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Reviews For A Visit

Reviewer: Iridescka711 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2011 12:07 AM · On: A Visit

I like where you went with that. It seemed kinda short, but then again Edward and Rosalie would never leave Bella at Leah's mercy. Good job!

Reviewer: LunaEclips (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2010 12:35 AM · On: A Visit

I think that it was a great story. When I thought about Leah talking to Bella, I always imagined her yelling at her, but this totally, totally fits. Great job :)

Reviewer: sugarglider (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2010 06:52 AM · On: A Visit

Nice job with this.

Reviewer: Iridescka711 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 06:18 AM · On: A Visit

That was really good!!!

Reviewer: Babyy (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 02:30 AM · On: A Visit

Wow, that was great. And it would completely fit with the story. I think that was very well written. Loved it.

Reviewer: jessica-cullen (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 08:58 PM · On: A Visit

Good job! I prefer short stories, and chapters, especially ones that can sumarize and get everything they are trying to describe across you did a very impressive job. The only story I've read on this subject. Nicely done :)

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 11:52 AM · On: A Visit

Oh this is good! Yes a "wish it'd been there" moment. Though I think in my head Leah was a lot more long-winded... You were merciful. :)

Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 08:13 AM · On: A Visit

thanks for filling in that gap.

Reviewer: RobertLover (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 12:24 AM · On: A Visit

Wow! This was exactly how I pictured what would have happened. This was excellent!!!

Reviewer: Nessie_and_Jacob (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 06:15 AM · On: A Visit

i liked it a lot

Reviewer: rachaelprincess (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2008 08:17 AM · On: A Visit

Love this. I have always wanted to see this conversation fleshed out and I love how you did it. Fantastic job!

Reviewer: Nightmare and Dream (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2008 01:07 PM · On: A Visit

Leah is right!

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