good chapter hun!
Author's Response: I am glad you are enjoying the story!
Thank you for reviewing!
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