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Reviewer: silvaneous (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2011 05:11 AM · On: If Only, If Only, If Only
i love it, it gave me tingles all over, really if only!!!
Reviewer: BluLew82 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 01:19 AM · On: If Only, If Only, If Only
Oh my god, this is too funny. One of my favorite things I've read in awhile. Great job!
Reviewer: duckyd16 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 11:04 PM · On: If Only, If Only, If Only
this is interesting... waits to see how it turnes out
Reviewer: RaCullen (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 11:03 PM · On: If Only, If Only, If Only
sigh.
Yes, If Only...
Reviewer: windchime (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 10:43 PM · On: If Only, If Only, If Only
You write beautifully and this whole premise is intriguing. I look forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: lozzmaggi (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 10:16 PM · On: If Only, If Only, If Only
This was wonderful. Please continue, I want to know more about the tragic love story of nursing home-Edward and Bella. Very good so far.
Reviewer: artsyfartsy (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 08:30 AM · On: Nearly Dystopia
who knew that avoiding the flu could lead to such an empty life? thanks for writing such an interesting perspective--and thank god for viruses!
Reviewer: kaypgirl (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 03:44 PM · On: Nearly Dystopia
Great first chapter, I'd never thought of it this way before.
Reviewer: Lena (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 02:09 PM · On: Nearly Dystopia
Well... that was something. I liked it.
Interesting... this needs a BPOV so badly. What does she think???
Author's Response: Bella's POV is done and waiting to be validated! I find it harder to write her, so I'm not sure it's as good as grumpy Edward, who I really enjoyed writing. Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: BluLew82 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 01:58 PM · On: Nearly Dystopia
Holy crap, this was awesome. What a great idea. Old people are so funny. I love old, crotchety Edward. Great job!
Author's Response: Yeah, I LOVED writing grumpy Edward; he said things that everyone thinks and no-one says. i was trying to think of something that I hadn't read elsewhere - and that's the idea that popped into my brain! Thanks for your review - I really appreciate it!
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