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Reviewer: raceyoutocullenrock (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 18: Apologies
OMG!! I very nearly died waiting after the massive cliff hanger in the last chapter, but this was SOOOO worth the wait :)
I'm so glad that Emmett didn't kill Thomas, that would have been bad, his poor Nana. Rosalie did a VERY silly thing in winding up her newborn like that, and she got what she deserved, a good dose of shame and humility.
I really hope Emmett understands her subtle hint right at the end there, she really does love him, don't we all *sigh*
Hopefully you wont take too long with the next chapter, I want them to get over that final hurdle already. Both of them deserve to be happy, and a little more smutty *grin*. Pretty please?
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Author's Response: I'm glad the chapter was worth the wait!! i couldn't kill thomas off, really. Chapter 18 is up so i guess you'll see if your hope is answered. =)
Thank you so much and thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: lilmissb (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 18: Apologies
Great chapter I loved it Cant wait for the next I am trying to wait patiently but I cant Urgh
Author's Response: Thank you! and chapter 18 is up now! Yey for a speedy validation!
Reviewer: tina_cullen (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 18: Apologies
I love how they are together
Author's Response: Thank you and thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: artsyfartsy (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 18: Apologies
Oh I loved that chapter! I was all prepared for the dance instructor to die and angry Emmett to be a terror, but you made it a sweet chapter instead (even though she still is a bit of a prima donna)
Author's Response: thank you! i just couldnt have him kill poor sweet mr kent. I think that she would cave to keep him with her, but not ocmpletely fold just yet. pigheadedness goes a long way, lol. Thanks for the review, and i'm glad you liked the chapter!
Reviewer: nautical (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 18: Apologies
Hmmm...there was no partial lemon, not even a bit of zest. Hopefully we're moving toward one though.
Author's Response: ha, sorry about that, i copied and pasted my A/N from a previous chatper and failed to the edit the warning. its been fixed though. And yes, we are moving in htat direction. 18 is up now!
Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 18: Apologies
I cant wait to hear Em tell Rose all the little details that he knows about her. He really needs to say something about her pride and how stubborn she is. Can't Wait!
Author's Response:
HI! regarding her stubborn pride, I think you just might get your wish. Wait no longer, 18 has already been posted!
thank you so much and thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: veronicacullen (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 18: Apologies
FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE THIS CHAPTER
IF IT COULD BE A MOVIE IT WOULD BE THE BEST
CAN'T WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER
Author's Response: Awww! thank you so much! I'd think it woudl be cool if V&P was a movie, thats actualy how i see ti in my head when i write! thank you so much!
Reviewer: cfmom (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 18: Apologies
I still absolutely love that he made her way she wanted him to come home. Go Emmett!! You know I loved this chapter. =)
It's about to kick into high gear now. Can't wait!
~Lisa
Author's Response: Thanks to YOU its coming out great!! though i do think I've improved much since the beginning chapters. Did i tell you i went back to chapters 1 and 2? they've been revised a bit to bring in more detail and clarity. Thanks for being such a constant support, and for still reviewing my work even if you've beta'd it already.
love,
Mari
Reviewer: mareimbrium (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 18: Apologies
More please! I love the developing relationship between Rosalie and Emmett. I'm glad you've made them have more depth than just sex, sex, and dirty jokes.
Author's Response:
18 is up now! Thank you for loving the relationshp and i'm glad you like their depth.
thank you so much for the compliments and thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Feisty (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 1: Mirror Mirror
;) Don't worry. I only noticed Tad Hamilton in the last chapter because a friend of mine mentioned that movie mere hours before I read your story. I doubt others will see it as quickly.
Reviewer: KariAnn (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 18: Apologies
“Look at him. Look at his face. This is the life that you risked playing this silly, foolish game.”
Seriously good stuff, as I said on my review at FF. I LOVED that Edward forced her to look at the corpse and making her take responsibility for the foolish games she's been playing with Emmett.
You truly have talent, and the pace of this story is really picking up! I can't wait to see what happens from here, and did I mention in my previous review that I liked that you didn't make things all perfect all at once? That they still have issues to work through?
Fantastic job, as usual!
Love ya!
-Kari
Author's Response: thank you so much kari! I do hope to pick up the pace a bit more with the coming chapters. i cherish your support and your friendship, youve gotta know that. as shay would say, i "hella" love you girl.
Reviewer: Moody One (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 03:46 AM · On: Chapter 18: Apologies
Awesome chapter! I need some freakin SEX! HOT SWEATY VAMPY SEX!
Author's Response: i promise its coming soon, might not be immediate, but they're well on their way! thanks so much!
Reviewer: Star Crossed Lover (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 03:41 AM · On: Chapter 18: Apologies
YEY!!!!!!
Author's Response: thanks!
Reviewer: sonecrackle (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 02:54 AM · On: Chapter 18: Apologies
I heart V & P! U rock!
Author's Response: LOL! thank you! i heart this review!!
Reviewer: annamorphos (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 18: Apologies
I'm so glad that Thomas didn't die! :D
Damn it Rose, she really is her own worst enemy...
and a terrible cock block for Emmett!
Author's Response: Yes, i'm glad he didnt die either. I'd be an evil author to kill him off! As for the cockblock...LOL! i agree... but you never know how soon she might just give in ;-)
Reviewer: skyrose16 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 18: Apologies
Edward got me quite upset in this chapter. He can be such a jerk sometimes. I mean seriously, can't he read her mind and tell that she's already guilty? Let's just pour some lemon and salt on the wound shall we? Though I'm glad Rosalie will stop with the games. She doesn't really think them all the way through. And I love how accurately you get their speech. It's absolutely lovely to read. Great chapter and I can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: I"m sorry Edward upset you, but i know he'd probably overreact, esp if Rosalie's petty little games caused him to possible lose his favorite brother. Thank you for enjoying the speech and my writing! I'm currently working on 18 and i hope to get it up soon! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Feisty (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 18: Apologies
I love how you write this story and I am extremely impressed with your handle of the language since you said that English wasn't your first language.
Note: "I looked away, shame coloring my face." Shame can't color her face. Nothing can. She doesn't have blood.
The descriptions of Emmett's growls - have you been watching Win a Date with Tad Hamilton lately???
Rose is being IMPOSSIBLE. Not that it's OOC or anything, but dear God, let her give up her stupid pride one of these days. And soon please.
Author's Response: Thank you! I really consider that a compliment to my writing.
Ahh! you found me out! Yes i had a little tad hamilton inspiration towards the end, though i tried my best not to make it too obvious. As for her giving up her pride... it just might be sooner than you think. Thanks so much for your reviews!
Reviewer: justemmettplease (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 18: Apologies
I swear I cried a little bit there when rose finally caught up with Emmett and the homeless. She's so angry and hurt and in love and in lust that she can see straight. And she always has to be right. Sound like someone I know (just ask my friends). Its so good to see them take a step towards understanding better. I know they've got a way to go. And Emmett has to get his head on straight and deal with that darn bloodlust. But, boy is she a handfull! I really loved that part where she gives him the little details about himself, and she's so right about noticing that kind of stuff. Willpower must be one of Rosalie's vamp superpowers, because how she resisted when he asked her to tell him that she wants him and needs him. OMG! I want you, Emmett! I need you! Oh, crap, he's still fictional!
Author's Response: lol! its okay, i always have to be right, too. Doesnt that suck to have that as a trait? lol. I'm glad we have that in common, and that we can both understand rose, and i'm relieved that you can see and understand what i bring to her character. I dont really see her being easy, even when she should give up. Thanks for understanding that they have a ways to go to working things out. However, i will say... her willpower weakens every day that he tries, so you just might see things working in their favor soon. =) Hoping to finish up 18 and get it up here for you to read! Thanks so much for the awesome review! I write for reviews like these!
Reviewer: Wanderer417 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 18: Apologies
Arrgh so close yet so far. Its really getting good. Its also nice to know that Rose is not a total bitch.
Author's Response: LOL! thanks! and no, she's not. I think she might just have a soft enough spot for emmett that he can weaken that pigheaded nature of hers. THanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 18: Apologies
nice
Author's Response: thanks!
Reviewer: rosie_girl (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 11:20 AM · On: Chapter 17: Lessons
i cant wait to read more, i have been keeping up with every chapter. great work, love it.
Author's Response: thank you so much! I'm so glad you like it!! Chapter 17 is up now!
Reviewer: CherryDarling77 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 17: Lessons
ooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, i can't wait for the next chapter! cliffhanger ending, AHHH!!!! very good story!!!
Author's Response: thank you so much! i'm glad you're enjoying my little story! next chapter is up now!
Reviewer: LadyKnightAmy (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 01:54 AM · On: Chapter 17: Lessons
Way to be, Rose. I love how you write everyone's favorite selfish vamp.
Author's Response: thank you so much for liking my selfish, pigheaded fave!!
Reviewer: MsShayB (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 17: Lessons
Dammit, Rose!!! You did it this time! He's going to drink Mr. Kent dry as the Sahara!!!
Okay, Mari...
Every time I read this chapter, I think of a line from the movie The Five Heartbeats. Where the guy says, "Every night I've got to fight to prove my love," and then he goes after the guy that's flirting with his girlfriend.
I know. It's totally irrevelent, but that's what crossed my mind. :)
I can't wait to read Chapter 17! You're an awesome writer!
~Shay
Author's Response: Shay!!
LOL! Yes she drove him to drinking! i must say i havent watched The Five Heartbeats, but it sounds like its close to my story anyway, so i dont think its irrelevant at all! Thanks so much for your review. 17 is up on twilghted! yey!
Love,
your pookielala
Reviewer: anginha (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 17: Lessons
BIG CHAPTER DHG SUPER MARI.
YOU KNOW I'M ADDICTED TO THIS STORY.
THE STORY OF EMMETT AND ROSE, NEVER BEFORE TOLD was brilliant and EXCPCIONALMENTE ILLUSTRATED BY YOU.
THIS CHAPTER was exquisite, their writing, their coherence, their sequence of ideas BEEN AN ABSURD EXCELLENCE ... YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER, DEAR AMIGA DHG.
LOVE YOU.
PS I WANT TO SEE THESE TWO LOGO SE CHILLING IF LOVING, LOLLLL
DIANA BLACK
Author's Response: Diana,
your words make me blush! really! they do! I write for these kinds of reviews.Thank you so much for reminding me that people like my story, and thank you so much for your reviews! The loving will come soon, i promise, lol.
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