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Reviewer: susyq (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary

I can't wait for him to find out about the baby.  Keep writing...I'm waiting :)



Author's Response:

Oh, he's about to!

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

WHATTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!????!!!!????!!! omg omg omg omg omg NO!!!

Next chap plz :(



Author's Response:

The next chapter is already up!

Enjoy!  And thank you for reviewing...

Reviewer: just me (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary

Awwww, but at least he is coming along willingly.

Reviewer: Saturn (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary

Uh oh!!  THis is gonna be good - I think telling him on a plane is a good thing.

 

I can't wait for next chapter - your writing is riveting!!!  I freaking love it!!

Reviewer: sjones5199 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary

So good...can't wait for the big reveal!

Reviewer: dolphin62598 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

This is absolutely the most amazing fic I think I've ever read!!  I have been totally and completely captivated for all chapters you have posted!  It literally took me about 2 hours to read everything!!  I can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Wow!  Thank you for this amazing review.  I'm so glad you are enjoying the story!

Reviewer: memmem95 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 03:37 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

Oh...

I don't know what my theories are. Maybe Alice or Bella. Do did Bella defininatly not do something to herself or is it possible she did it? Thanks for writing but now I'm sad. Please update more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Bella definitely did *not* do this and the baby is most definitely okay...

The next chapter should be up soon!

Reviewer: rnx24us (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

wow.....totally didn't see this coming....this is code orange? please don't leave us hanging........This is an awesome story....



Author's Response: Coming soon, promise! Hang in there!

Reviewer: Alyndriel (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

Oh, poor Bella.  I cried.  Sparse, but well-written.  I hate it when people think drama has to be really, really, really dense with tears and snot slung on the walls or it doesn't count as tension/drama.  I liked yours much better.  OK, girlie, now let's see those other two chapters so I don't have the sniffles all weekend.  I want the baby to be OK, and I'm ready for something to shock Edward out of his, well, funk isn't strong enough of a word.  Self-absorbed cloud of angst?  Maybe the baby would manage that.  I wouldn't mind seeing a chapter's worth of Edward finally coming back to himself and realizing that he made the biggest goof in the history of goofs.



Author's Response: I write from a purely emotional standpoint for this story, so there is very little narrative or even extraneous description. I am glad you are enjoying it! And Edward will pay, and he will rise to the occasion. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: sda23 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

Just read the story from 1 to 15. Oh. My. God. You are evil. Truly evil. please...please...please contiue! FAST!!!!! 



Author's Response: Thhe chapter is already submitted. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: sda23 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

Just read the story from 1 to 15. Oh. My. God. You are evil. Truly evil. please...please...please contiue! FAST!!!!! 



Author's Response: I do update quickly! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Sunfeathers (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 09:18 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

OMG what a cliffie! PLEASE tell me the baby's OK!

This story is so riveting and I know we're in for some seriously sad chapters, but I can't stop reading. It's so so good.

Also, thank you for updating so quickly. It must be a lot of work for you, but we appreciate it!



Author's Response: Come by the thread for info on the baby. It is fine. Thanks for believing in me!

Reviewer: trutwilightfantasy (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

Oh yeah, that was just mean as hell!!! But I have faith in you that all is OK. God, I hope so!



Author's Response:

It will be!  I promise!

The next chapter is already submitted!

Reviewer: PLV (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 04:16 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

Um wow.That wasn't a pleasant chapter to read but I understand it had to ahppen. I hope all will be ok. I am glad Angela went and found Bella and called 911. Sorry stupid Mike. The girl is preganant for goodness sakes. Anywho I hope the Cullen's get there in time and bring Charlie to. Please update soon.



Author's Response: Mike just us clueless. He was worried, but didn't know how worried to be! It will be okay. Hang in there!

Reviewer: Sweetheartwithfangs (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 04:05 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

...*squeee*ok...hehe sorry about that...*breathes deeply*..I know it will turn out ok so I'm not in the least bit mad...but the baby survives right?...Here comes the big reveal..ok..shh..hand over the popcorn...



Author's Response: The baby will be fine. Promise. There is a big A/N in the next chapter to set everyone's mind at ease! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Purple83 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 03:36 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End

umm yeah...get better and end up in an happy ending... :)



Author's Response:

There will be a happy ending.  I promise!

Reviewer: monokuroboo69 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 03:30 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

still loving Burrberry Bugsy for rec'ing this! its so good! holy crap i had to breathe into a paper bag for this one. you're not going to kill off the baby right? i'm freaking out but BB swears up and down that you believe in happy endings and cuz she has so much faith in you, so do i! keep writing!



Author's Response:

I will harm no babies.  I promise!  Thank you for having faith!

Reviewer: jlou10dun (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 03:09 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

Ahhhh I hope you don't kill off the baby! I'm sitting anxiously awaiting the next chapter



Author's Response:

The baby will be fine.  I promise.

 

Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: cullenobsession (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 02:43 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

I have chills.  Great chapter.  I wish it was longer though.  I can't wait till you post again and keep up the great work. = )



Author's Response: Thank you! I will post again soon!

Reviewer: scoots_357 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 12:01 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

More, More, More.....I need more

Reviewer: scoots_357 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 12:00 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

More, More, More.....I need more



Author's Response: There is plenty more to come! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Purple83 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 11:58 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End

it HAS TO!



Author's Response: It has to?

Reviewer: starcrossdlover (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

no need to hide as far as i'm concerned...i mean, of course i'm hoping for a happy ending with everyone healthy and safe, but i do like it when we have to get over mountains of angst to get there...not everything can be fluffy bunnies where love is concerned. kudos for an awesome story; i'm always super happy when i see an update :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I agree with you.  What is a happy ending if you don't have to work for it!?

I appreciate your review.

Reviewer: keola (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

okay I'm a big happy endings girl! The baby has to be okay & bella too and then of course eventually paleeeeese get edward & bella back together!



Author's Response:

Everyone will be okay... eventually.  It's going to be a bumpy ride.

Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: venomousgal (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

WOW!  Talk about tension and heartfail!  You are the goddess!

Congrats on reaching 1000 reviews!  You totally deserve it Ellie!

*Reaches for kleenex and sniffles*  Now on with the heartfail!



Author's Response:

LOL!

Thank you, my dearest.  The heartfail is to come!

I appreciate your support *so* much!

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