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Reviewer: iponeddyou (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
Alrighty! This is my first review, though I've been keeping up since Angela found our beloved Marie/Bella! xD
I had to review now, because my stomachs in a knot and I'm shaking. Oh! I can't wait for the next update. And I'm happy to say that the baby isn't going anywhere. Though it isn't all flowers and butterflies, it's all coming together.
Question though, have we made our way past the wrinkle? Was that last chapter? Or, should we still expect it?
I think this is brilliant, and a welcoming change to the other twists on New Moon. I'm literally attached to this fanfic. And, I must say, though I love the boy. Not having Jacob in the way makes it a ton better. =]
Can't waiiitttt for the next update, I might pop up in the twilighter forum, keep up your fabulous writing! I'm gonna be on the edge of my seat till the next update....hope my butt doesn't go numb.
XOXO - Cherolyn
Author's Response: Thank you for coming out to review! I'm so grateful for it!
Yes, the wrinkle was Bella's condition. Without that piece of information, a lot of people's theories went in a different direction.
We'd be happy to have you on the forums, although we do get a wee bit crazy over there between chapters. The clip for 17 will be up later today....
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
Please, please, please, get more of the story out. I am on the edge of my couch wanting to hit the next button again to see Edwards reaction. How is Bella going to handle everything? PLEASE update again soon!
Author's Response: I always do update quickly!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: OCD - ObsessiveCullenDisorder (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
OMFG..... update now please.....I know everyone says that but honestly I'm on the end of my seat waiting for his reaction.....
You always make me teary eyed and I've got a huge box of tissues on stand by for the next chapter....
Plus I'd like to thank you for the A/N at the beginning.... my faith in HEA is back in place....
Once again you've done an amazing job.....
Author's Response: I am glad the A/N helped. I needed to be clear on that.
Tissues *will* be required for the next few chapters. 17 has quite a cliffie as well...
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: oceanluvr3 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
I hope Edward surprises everyone and even himself and does not make this all about himself by playing his self-hatred card. I hope he really does man up.
I am worried about the baby. When will we know if the baby is ok... if Bella is ok??? Charlie is going to freak out. As he should, poor man. Heck, I am freaking out.
Great chapter.
Author's Response: Edward will make you proud in the end. The reaction, not so much at first....
I'll tell you right now, the baby is okay...
Charlie? Oh my. He doesn't do so well at first.
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Roselover2 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
BEAUTIFUL!!!!
I love take charge Alice and how the family is rallying and not going to allow Edward to wallow anymore
he needed a kick in the ass a while ago but that is my way and not thiers
LOL
Author's Response: LOL! I agree. But Alice does things her way and it'll work out!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Beautiful_Distraction (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
Ellie!!
Oh my god....Chapter 17 is next!! Eeekk!
Love ya girly!
XOXO
-Whitney
Author's Response: Yup.
Here we go!
GAH! Code Red begins....
Reviewer: dancing_in_my_underwear (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG They are on their way and in one or two chapters will be with Bella and we'll no what the HELL is going on!!! AND Edwards gonna find out in the next chapter!!!!! Fuck it's all going on over here isn't it? Don't wait to long before the next post! PLEASE!!!
Author's Response: LOL! It's all about to go down...
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: corriander (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
Oh My God the Author notes are longer than what you post LOL! Your killing us with suspense here ;)
Author's Response: In this case, they were, but I thought it necessary. At least I update quickly!
Reviewer: bgwillis (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
Can we move this along please. The chapters are too short. I'm ready for Edward to know and for a little reunion.
Author's Response: I'm sorry, but the chapter length is for a reason. Please be patient with them. The next chapter will be out soon.
Thank you for reviewing.
Reviewer: iyaaan (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
if you could kindly update soon that would be great. i really love this fic. i do. so please update soon:)
Author's Response: How polite! Of course I will.
Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: MyBloodSmellsBetter (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
OMG!!!! I'm soooo anxious for them to tell Edward. He's gonna flip!!!
Author's Response: He is not going to take it well, that's for sure!
Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
I love bossy Alice. I'm still worried about Bella. And I just want to say, I didn't think she was having a miscarrage (at least I hoped she wasn't) but I had a feeling that was going to have an early labor or something similar. I hope that everything will go well.
Author's Response: In the end, all will be fine. We'll just have to wait a while to get there...
Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
NEXT CHAPTER..........PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: It is coming soon!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: chloey24 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
I' really glad that he's going. I have to say that I appreciate your author's note the most though. One of my best friends miscarried just before she got pregnant with her second child (well third) and while I could sympathize I couldn't empathize until it happened to me. I have wanted another baby for so long that I thought I would go crazy when I found out I miscarried. It was so hard to function, but I have two other children who needed me so I talked to my friend and having someone who could TRULY empathize helped. I'm really glad that you explained your reasons for not letting her lose the baby. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: I am truly glad the A/N helped, as it was difficult to write. Still, I thought it important for folks to know from what place I am writing this story and that I won't put people through that pain unnecessarily.
Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
I will so not bullshit you but hell i got teary eyes there when Alice told the family about Bella and how strong she had to be.
Esp the ending where she had to get Edward ready to leave and he asked if it was bella :'(
OMG i am so nervous for the big reveal :S................i'm trying to steel myself for the reactions.....cuz they are gonna be tear worthy i can see it already.
Author's Response: The big reveal is split into two chapters and there is a bit of a cliffie... but I update quickly!
Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: Jadalulu (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
Yayyyyyyyyyy! Closer to the reunion! I know it won't be easy but I want them back together SOOOO bad! GO EDWARD!!!!! Go get her!
Author's Response: He's on his way now and he'll be a different man once he gets there.
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Maplestyle (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
I can't wait for Edward's reaction..I've been on pins and needles for the last couple of days thinking about how he's going to react!
Author's Response: You shall soon find out. It's split into two chapters, so there is a bit of a cliffie, but I update quickly!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Lamb4Peace (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
I know that I don't review enough, but I just feel like I should let you know that I love this fic so much. I look forward to reading every update and each time I see the banner I do a little happy dance (okay, maybe a BIG happy dance). I commend your strength for being able to write something like this. I really do appreciate your talent and the time that you put into this.
Author's Response: Thank you for such a thoughtful review. I am grateful!
I am sure more will come out soon!
Reviewer: Yella_loves_Edward (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
YaY! I cant wait to read the next chapter!!!!! EDWARD FINDS OUT! =)
Author's Response: It's split into two and it's coming up soon!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: v1cky84 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
NOOOOOO...I want more!!!! Thank you for updating often and reassuring us that Bella will not lose her child. I hope you'll update soon.
Author's Response: I am sure it will be up soon!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
Yes! Edward is on his way.. And oh, thank you for your A/N that helped.
Please do update quickly (I know, I know, everyone always is begging for a quick update but I am dying here ;) LOL ) so I can believe in HEA's too.
Author's Response: LOL! The happily ever after is a ways to go yet! But I will update soon!
I am glad the A/N helped.
Thank you for the review.
Reviewer: mayian2 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
Thanks for the A/N at the beginning! I needed it! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I am glad it helped.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Shadowdragon13 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
I'm starting to think they should have drugged Edward to get him on the plane. I know this next chapter is going to be intense and I can't wait to see how Edward really does handle it. Your writing is addictive, please get us a "fix" soon!
Author's Response: Edward's chapter is split into 2 and trust me, you feel it.
Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: iliveforthis (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
omgomgomg the suspense is so thick... *bites lip nervously*
Author's Response: Hang on! More soon!
Thank you for reviewing.
Reviewer: secamimom (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
Oh, I am in tears here. My heart is beating a mile a minute. I absolutely loved it! Please tell me you will have the next chapter out soon. I can't wait!
Author's Response: I always do!
Thank you for the review!
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