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Reviewer: Cullen Forever (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 08:39 PM · On: Ready

Really good, please keep writing more. You got my ittention now run with it!!!

Author's Response:

glad u like it!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: femflorest5 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 06:41 PM · On: Ready

need more info, another chapter soon please.  The summary soundds good...


Author's Response:

u'll get one

Reviewer: twilightmom96 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 06:03 PM · On: Ready

i like it cant wait to read more its a very intersting twist :)

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Reviewer: JohannaL (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 04:43 PM · On: Ready

Interesting story, please update soon :)

Author's Response:

glad u like it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twiighter143 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Persuasion

Hi, you have a pretty good start here. The summary is really interesting. Keep writing and update soon

Author's Response:

thank you! i really appreciate it

Reviewer: Sawatari_Makoto (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 12:45 PM · On: Persuasion

wow this is awesome so far!! it sound like its gonna be a great story too!! hurry up and write more! xD

Author's Response:

i'm glad you like it!

Reviewer: Dazzlers_Wife (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 12:33 PM · On: Persuasion

love the story line

ohhhhh drama

Keep writing


Author's Response:

i luv drama too!

Reviewer: neonapple (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 04:30 PM · On: Persuasion

Um yes longer chapters - think at least 1000-2000 words.  And more please - update.

Author's Response:

i'll do my best about the longer chapters, but i don't think that can happen until more happens in the story, once the drama really starts. but i'll try to make the chapters as long as possible.

Author's Response:

i'll do my best about the longer chapters, but i don't think that can happen until more happens in the story, once the drama really starts. but i'll try to make the chapters as long as possible.

Reviewer: Jaz (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 12:38 PM · On: Persuasion

It would be appreciated if your chapters were a tad bit longer. Also, it would be more enjoyable if there were more chapters!



P.S. but I must say that her getting pregnant by her stepbrother should be quite interesting.........(hoping 4 more soon)



Author's Response:

chapters will get longer, i promise

Reviewer: 09bririg (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 06:54 PM · On: Persuasion

It's early in the story but i really liked the summary it's interesting. write more i'll be anticipating the next chapter.

Author's Response:

glad you liked it! i'm good with summaries

Reviewer: JohannaL (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Persuasion

Your summary caught my attention - can't wait how this continues.

Keep writing, I'll keep reading :)

Author's Response:

u do

Reviewer: LauraJen (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 05:11 AM · On: Persuasion

Keep writing!

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Reviewer: dazzeled (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 03:47 AM · On: Persuasion

not going to lie to you this chapter was a bit of a bore but since your story line is interesting and definitely different i have faith that it was only boring because it was the first chapter and that future chapters will be much more appealing keep writing because i cant wait to read the rest of your story thanks!

Author's Response:

i hate intros---i see ur point

Reviewer: glitteryangeleyes (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 01:49 AM · On: Persuasion

Great start! I can't wait to see what happens next! Update Soon!!

Author's Response:

thank you!! :)

Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 01:48 AM · On: Persuasion

hm. the summary caught my attention, but i still dont know if i like it, so please update :)

Author's Response:

i will          :D

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 01:34 AM · On: Persuasion

This is very interesting. I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response:

glad u like it!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: graceisgone (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 12:19 AM · On: Persuasion

i'd really like to see where this goes!

Author's Response:

thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

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