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Reviewer: tigerlily23 (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2011 12:53 AM · On: Chapter 1: Love at First SIght?
Reviewer: shookie (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 12:44 AM · On: Chapter 6: Text Message
If his arm is broken.....How is he going swimming?? he seems really stalkerish
Reviewer: twilightgirl98 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 13: Trust Me
So I have been thinking about this story lately, and I decided to re-read what was there is so far. So now i have a question: When are you going to update??????????????????? The suspense is KILLING ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I mean I know life sometimes gets in the way, but I NEED to know what happens next! Please, please, PLEASE, update soon! I AM DYING OVER HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! No pressure though. :-)
Reviewer: gpl993 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 13: Trust Me
Edward's going to find his Daddy! Hee hee hee here he comes!
Reviewer: ElizabethGere (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 13: Trust Me
Oh wow! I hope that Edward is able to keep Bella safe! I look forward to see what Edward has going through his head and where his plan is heading. Update again soon!!!
Reviewer: ImaFampire (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 13: Trust Me
And you DON'T CONTINUE?!? For like 4 months? GAH CMON!!! Please update :P.... SOON!!
Reviewer: pri_gurgel (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 13: Trust Me
Hi there, i know u metioned that u started school(hope u r enjoying it!), ur sister had a baby(is it a girl or a boy, hope he/she is ok as well!), ur parents are almost done with the divorce(i can say a lot about that, but since my mom got divorced from my dad, things just turned out better at home, so hope u ok!), u got a new GREAT paying job(which means u r probably a lot more busier that before) and hopefully ur boyfriend proposed... But i was wondering if by any chance do u plan on getting back to this story... i was enjoying it so much!! take care, looking forward for a next chapter asap!
Author's Response: Hi! My sister had a girl...mom and dad still trying to divorce...really busy (but that's because I'm writing a new story! You should check it out!)...and my bf still hasn't proposed... :(
I DO plan on getting back to this story, I just sort of lost touch with it after so many people said it was unbelievable...
I'll continue soon, probably April or something since that is when I started the story, and I always said I would never give up on anything I started.
Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 12: Punk'd
Ya just don't blurt it out stupid!!! Ya gotta lead her up to it Edward!!!
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 04:33 AM · On: Chapter 13: Trust Me
Awesome work!
Honored about having written your 100th review :]
Keep up the great work!
Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! And I'll try to update ASAP!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 10:38 AM · On: Chapter 13: Trust Me
I really hate James. I want to see him dead..and Edward alive, of course...
Author's Response: lol. You'll just have to wait and see!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 12: Punk'd
Loved the chapter. Sorry about your Dad. I feel for your Mom. I'll keep her in my prayers.
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 1: Love at First SIght?
Great beginning! I haven't read anything Twilight in this genre!
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 13: Trust Me
Your friends won't talk about Twilight anymore? That's just wrong. I'm glad you were able to update! :) I really don't know why james would want Bella. I know he's crazy but I'm guessing there's more to it than that. LOL! Keira would make a good Renesmee.
Author's Response: No, my friends won't talk about Twilight with me anymore! Every time I try to talk about anything remotely Twilight, they either roll their eyes or pretend to listen. It's getting frustrating. And I'm glad you agree that Keira would make a good Renesmee. She has the brown eyes and the reddish hair color. It's just a thought...
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Hfrankz (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 13: Trust Me
Ummm... He's gonna find... hmmm... A man named Robert Pattinson? lol. jk. He's gonna find Laurent!! Yup, he's gonna look for Laurent. I'm right, aren't I? lol. Probably not.
Good chapter! Can't wait to find out what happens next! And how long do I have to wait to find out Edward's plan!!?? I'm not that patient!
-Haley
Author's Response: Haha! No, you're definitely not right...but think about it--who does Edward know that could possibly help him?
And thank you! I really don't know when the next chapter will be out. I'm thinking maybe three weeks, give or take.
I appreciate that you're sticking with me!
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 1: Love at First SIght?
Very good.
Reviewer: Hfrankz (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 05:02 AM · On: Chapter 12: Punk'd
I just started reading this story and I LOVE it!!! Please tell me you are going to continue! I can't wait to see what happens.
-Haley
Author's Response: Thank you! I actually submitted a chapter last week and my beta never put it up...idk if she forgot about me or what...bit I am continuing it!
Reviewer: MaliaMog (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 12: Punk'd
Cliffy Much?
Reviewer: swhile (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 12: Punk'd
I'm really enjoying the story so far. I think you're being paranoid. There has to be some drama and sadness or it'd be a boring and pointless story. However, in my opinion, you shouldn't send Edward back to the army. I think that he should tell Bella or Jasper or both and they come up with some crazy scheme to beat James at his own game, or something along those lines. But, hey, this is your story and I'm excited to see where it goes!
Author's Response: thank you! And maybe I am being paranoid...lol and Edward will have his revenge and he will not die, but someone important will die and no one is going to guess who!!! I hate disappointing people but I feel like if I don't write what my gut tells me to then the whole story will be ruined...so stay tuned and I hope you enjoy it! :)
Reviewer: ElizabethGere (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 12: Punk'd
I think you did a good job with this chatper it plays out really well. I look forward to seeing where you go with the story! keep up the great work.
Author's Response: Thank you! I had trouble on this chapter and I was so worried no one would like it! Please stay tuned! It gets better!
Reviewer: JazzValentine (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 12: Punk'd
Well, how bout I comment so your iphnoe cn make cute noises and you can be happy? lol! I love this story. I don't normally like stories where Edward is off to war, but this one is really good. And inspiration is a form of creativity. You saw something and changed it to make a really good fanfic.Nothing unorigional, there. Please update soon, cause that is a really, REALLY mean cliffie to leave us there with!
~Jazzi
Author's Response: Thank you very, very much. I've been a little discouraged with this story lately and it's nice to hear that someone is enjoying it. I am really sorry for the cliff-hanger and I feel sooo bad, but next will be Edward's POV. And it needs a lot of work! lol
Reviewer: jasperlover109 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 12: Punk'd
I love love love love your story!!! It is so good!!! I cant beleive you ended the chapter there!!! I cant wait for you to write more!!! Please please update soon!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I can't believe I ended the chapter there either. I feel so bad. lol
Reviewer: Lespin01 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 12: Punk'd
Great chapter. Please don't kill Edward, and don't make him say he doesn't love Bella, please.
Stories really get to me. I love the idea of a happily ever after. And please, please, PLEASE let James also go to war so Edward can blow him up and get away with it. It'd be nice...
Author's Response: I promise not to kill off Edward! Ha! As if I'd kill off my favorite character! lol And Edward will have his revenge. Maybe not for a while but he will eventually
Reviewer: KiddyWiddy (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 12: Punk'd
Oh you just had to end it like that XD.
Love the story, please update soon!
Author's Response: I'm sorry...I know I'm just so mean like that! :)
Reviewer: Tookie83 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 12: Punk'd
::beep beep:: you've got a comment
i'm not a writer, i don't think i could ever do what most people on here do but as a READER i think you do a really good job, maybe it could have been better but i wouldnt know unless i actually was able to compare, i think this was probably alot better than a story about Jacob kissing bella, there have been so many stories along those same stories lines that its sometimes played out.. this was pretty originial for what ive read lately ( even if it is based off of a movie). Keep going, i am waiting for the next chapter. and DAMN you for making it end with suck a cliffie... ugh :)
Author's Response: Yes, I felt completely lame for even thinking about Jacob kissing Bella. I just walked into my mom's room one day and she was watching The Man in the Iron Mask and the thought just occured to me and I HAD to try it. I will try to make it more believable, though, I promise!
Reviewer: MeIshAlice (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 03:21 AM · On: Chapter 12: Punk'd
ahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!! nooooooo. bad cliffie, bad!! you BETTER update soooooooooooooooon!!
Author's Response: haha! You sound like me when I read cliffies! I HATE them and if I were reading my own story I would probably hate me, too. lol
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