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Reviewer: jellycatty (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Adventures in Care-a-lot
it was worth it, it always is, this is a great story and i always look forward to the next chapter :)
Reviewer: stupidsuckedinreader (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Adventures in Care-a-lot
Great chapter. Loved this line: I wonder if there is an Edward Lovers Anonymous. So totally true!
Reviewer: twilighteergrl29 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Adventures in Care-a-lot
Good chapter. I like how Charlie is more observant and takes more of an interest in Bella's life. I also like how your Bella is so snarky at least in her own head. Looking forward to the next update!
Reviewer: Minoy (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Adventures in Care-a-lot
I loved it! Apparently bursting blood vessels help... who knew?
Reviewer: fletchmartin (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Adventures in Care-a-lot
Great story so far! Can't wait for Bella and Edward to talk again!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Adventures in Care-a-lot
I LOVE THAT SHE TOLD EVERYONE THAT EDWARD IS HER BOYFRIEND!!!!!!!!JUST AWESOME!!!!!!! I ALSO LOVE THAT EDWARD IS IN HER BED AT NIGHT!! "WHISPERING HIS LOVE" IN BELLA"S EAR!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!MORE PLEASE!!!!
Reviewer: JAYS1 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Adventures in Care-a-lot
Good chapter! Good story.
Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Adventures in Care-a-lot
I loved the "I hope it isn't that Newton boy, he's a twit." line.
Now are Edward and Alice coming to dinner on Sunday...
Reviewer: gjmb2000 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Adventures in Care-a-lot
Good reading.
I would leave my window open any day
or night for Edward.. Or Rob :-)
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Adventures in Care-a-lot
ok so now get to where she hears the truth...can't wait for that!!!
Good chapter...but yes I missed Edward too!!!! I like how you kind of changed things up a bit!!!
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Adventures in Care-a-lot
The busted blood vessel is so worth it. Maybe do some EPOV. I just love to hear from him. Great chapter. Update soon!!!
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Adventures in Care-a-lot
i have a feeling that mister edward is having late night visits...so sweet....
can't wait for more
Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Adventures in Care-a-lot
Great chapter! My only critisism is that it was too short. It's cool that Bella isn't hiding her relationship with Edward. I'm not a big fan of the stubborn, anti-social, "hide-behind-her-hair" Bella.
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Adventures in Care-a-lot
Very worth it, I love your take on these events, great writing, my only negative is I wish it would move faster, but I know writing takes time so I will be patient, Great job so far!!! :)
Reviewer: Naelady (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Adventures in Care-a-lot
The chapter was wonderful, as always. I love the way Bella turns things around in her head. Much less... emo/angsty than in the books, where she drives me insane at least 60% of the time.
*high-five for the Care-a-lot fan* The reference is great. Although I haven't seen any of the new shows they've been doing, I don't think they're nearly as good, judging from the merchandising. Self-esteem Bear? Seriously?
As to your Paparazzi boycott... well done! Every time I see another picture in a tabloid in the checkout, I want to rip my hair out and tell them to leave the poor boy alone. It's ridiculous, and it's gone far enough. More than far enough.
Reviewer: Snakehips (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Adventures in Care-a-lot
loving this story. I think you did a great job w/ this chapter
Reviewer: xoTinyxo (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Adventures in Care-a-lot
It was a good chapter. Glad that Bella is realizing that she still loves him. I didn't expect her 2 react like that to the no heartbeat since she thought he was odd already, but you never can tell with her! LoL! I can't wait to find out what happens in the next chapter.
Reviewer: accsmom (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Adventures in Care-a-lot
Great chapter... you did good.
Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Adventures in Care-a-lot
I thought it was great! Don't beat yourself up. Looking forward to the next chpater as well as E and B moment! Well, one that she is conscious for! More please!
Reviewer: nanny (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Adventures in Care-a-lot
this is a graet story i cant wait until she finds out hes a vampire
Reviewer: crackupmonkey (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Adventures in Care-a-lot
I know all about the Care Bears :)
Oh I love that she has kinda figured it out. And the last scene - priceless; I can just see Edward whispering to her in her sleep :)
Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Adventures in Care-a-lot
Another GREAT chapter!
Reviewer: alexis52 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Adventures in Care-a-lot
this is amazing!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: goldeneyedgirl (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Adventures in Care-a-lot
It's not bad.
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Adventures in Care-a-lot
nice
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