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Reviewer: iyaaan (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! don't leave us hanging like this!! please update soon. please, please, please, please, please!
Author's Response: LOL! I submitted it last night. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: stupidsuckedinreader (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
LOVE IT! Beautiful writing. Cannot wait for the next chapter. I had 5 story updates today and your's was the first I clicked on.
Author's Response: LOL! I submitted it last night. Thank you for reviewing and for clicking here first!
Reviewer: mom2kandg (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
Please post as soon as you possibly can you just love leaving cliffies don't you? I was on the edge of my seat the whole time and then nothing but I will tell you this, THIS IS AN AWESOME STORY!!!!
Author's Response: LOL! I submitted 18 last night and explained why I split them. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Brie (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
PLEASE!!! hurry, i want to know what edward does!!! but of course i know the next chapter will probably be angela's POV or something! :((( but anyway LOVE LOVE LOVE it!!! :) :D
Author's Response: LOL! I submitted it last night and you'll get your wish. All Edward, all the time. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Meikela (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
Arrrrggghhh!!!! Ok - I'll wait, but it's killing me. Brilliant chapter!
Author's Response: LOL! I submitted it last night. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: jrojrojro (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
Holy mother of angsty chapters, batman! I can't believe the chapter ended there! I'm going to go nuts while I wait to see how he took the news. Geesh, I'm entirely too emotionally involved in fanfic. Ah, but that's another story for another time. Love this story to pieces and I can't wait for more. Keep up the bloody brilliance, lovie!
Author's Response: Oh no! 18 is quite a bit angstier. You'll have it quite soon, I think! I'm glad you're so involved. It means I'm doing something well!
Thanks so much for your awesome review!
Reviewer: UR_PERSONAL_HEROIN (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
WOW!!! THIS STORY KEEPS GETTING BETTER. BUT PLEASE I NEED MORE. THE CLIFF HANGERS ARE GUNNA KILL ME. LOL. WELL MAYBE NOT KILL ME, BUT THEY LEAVE ME WANTING TO READ SO MUCH MORE. YOU ARE DOING A VERY GREAT JOB OF LEAVING US TO WHERE THE IS NOTHING WE CAN DO EXCEPT KEEP LOOKING FOR UPDATES.
Author's Response: It is all part of my evil plan!
Nah, I had a reason for doing this. You'll see.
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: BrownEyes11 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life
Wow, so good, and so deep. I love how you write, it's almost like poetry. I am a little confused though. You say he has inhuman strength, but you say it's all human. Anyway, great story! Keep writing!
Author's Response: Ah, it's not that he *has* inhuman strength, but he displayed it in that incident. Like when a mother can lift up a car if it would save her baby. Adrenaline.
Thank you for reviewing and for making me think!
Reviewer: BrownEyes11 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End
Really awesome. I'm reading your story for the website, reviewing it to be nominated or whatever. Really good so far, can't wait to see what happens. I love how you just hint at what's going on, and the reader has to think to figure it out.
Author's Response: Nominated? I am in the dark on this one... But I'm excited to find out!
Wow, thank you for the review! The story is really just written from an emotional perspective, so it's only what one character is thinking or feeling at the time and the reader has to fill in the blanks. Oh, and try not to kill me for leaving them hanging!
I so appreciate you coming out to review!
Reviewer: brie_116 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
OMG i started reading this story and now im addicted.Thank you for the quick updates.
Start ducking for cover girl .Only joking,fantastic chapter.
Author's Response: LOL! I submitted it last night. Thank you for reviewing! I'm glad you found our story!
Reviewer: Purple83 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
by the end of this I was hyperventilating already in anticipation of Edward's reaction to the news of the pregnancy...well I trust you to deliver in the next chapter because the hype is only getting worse here... :)
Author's Response: I know, right?! I *never* expected the amount of reviews this story is getting. WOW!
I submitted 18 last night, so it should be up soon. Thank you for your support and your review!
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
you better go hide!
lol, j/k, way to keep us on our toes!
I seriously can't wait for the next chapter :)
Author's Response: LOL! I submitted it last night. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Tookie83 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
darn it--- these chapters are way too short
Author's Response: I address that in the next A/N. The chapter was submitted last night, so it should be up soon. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: amandahugnkiss (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
Yeah you better hide! ha ha... more please and like NOW :)
Author's Response: LOL! I submitted it last night. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: uscfbfan (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
Hehehe - cliffies are the worst, and you probably will be stoned in FF world. Please, please, please update your story sooner that I update mine.
Author's Response: LOL! I submitted it last night. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: VampireInTraining (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! You are truly an amazing writer and that is one of two reasons i havent thrown a potatoe at you... the other reason is that i need to know what is next. Please update soon... like today kind of soon, this is all i can think about and i have finals this week!!!
Author's Response: LOL! I submitted it last night. Thank you for reviewing and for not throwing a potato!
Reviewer: Steelerfan (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
love this story hate your cliff hangers
Author's Response: LOL! At least I resolve them quickly! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Cedwardsgirl (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
omg omg omg you took SOOOO long to get him to say it and then you leave it like THAT?????
ahhh so not fair.
hurry and review ma'am!!
Author's Response: LOL! I submitted it last night. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Serenity1347 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
Please update soon, you are killing us here!
I really hope they get there before Bella has the baby. She needs her family there for that I think.
x
Author's Response: LOL! I submitted it last night and they *will* make it before the baby makes an appearance. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: ipreferbrunettes (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
Start ducking for cover girl!
Only joking, fantastic chapter. Loved it, loved it, loved it! Can't wait to see Edward's reaction to the news.
Author's Response: LOL! I submitted it last night. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Sunfeathers (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
Gah, this chapter was amazing!! I think I was holding my breath through the whole thing, lol. The build up of angst, the hedging ... but WHAT IS HE GOING TO SAY???
I heard a rumor at the threads there will be another update tonight? Oh my gosh, if that is true, pomme, you are truly too good to us. Whenever it comes, I can't wait!!
Author's Response: I did submit it for validation last night, so hopefully we will see it shortly!
Thank you for all of your support both here and at the thread!
Reviewer: yiotatort (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
Ok, the spacing is getting annoying. It's like insane pausing between sentences. If it continues I'll stop reading, I wouldn't read one giant block of text with no spacing and I don't think I'll continue with this much longer the way it's set up.
Author's Response: I address this in the A/N of the next chapter, but it is a function of a system translation problem and not intentional. I do hope we won't lose you, but, I'm afraid, I cannot afford a new Word program in order to avoid the spacing. Many apologies.
Reviewer: amkh (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
OMG OMG OMG WAT
!NO NO NO!
NO
RELEASE THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! I NEED TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
Author's Response: LOL! I submitted it last night. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Laxmom (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
Argh!!! Oh please, please don't wait too long to update...........
Author's Response: LOL! I submitted it last night. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: fallenangel126 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
ahh i want to scream.. great chapter please update soon.. i figure emmett probably wont have to beat up edward but a smack upside the head wont hurt too bad.. cant wait for more!!!!
Author's Response: LOL! I submitted it last night. Thank you for reviewing!
(and Edward will get hit in a future chap, but *not* by Emmett)
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