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Reviewer: brie_116 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
Heartbreaking just overall powerful chapter.It's sad and depressing, it's just bittersweet.
Fantastic story really,don't stop.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your wonderful review!
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
I sure hope that baby is okay!? I know you said you wouldn't put us through the loss of a child, so I'm going with that. Love the update.
Author's Response: I give you my word. In fact, I have already written the scene where edward meets his child! It is all okay.
Reviewer: fletchmartin (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
WOW. That was a powerful chapter. Esme is the bomb! She laid it all out on the line to get Edward mentally prepared for what he is about to face and I'm so glad she did! I feel so bad for Edward though. Imagine finding out that the person left in order to protect has been suffering alone and pregnant all that time! My heart aches just thinking about it. I'm pretty sure there are more rough times ahead, like Chief Swan finding out, Bella's reaction to Edward coming back, the baby...oh my goodness, the baby! The baby is okay right?
Well, I read all 18 chapters in one sitting and I have to say that I haven't cried this much over a story before. Any story! Or movie! Loving it all so far! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Yes, there are some very tough times ahead for each of these folks. So much to fix! Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: Venus_Star2_com (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
I'm so glad it would be a miscarriage
My sister recently lost a child ....it was her second...a son
the pain is indescribeable and all I can do is hold her hand so I am glad that at least bella won't fall to the same fate
Bella is going to have a hard time accepting edward.....feeling he is onyl back because she had a child....their reunion won't be a happy one.....
rachie
Author's Response: Yes, I do promise the baby will be fine. That is not the story I am telling. You are right, Bella is going to have a very hard time accepting this. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: fletchmartin (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
Oh, thank God there's another chapter! I just about died at the end of this one!
Author's Response: It was a bit of a cliffie, I know! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
“Then come,” Esme whispered, pulling my head to her chest and kissing my hair, rocking me steadily and humming softly. “You can be a child for a moment longer.” – What a wonderful way to mark the beginning of a new chapter in Edward’s life. GORGEOUS.
I find your EPOV narrative to be both heart breaking and wonderfully powerful. Every thought he has is strong, desperate, and demanding of our sympathy and compassion. The pacing is masterful as it manages to draw us in to Edward’s inner agony in a way that truly encompasses the gravity of his actions. And it is dizzying in it’s power.
With all sincerity, your EPOVs are fantastic. They are the anchor to your story, as well as Bella’s. I simply cannot wait to read more. I’m addicted in a bad, bad way…and I love it!
Author's Response: I am blown away by this review. Thank you so much. I have to get myself into the head of each character to write a chapter, and Edward's head is a dark and powerful place. I am glad you have enjoyed it.
Reviewer: apearl94 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
PLEASE KEEP GOING
This story is by far one of the best I've read. It's incredibly well written, not only compared to other stories in the world of fan fiction, but in published literature as well.
Great Job.
Author's Response: Wow! That is an amazing compliment and I am very grateful. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: fletchmartin (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
I just want to hug Alice for everything she's going through. The love of her life is coming home but she needs to leave to take care of her best friend and help her brother. Poor little thing is carrying so much weight on her shoulders.
Edward. He can feel something's wrong with Bella. Oh God, what is he going to do when he finds out what it is?????? Here we go... I have a feeling I'm going to need more kleenex.
Author's Response: He is going to fall into the self loathing, of course! But will he stay there? Alice is such a strong, loyal little one! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: vighnigh (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
first of all, whenever i see "masta beta", my mind goes right to the gutter. that said, this is the only all-human story i read, it has completely sucked me in. more please
Author's Response: Lol! You should see the naughtiness said beta gets up to on my thread (me too)! I am glad you gave my story a try and have enjoyed it. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: fletchmartin (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response
Holy hell! You're killing me! How much worse can it get before it gets better? Please say the baby is okay. PLEASE!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: It gets far worse, but do not fret about the baby. The baby will be fine. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Mango_Live (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
i say we hear from the cheif.... he has been left alone for so long now.. as much as a wish to know of Bella's condition, her father needs to be heard
Author's Response: We will hear from Charlie, but not quite yet. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: soluna1989 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
I seriously love Esme in this chapter, I think everyone needs a little 'Honest tough love' sometimes and you definately captured the moment so beautifully lol my sister saw me crying while I read this and she laughed when I told her it was about Edward and Bella but then she started reading it and she ended up being emotional too( she's a closet twilight fan lol)!! Keep up the great work and update soon please :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Esme so rocked! Edward needed the truth with a side order of comfort.
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
OMG I literally DIED!! *sigh* I practically held my breath for this chap!...Edward's pain was sooooo intense.
Brilliant Job!!
Everytime he thought...."Our baby"......carrying "MY" child.....it was so sad and depressing and amazing all at the same time...so bittersweet really.
I'm just in awe of it all.
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you! I appreciate your review!
Reviewer: fletchmartin (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Nightmare of a Love Story
This is sooooooooooo emotional! OMG, my husband walked in while I was reading and asked where the funeral was! I'm a wreck! I love the way these two girls interacted. You can feel their love for Bella and the heartache they both feel over the situation. So heartbreaking!
Author's Response: This is so hard on everyone! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: v1cky84 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
I want MORREEE!!!!! It always leaves me wanting to read more. Please update soon. I'm really dying to know what happened to Bella.
Author's Response: I always update quickly! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: fletchmartin (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
OK, I'll cheer for Emmett now. Yaay Emmett! :) He's so funny. I love him!
Author's Response: Emmett will have several upcoming chaps! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: fletchmartin (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking
Emmett the big dork! He didn't check Facebook for 2 weeks??? Oh well, at least it finally dawned on him to do so. Thank goodness they got in touch with Angela! Ugh, I could hit Emmett! It could've happened sooner! Okay, need to calm down. These chapters are going by way too fast! Okay, let's move on to the next one...
Author's Response: Lol! He was busy!
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: sass052 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
This has been a fantastic story, please post more soon.
Author's Response: I am so glad you have enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: fletchmartin (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage
Hey, Emmett finally put a smile on my face after all the crying...
“Alright, well let's get going and find Blushy Mc Clumsypants....New car for the first one to find her?”
Leave it to him lighten up the mood! I hope he checks his Facebook soon!
Author's Response: Emmett ROCKS! I love writing him this way!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: bellasunderstudy (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
Oh I most definitely need a support group after reading this...That was amazing. Go Esme! She stepped in when she needed to and gave Edward the swift kick in the ass that he needed. He can't be a child any longer and wollow in his self loathing, it's time to let all that go and man up. This story is so painful but OH MY GOD it's amazing. I love this chapter. Edward has a long road ahead of him and I have a feeling the reunion and seeing Charlie when he finds out why Bella left is not going to be pleasant. Charlie is going to be postal I would imagine when he finds out that Bella is pregnant and has been living how she has for the last several months. Then knowing she was pregnant and Edward left her, regardless of the fact that he didn't know, Charlie is not going to be a happy camper. This story just continues to get better and better. Amazing job!
Author's Response: Yeah, Charlie doesn't take this so well, but you'll be surprised about what he does. Edward DOES man up. It's not all at once, but he does.
Hang in there. I think you'll appreciate it!
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: KellyCullen (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
The baby better be ok!! :)
Author's Response: I *swear* the baby is okay!
Reviewer: fletchmartin (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough
I love all the different points of view in your story! It's wonderful to read about what's going on through other people's eyes, other than Bella's or Edward's. To me, it creates a bigger world and it works great with your plot because we can see what's going on behind the scenes, things that neither Bella or Edward would be aware of.
Author's Response: The whole story's premise is the emotional responses of *everyone* during a very trying time. I am glad you are enjoying it!
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: fletchmartin (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
Angela is s awesome! She's my hero right now! Bella's whole situation is so heartbreaking and the letter she wrote to Charlie was so sad. I swear, I don't think I've cried this much reading so few chapters of a Twilight fanfic before. Granted, I've only been reading for a few months but I read almost every day! Great story and awesome writing!
Author's Response: I am so honoured. I am sorry you cried, but it means I'm doing something right! Just keep in mind I *do* believe in happy endings!
Reviewer: latinabeauty70 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
Man do I love Esme. What a mom. I can understand his thoughts but he needs to accept this, put his thoughts aside and be there for bella!
Great chap and thanks for the quick update. Loved it.
Author's Response: Esme ROCKS! I love writing her this way!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Rinalysee (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
Edward really has to cut the self pity out and become strong. I'm really anxious to see what happens when they get to the hospital. I hope everything is fine with Bella and the baby. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: The hospital will be ugly.
Thanks for reviewing!
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