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Reviews For The Sunshine Train
Reviewer: mymypinkhand (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 05:09 PM · On: First Sight

I love it.  great twist, the general outline is predictabe but it's got great wording and an awesome view of alice.  great twists to make the story 'work'

Reviewer: goddessdawnie (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 03:54 PM · On: First Sight

*gasp, choke* Okay, you've successfully convinced me to join twilighted.net JUST so I could beg you to continue!  This just might be the best fic I've read yet... please keep going!

Reviewer: Leandra Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 07:47 PM · On: First Sight

A very promising start here! Can't wait for more to come. Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: ikke (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 08:31 AM · On: First Sight

great idea!

Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 04:48 PM · On: First Sight

Love this story to death.jazz in the tree was so cute the walk to the waterfall was so as cute.I read this story while back and I was so happy to see you posted is story on here. I had lost the story when my phone died I read all my stories on a blackberry. Some times I can post review on twilighted. You did a great job on the story I love you're writing I can not wait to read more. You made jasper a true southren man. I love it when he calls her darlin'. I will reread it over agin. Keep up the good work I would love to read more. my daughter is asking me to ask you if you would are going to write a part 2 to the story she said pleaseeeeeeeeeee she loves this story. Thank you 4 this story ;). Kym

Reviewer: Master of the Boot (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 04:47 PM · On: First Sight

I think that this is an excellent reversal of roles.  I like how Alice's visions are playing into this.  I also love how her apperance changes according to her new environment. 

I can't wait to see what goes on next.

Ta

Master of teh Boot

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 03:02 PM · On: First Sight

SOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD ! UPDATE SOON!

Reviewer: rockstarvampire (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 01:31 PM · On: First Sight

Whoa! Update quickly please, I'm totally hooked. :)

Reviewer: Lilly of the valley (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 10:46 AM · On: First Sight

I luff youuuu.

 

Oh and this story is pretty awesome too!:P

Reviewer: WIndom (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 09:27 AM · On: First Sight

nice idea for a story

its realy good

 keep writing

Reviewer: jasperluv (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 07:38 AM · On: First Sight

like it

Reviewer: Foxtrot (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 05:05 AM · On: First Sight

I'm liking the story so far. It will be interesting to see where you take this.

Reviewer: pomme (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 04:04 AM · On: First Sight

more chapters?? keep them coming!!

Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 02:00 AM · On: First Sight

Nice

Reviewer: Tempus Fugit (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 12:26 AM · On: First Sight

Interesting. I'm more into stories where Bella is the focus but I do adore Alice and Jasper and want to see what happens next. Update soon!

Reviewer: Lyssie (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 06:58 PM · On: First Sight

This is such an interesting idea. I love this first chapter, Alice still feels like Alice even if she's human. I love that you've kept her visions. It adds an interesting dynamic to something that could have easily just been a re-write of Twilight but with different names. I'm looking forward to the next part.

Reviewer: ImCuteLoveMe (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 06:39 PM · On: First Sight

I absolutely love it! It's such a unique twist. And you've capture Alice brilliantly (at least I think so). Please update soon!

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