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Reviewer: mayian2 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

OMG! No you didn't end it there!  Argh!  I am going to have to go run on the treadmill to calm down! Whew! Thanks for that! *SMILES...with a pleading look attached and hands folded together*  Just glad you update fast!!

 



Author's Response: Lol! Have a nice run! I am sure the next chapter will be up soon! Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: lollipopstick28 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

OMG i will never forgive you if something bad's happened to the baby!!!!

lol, jst kidding, but seriously you might have to mail me kleenex!!!

Louise x



Author's Response: I assure you, the baby is fine! Stock up on the tissues tho! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: littlebit (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

I don't think you can hide well enough......

 

Ugh...I can't take the freaking suspense anymore...Whre the hell is Edward? Damnit all!



Author's Response: Edward will find out everything in Chapter 17 and 18. Not too far now! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: sharona (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY BUT NOT TOO THRILLED AT THE MOMENT HOWEVER I HAVE FAITH! :D THANKS FOR SHARING THIS WITH US!



Author's Response: Just hang in there! I promise you all will be well! Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: lovely_e (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

Yeah you better be in hiding until you post the next chapter ... LOL! But seriously, update ASAP bc I wanna know what's wrong with Bella!!! And Edward better find out soon bc he's been acting like a douche for too long...



Author's Response: He will find out in 17. It is a bit longer before we fins out what happened to Bella! Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: kstabb1001 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

Oh my goodness!! WHAT!!! I can't believe you left us hanging like that!  Please post another chapter tonight!  Screw your work where you can't get twilighted, take the week off and keep posting!!!  I am going crazy!  Please please tell me the baby is okay, that Bella is okay....Angela is right, she won't survive if something happens to the baby!! ARGHHHH!! hurry, hurry, hurry!!!!



Author's Response: I will say the baby is fine! I promise. As for everyone else, it is going to be a hell of a ride! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: TLP (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

Please tell me that "happy endings" involve living babies?  Heartfail I can take. Death of a child? Notsomuch.


Thanks for the update!



Author's Response: I will make this clear here, on the thread an in my next A/N, I will not hurt the baby. I am a mother and I have lost a child and I wouldn't wish that on anyone, real or fictional. You have my word!

Reviewer: cheetahfalls (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

hmm..if you already have chapter 30 written, why is chapter 15 only posted?

You're making us wait...how cruel.

This story is too heart wretching.



Author's Response: I post the next as soon as the previous one is validated! So the next should be out soon! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

I knew it... I knew it had something to do with the baby!

I'm repeating to myself 'she believes in happy endings'.  I hope the next chapter is out soon... I'm sure you have lots of people saying the same thing.

Oh Edward is going to freak!  I hope Carlisle can get some info & will have it handed onto Angela.  She's at least been there for part of this and taking care of Bella when no one else has (of course Bella wouldn't let anyone either).



Author's Response: Angela will not be left out. No way. As for freaking, that is mild for what Edward goes through. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: edwards_debussy (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

Oh God, PDT--is the baby going to be okay?!?!?!?!? Is BELLA going to be okay?

*deep breaths*

You know, you picked a good day to hit us with the major Code Orange heartfail--because SHIRTLESS ROB pics make EVERYTHING easier to deal with.  So while I could go on and flip out on you about this, I'm just going to go back to my SHIRTLESS ROB lust-induced haze, a truly happy place where the birdies are always chirping and Rob is ahem, waiting for me. 

(good update!;)



Author's Response: Lol! They do soften the blow! I am glad you enjoyed it and YES, the baby will be fine!

Reviewer: Jordanthegirl (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

oh my gosh!! update quick, i have to know what happens!



Author's Response: It is already written so it should be soon! Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Beautiful_Distraction (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

Ooooo....Ellie, girl!

A midnight phone call when I was up till 2 in the morning anyways, is not a big deal at all!  Hahahaha...now if you never call again, different story! lol! 

I love love love love this whole flippin' story!  I can't wait for the Edward chapter...you know i heart ya girly!

XOXO

-Whitney



Author's Response: Aw, shucks! I will call again as long as I am not lynched in the meantime! Thank you for all of your support!

Reviewer: Lacey0186 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

oh hell no you didn't kill the baby!!!!!  Can't wait to see what Edwards response to all this is..

Great update

 



Author's Response: No babies will be harmed. I like angst but am not heartless! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: BixxaCullen (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

don't worry! i have no sharp objects/flaming torches!!

I think this story is great! And this is a good plot twist...better than the typical "Edward heads home and life is all butterflies and faries again" totally didn't see this coming!!

Update soon please!

x



Author's Response: Thank you! I don't think many saw it coming! There won't be butterflies and faries for a while, but there will be a happy ending!

Reviewer: Piper Smith (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

You must update this ASAP! I need conclusions!



Author's Response: Oh, the conclusion is a way off! But there is a lot more to come and I am sure the next one will be up soon! Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: Abimaddevil17 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

You can't end it like that! that's pure evil! Update asap! or i might just go insane!!



Author's Response: I will update soon. The next chapter calms it down a bit! Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: agentpaper (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

you are telling a lovely story, but i'm not coming back until it's over. i'm too delicate for the teasing.



Author's Response: Hang in there. I assure you, the baby will be fine and there will be a happy ending. Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

Well that was a super crappy place to leave us hanging!!!  I think this is going to be a more messed up story than I thought...



Author's Response: Don't give up. The pay off is grand! And I will update soon. No babies will be harmed!

Reviewer: flormi (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

please please please dont kill the baby!!!!!!

i love your story!



Author's Response: The baby will be fine. I promise.

Reviewer: TwilightJemS (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail

Question: was the pregnancy because Bella & Edward were reckless since it was unplanned? It just doesn't seem like them. But then again, in the heat of the moment, it is really hard to think straight!



Author's Response: Very good question. They only had sex once when they got swept away in the meadow. They hadn't really expected to get that caught up and did not stop to think. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: smiles (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Strong Enough

Bella is going to find out Angela contacted the Cullens and she's going to run again isn't she? Or maybe Edward will freak out and get to her before alice. I can't wait to find out what happens. There's not much time left before the babie comes. Oh no, what if it comes early!! You have to update soon!!!

Author's Response: Lol! So many ideas, so little time! The chapter will be up soon though! Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: TwilightJemS (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar

That is something that I can't seem to understand fully. I'm a very selfish person & if I had to make a decision on whether to be with the love of my life or live without him? I wouldn't be able to leave, no matter the circumstances... As I said, I'm selfish...



Author's Response: They aren't doing very well with living either. It is a good point, but that is the crux of the story. Decisions and their consequences. Thank you so much for your review!

Reviewer: memmem95 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Strong Enough

An angsty plot-wrinkle??? Hmm.  Bella runs or Edward find out too soon could be possible. Next chapter is possibly Bella's POV or Angela's POV or if next chapter is more of a Cullen chapter maybe Emmett or Edward POV. Love the story! I hope you post soon because I can't wait for the Code Red chapters. I love angst as long as there is a happy ending. And you believe in happy endings!!!

Loved this chapter. Alice was really kind to Edward while still getting the point across. I also liked seeing how the rest of the family acts.



Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying this! The Code Red is coming soon! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: TwilightJemS (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living

Now that I'm finished nursing my son, I can finally leave you a review!

Edward leaving in New Moon is such an over-done story but THIS story is so original! You've put such an interesting twist while still keeping to the same line but also straying from the norm. It's great!

Oh, I was also told to tell you that Burrberry Bugsy sent me! I usually don't read too much on this site because the background & font size bother me, but she said your story was worth it. She was right!



Author's Response: Been there on the feedings! Man, I am going to have to start paying Burberry for he PR work! I am glad you think it was worth it!

Reviewer: twilight girly 1901 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Strong Enough

PLEASE UPDATE! i need to know what happens :] so intense! lol.



Author's Response: The chapter has already been submitted! Thank you for reviewing!

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