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Reviewer: PCullen1974 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 02:45 AM · On: Chapter 9: On Letting Go

WOW! That was a cliffie and now I just wanna know if they are ever going to fix themselves? It is really kinda heartbreaking! Loved it and can't wait to see where you take it next!

Reviewer: bgwillis (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 9: On Letting Go

What the hell is this? Bella doesn't remember and Edward has a girlfriend? This is really screwed up.

Reviewer: bgwillis (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 6: Travel Hymn

I just started reading this and I'm having trouble keeping up. It's all over the place. I hope it settles down and all the back and forth stops.

Reviewer: Gryphon (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 9: On Letting Go

k...this story is getting too soap operish for me. Enough with the distraught Edward..and the crap he keeps taking from Emmet. Grow up and smack him, please.

And Bella forgetting?!? WTF?

I'm all for ansty..but enough is enough..

Think I need to give this story a break.

Reviewer: Gryphon (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 9: On Letting Go

k...this story is getting too soap operish for me. Enough with the distraught Edward..and the crap he keeps taking from Emmet. Grow up and smack him, please.

And Bella forgetting?!? WTF?

I'm all for ansty..but enough is enough..

Think I need to give this story a break.

Reviewer: corriander (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 9: On Letting Go

Ouch...can Edward grow a pair yet? ;) Loving the story!

Reviewer: lorij (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 05:15 AM · On: Chapter 9: On Letting Go

WOW! girlfriend huh??? WTF!

Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 9: On Letting Go

I just read this part to see if I wanted to read the whole story and it's one of those stories that I just can't read until its finished. This chapter makes me so mad.

A) BELLA DOESNT FUCKIN REMEMBER

B) I don't think Edward would say that stuff to Bella if he had a girlfriend

C) BELLA DOESNT REMEMBER!!!!!

~ B

Reviewer: mandilm14 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 8: Kicking Your Crosses Down

I love this story, but I think Bella should give Edward a much harder time.

Reviewer: scottslass (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 02:48 AM · On: Chapter 8: Kicking Your Crosses Down

I do love this story so I do hope you update it more often.

Reviewer: tigger12 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 01:32 AM · On: Chapter 8: Kicking Your Crosses Down

i dont think its a sorry attempt. i think its original, well-written, and interesting. i hope you'll update soon :)

Reviewer: Cindy0510 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 8: Kicking Your Crosses Down

I don't update a whole lot, but I really like this story.

Reviewer: katstrat (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 7: Semi Constructive Criticism

Awesome!! This story is really getting better with each chapter... I love your use of music... Bella expressing her feelings by using song lyrics (and Edwards immediate answer) was a brilliant idea and just heartrending.

Yeah!! I'd love to get a teaser!!:-)

Please update soon...

Reviewer: subwife (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 7: Semi Constructive Criticism

Um, yes please! Great chapter! I like your Jacob - he made me smile with the brief analysis on Bella's situation followed by the "let's just watch the movie now please" speech. Nice!

Reviewer: brighteyes87 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 7: Semi Constructive Criticism

Thank you for refrencing Cinamatic Sunrise... You are the first person I've come across who has heard of them... Though maybe it's just the crazy fools I hang out with. But I love their music. I'll have to check out this other band... I might like it...

Beautiful chapter. Though I am a frequent reader, I'm not much of a reviewer unless a chapter moves me enough to say something... I adored this chapter and the final text messages. Beautiful. Thank you.

Reviewer: wandering-home (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 7: Semi Constructive Criticism

Cuteeee. I like the choice you made with Jacob, but I'm kind of wondering about Alice's actions. And just for the record, I LOVE Finding Nemo ;)

Reviewer: corriander (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 7: Semi Constructive Criticism

Oh my goodness! I got the teaser a couple of weeks ago and couldnt wait for this chapter.

I read this on edge and to help set the mood I had the songs mentioned in the background while I read.... I think you are doing a great job making the a realistic story as to what it feels like to be in that situation. Not everything is solved by our love for another or even our attempts to put on a brave face. love hurts and sometimes you have to just swim in it.

Thanks for this amazing story! i cant wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: ashuk (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 7: Semi Constructive Criticism

this is a fabulous chapter and I loved the ending...perfect song! I'm dying to find out what happens next. Update soon, please! Can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: smb (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 7: Semi Constructive Criticism

Amazing!!

Reviewer: flipacoyne (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 7: Semi Constructive Criticism

I love your story! Update soon please!

Reviewer: heyyouwiththeshirt (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 10:42 AM · On: Preface: Suspending Disbelief

i absolutely love this story. And i must say that i also love your username and i love the chapter titles. circa survive is basically my life :)

Reviewer: katstrat (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 6: Travel Hymn

I really don't think Bella will end up with Jacob. Edward just makes it all so complicated and Jake is kind of a safe place for Bella... But maby a little bit of jealousy could be quite good for Edward to realize how he's messing things up and that he has to get his shit together ;-)

I really think your story deserves more attention!! Please update soon!

Reviewer: AppLeOfMyyEyee93 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 11:51 AM · On: Chapter 6: Travel Hymn

Bella, you ar an idiot. But Edward, you are an even bigger idiot. You both should be put in an honorary wing of the Idiot Hall of Fame. Right next to Phil Spektor and the creator of Rock of Love.

Reviewer: wandering-home (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 02:19 PM · On: Preface: Suspending Disbelief

Yay! Okay, I started reading and was like "did I misread that title"? =P

Reviewer: dvandever (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 6: Travel Hymn

So i just found this story and read it all the way through and am really enjoying it so far. I can't wait to see where this goes. I'm not usually to big with so much drama and angst but i totally love this. Great job can't wait for an update!

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