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Reviewer: Kittygirl23 (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2015 04:09 PM · On: 2. Decisions
So far I love this! You reallydid your homework to make it fit right in the story! I have read some realy bad versions but not yours. I can't wait to keep reading! I love alice.
Reviewer: Kittygirl23 (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2015 04:09 PM · On: 2. Decisions
So far I love this! You reallydid your homework to make it fit right in the story! I have read some realy bad versions but not yours. I can't wait to keep reading! I love alice.
Reviewer: Kittygirl23 (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2015 04:09 PM · On: 2. Decisions
So far I love this! You reallydid your homework to make it fit right in the story! I have read some realy bad versions but not yours. I can't wait to keep reading! I love alice.
Reviewer: Walternet (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2013 03:39 AM · On: 11. Observing
entire book, please... love it
Reviewer: Walternet (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2013 09:51 AM · On: 7. It's Only a Matter of Time
rotflmho... LOVE it
Reviewer: Walternet (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2013 01:37 PM · On: 5. The Truth Comes Out
yes
Reviewer: Walternet (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2013 01:09 PM · On: 4. The Crash
awesome
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2013 01:03 AM · On: 22. Epilogue - A Corner of Forever
You did a great job with Alice's view and I really enjoyed reading it!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2013 12:07 AM · On: 21. The Hospital
I always wondered how much of a snow job the Cullens had to come with for Renee and Charlie. Pretty good job!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2013 11:51 PM · On: 20. Fabricating the Evidence
At least Alice has some clues to her past that she never had before. So I guess this hasn't been a complete disaster, except maybe for Bella, poor little thing!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2013 11:23 PM · On: 19. Showdown
Great scene of them all tearing James apart and burning his bits and pieces! Touch and go with Bella's blood, though!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2013 11:12 PM · On: 18. Betrayal
In a perverse way , I always admired Bella for giving two vampires the slip. Maybe not the smartest thing she ever did, but clever for all that!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2013 11:04 PM · On: 17. A Phone Call
So, the rotten son-of-a-bitch has called and threatened to hurt Renee if Bella doesn't meet him! Alice is also about to find out why she can't remember being human, and why James looks familiar.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2013 10:56 PM · On: 16. Visions and Memories
Pretty soon, Alice, Bella and Jasper will figure out James is is on his way. Damn!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2013 10:30 PM · On: 15. Goodbyes
Just a bit different, but totally plausible. I can almost feel how sad and terrified Bella is in this story. Alice is determined to defend her best friend, come what may!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2013 10:16 PM · On: 14. The Hunt
I can always feel the heartache Edward must have suffered at the situation after the baseball game. They're were just having fun and the nomads come alon and screw everything up!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2013 09:56 PM · On: 13. The Baseball Game
Now the fun begins! I always hated how upset this part always made Edward! If vampires could have heart attacks, he would have!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2013 09:40 PM · On: 12. Meeting Bella
You did a good job with the Alice view of Bella's first visit.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2013 09:14 PM · On: 11. Observing
That was bound to happen as Alice could never contain her excitement over being friends with Bella! I hope you just let your imagination float through this next part. You know the basics, so it shouldn't be too difficult!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2013 08:27 PM · On: 10. Stepping Forward
Just because it's a bit self-serving, doesn't make Alice wrong, plus Rosalie needs to get over herself! The total world does not revolve around her!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2013 08:14 PM · On: 9. A Visit
Now that she knows it won't be long, Alice has a bit more patience, but not too much! I don't know why, but I really never tire of reading this story, in all it's incarnations!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2013 07:38 PM · On: 8. A Lullaby, I Suppose
That's kind of sweet that Alice helped with Bella's lullaby. I too wonder what was in Rosalie's mind that made Edward laugh. He sure sailed right into protective mode when he heard Peter and Charlotte were on their way to visit.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2013 07:19 PM · On: 7. It's Only a Matter of Time
Ah yes, the infamous lemonade bottle cap! A treasured keepsake-to-be! Moving right along to the blood typing scenario, and Edward's rescue of Bella!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2013 07:09 PM · On: 6. Longing
Too bad Jasper interrupted Alice's vision, else she would have seen Bella would be okay. It's bad enough that Alice is going to be disappointed about Bella and shopping, two things that don't go together!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2013 06:47 PM · On: 5. The Truth Comes Out
Oh Alice, if only I could believe that last vision! Edward will leave you all again, in his typical bull-headed manner! You just can't see it yet!
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