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Reviewer: T Cullen (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2011 01:42 PM · On: If You Can't Stand The Heat - Cheat (V)

Please please update! I really like this and I really want to see the end! Plus I think we all deserve another chapter after a year! Please! :) pretty please? ( it worked for Bella )

Reviewer: mousekitty (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 06:19 AM · On: If You Can't Stand The Heat - Cheat (V)

I'm really sorry that this story was never finished. I've spent a lot of time snickering while reading.

Reviewer: marsbareater12 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 03:59 PM · On: If You Can't Stand The Heat - Cheat (V)

LOL! This is really funny. i can't belive you haven't updated in so long *sobs*

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 02:49 AM · On: Keep Thy Enemy Close

THE BEST STORY!!!!!!

Reviewer: AStarDanced (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2010 10:27 PM · On: If You Can't Stand The Heat - Cheat (V)

This chapter was hilarious. I actually laughed out loud at Emmett. Well done!

Reviewer: renesmeebellward (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 09:38 AM · On: Curiosity Killed The Cat

OMG this is going to be the FUNNIEST story EVER thanks for writing it !

Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 10:49 PM · On: Keep Thy Enemy Close

Oh my goodness this is even better then I thought!!!!!!!!! Edward and Rosalie getting along!

Reviewer: MsTwiSwe (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 05:07 AM · On: If You Can't Stand The Heat - Cheat (V)

Please update!! This story is relly interesting XD

Reviewer: lilmissb (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 10:38 AM · On: If You Can't Stand The Heat - Cheat (V)

MORE write MORE

Reviewer: lilmissb (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 08:52 AM · On: Curiosity Killed The Cat

Im cracking with anticipation :)

Reviewer: lilac17 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 09:06 AM · On: If You Can't Stand The Heat - Cheat (V)

I really like this story! Usually all I see is Rosalie being a bitch and I like to see some Rosalie/Edward friendship!

Reviewer: nicci6699 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 02:28 PM · On: Curiosity Killed The Cat

Please please please tell me you are going to give us more chapters of this story!!!!! It is fabulous, I have laughed loudly at several points and I love your take on the characters.

Hope to see more soon!!!!

Reviewer: Antonia Cullen (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 10:55 AM · On: If You Can't Stand The Heat - Cheat (V)

pretty please

Reviewer: Antonia Cullen (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 10:53 AM · On: If You Can't Stand The Heat - Cheat (V)

CAN YOU PLEASE UPDATE SOON, THIS IS A VERY GREAT FUNNY STORY. :)

Reviewer: cekh1908 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 04:16 AM · On: If You Can't Stand The Heat - Cheat (V)

I sincerely hope you finish this story. It's absolutlely hilarious!

Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 09:04 PM · On: If You Can't Stand The Heat - Cheat (V)

I think I just fell in love with this story, I love the characterizations and interactions, this is exactly what the Twilight books were missing.

Reviewer: Venus_Star2_com (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 12:46 AM · On: If You Can't Stand The Heat - Cheat (V)

I read this at fanfiction and saw it here

HAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHA

My favourite is emment and the the whole edward and rosalie on drugs...hahah

I want a climax---hahaha Bella and Edward are win

love love love love love this story please update soon

rachie

Reviewer: janjiz (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 04:24 PM · On: If You Can't Stand The Heat - Cheat (V)

This story is hilarious!

I love it!

Thanks for posting this up.

I really needed a good laugh..

I can't wait to see what else you come up with.

This story is very promising. ^-^

-Jan

Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 07:47 AM · On: If You Can't Stand The Heat - Cheat (V)

OMG this story is so funny. The Cullen siblings involved in prank wars is about more than I can handle. I have got to see what will happen with Rose's car. Please update this story, I love it.

Reviewer: arabella23 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 01:34 PM · On: If You Can't Stand The Heat - Cheat (V)

I absolutely LOVE this story! It's just so funny. I can't stop reading it and I'm dying to find out what happens next.

There are just so many funny lines I can't pick a favourite. Its a toss up between when Bella thinks she's unknowningly provoked Jasper, Alice and Emmett into eating her and Edward saying he and Rosalie were hardly the axis of evil.

I personally think you an amazing job at bring Stephanie's characters to life. This is such a believable backstory for the Cullen family. And even though Bella traded this story for the Disneyland story, I hope you tell both!

Reviewer: paige113 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 10:59 AM · On: If You Can't Stand The Heat - Cheat (V)

wow this is really good like the plot line a lot keep updating

Reviewer: ChangVang218 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 09:18 AM · On: If You Can't Stand The Heat - Cheat (V)

You are a genius!

I love this story! All of it is so entertaining. This is just ... amazing!

But my favorite part would have to be last chapter, when Bella is talking about the makings of a story, and Edward starts to snicker. Haha! Edward is such a boy!

Please, update soon. Because this story is so rocking!!

Reviewer: Almis (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 04:49 AM · On: If You Can't Stand The Heat - Cheat (V)

I love it.

I like reading stories about the Cullen's pre-Twilight and this one is brilliant so far. I'm adding it to my favourites.

Alice.x

Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it! I appreciate the review.

Reviewer: sgt_sparkle1918 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 06:44 AM · On: If You Can't Stand The Heat - Cheat (V)

Oh, I can't wait to see Esme's role! The thing with the frame and the note was hilarious... and I desperately want to see Rosalie's reaction! You probably know more about the Twilight series than I do, but I always thought Edward was older than Alice when changed... maybe I just assumed that because she's so small. Anyway, fantastic chapter, can't wait for an update!

Author's Response:
Esme pwns all in the next chapter. She is rocking. And Rosalie's reaction isn't going to be what anyone expects, I think.

Alice and Edward were both born in 1901, but Edward was turned when he was seventeen and Alice when she was nineteen. So it's really a matter of preference - chronologically they're the same age, physically Alice is older, but Edward has been a vampire longer. I just think Alice would like to lord the physical age difference since she is so small compared to the others. It probably annoys Edward to no end.

I'm working hard on getting the update ready for submission, it won't be too long. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: palsyjohn (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 05:33 AM · On: If You Can't Stand The Heat - Cheat (V)

Oh my gosh. Your story is the only fanfic I actually laughed out loud reading it. Sooo funny! Few authors actually know how to let the characters interact in new situations in new dialogue while keeping those characters IN character. Most times authors just throw said characters into a situation (like Bella gets bitten, now This Happens because of that). This story is great. So funny. Do go on... and on... and on... Thank you! Update soon please!

Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I try hard to keep every character's essence and reactions grounded in what we know from the books.

The next chapter will not be far away, thank you again for reviewing.

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