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Reviewer: samasa (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
i love this story i do, but why so many spaces between lines? i love this. at least edward knows now!
Author's Response: I am sorry! Just a function of how my version of Word translates to the Twilighted system! Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: MyBloodSmellsBetter (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:26 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
OMG!!! That's just cruel to leave us all hanging right there! but it's all good i guess, but I am waiting with baited breath for the next half so please hurry!
Author's Response: I will submit it tonight! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: runner28 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:24 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
so sad
Author's Response: Alas, even sadder to come. Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: saranic (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:24 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
Gah!! Right at the good part! So evil. :)
He did do it, he should feel remorse. Both of them were immature and need to get their feelings out and then move forward. I can't wait to see what happens next! :)
Author's Response: I split it in two for a reason, I promise. HUGE changes for Edward in 18. Thank you for reviewing.
Reviewer: tricomi (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:22 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
This is so sad story. I can't even imagine what's going to happen when they meet with Bella. My heart is literally breaking right now.
Author's Response: That first meeting is heartfail. Really hard to read. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:22 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You left it at "she was pregnant," are you trying to kill me? >D Don't tell me I have to wait a week to find out anymore info.! LOL You are mean, that chapter was deff. in the red. Loved it!
Author's Response: Of course you won't wait a week! I will submit tonight! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:19 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
It's not too bad! Honestly, this is code red? Damn, I must a cold hearted bitch! I don't think it's that angsty. You bring across Edward's feelings really well, I love it!
Author's Response: Lol! No you aren't. This one is barely red. There is more to come! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: nicarter (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:19 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
ahhhhh give me more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Soon! I promise! Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Iwant2sparkle (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:18 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
Here's my review...I need more!!!! Please post the other half soon! I am dying here!
Author's Response: I will submit it tonight! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: KristenSwan (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:18 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
Way to leave me hanging!!!!! You are good at cliffies, unfortunately. I am impatient. Good plot, by the way.
Author's Response: Thank you! I won't lwave you hanging for long!
Reviewer: edwards_debussy (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:16 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
AAAAAGH!! What a cliffie! I can only imagine Edward's reaction to this news. I would imagine he's going to be physically ill.
And since it seems that Carlisle has been in contact with the hospital where Bella is, he's going to divulge some information on the condition of Bella and the baby.
Great update, can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: There is defintely more to come on all counts! 18 will be submitted tonight! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: secamimom (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
I freaking squeeled when I saw this update in my email. Loved it! cannot wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! There really is a reason for me to split it in two!
Reviewer: anna123 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
Way to keep us hanging! That was not very nice! Please, please, hurry to update?! Pretty please? :)
Author's Response: I am sorry, but 18 is ready to go! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: lisambb (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
Ok, you should duck! That was pure evil leaving us hanging like that. Hope to see another update soon!
Author's Response: It had to be done! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:11 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
OMG !!!!OMG!!!!!OMG!!!!!I'M GLAD HE KNOWS, BUT PLEASE!!!!!!!!UPDATE ASAP!!!!I'M SO TOTALLY HOOKED!!!!
Author's Response: It is all set and ready to go! I will submit tonight! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:11 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
Oh, how could you! You are brillant, but also evil! I beg you to update soon!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: It had to be done! 18 needs to stand alone because it changes everything! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: twitilated (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:10 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
Oh my god, I would be ducking too. Awaiting anxiously for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Lol! It is all ready to go so it should be up soon! Thanks for reviewing
Reviewer: Piper Smith (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:10 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
Rawr! Come on! Post that second half so the lot of us can breathe somewhat of a sigh!
No seriously...running out of oxygen....
You possibly just killed off half of the readers to this story due to the inability to breathe a sigh of relief!!
Just kidding, but can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: No! Don't die! No! It will be up soon! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: GoldenSun (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:10 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
next chapter now please??
Author's Response: I will submit it tonight! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:09 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
Argh! You can't just leave it with that one sentance and end the chapter! No! Please say the next chapter will be posted later today? Tonight? Don't leave us hanging like that for too long. Please?
Author's Response: I will submit it tonight. It is ready to go and total heartfail so be prepared! Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: kuntrygal (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:09 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
OMG that was a great chapter! You are the master of cliff hangers though! LOL! Loved getting EPOV!
Author's Response: More Edward shortly and his reaction to his impending fatherhood. Thanks for all the support!
Reviewer: 3 little cullen boys (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:09 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
Wow you should be hiding after that, well writen, this along with Tropic Vertigo are my fav. stories, great writing!!!!
Author's Response: I am glad you are enjoying! I will update soon! Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: bgwillis (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:08 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
Sorry to be harsh but I'm getting a little impatient. These chapters are entirely too short, with barely any movement in the story. I find in ironic in author notes that authors know readers aren't going to like it but do it anyway.
And Emmett's still a jerk.
Author's Response: Just because we know that something may not be well received does not mean there is no reason to do it. I am sorry you are disappointed.
Reviewer: hbedell (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:05 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
GAH!!
....you vile...evil.... *grins*
LMAO!! I really love cliffies!
Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed! There is more coming soon. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: sjones5199 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:04 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
Evil...Evil...Evil.... but I loved it!
Author's Response: I am glad! Thank you for the review!
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