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Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 10:33 AM · On: Friend

i like it. update



Author's Response:

lol :D

Reviewer: Boom_Ox (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 06:20 AM · On: Friend

ahhh!! updateeeee updateee i wnaaa read on :D

(Y) great storyyyy :)



Author's Response:

thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: butterfly_kisses (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Friend

OMG...this is already great i can't wait for you to complete this!!!



Author's Response:

i really appreciate it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (sorry, i need some variety in my responses, and i already used thank you a million times, so....)

Reviewer: trutwilightfantasy (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 05:00 PM · On: Friend

OH HELL NAH! BITCH SLAP that bastard!!!!



Author's Response:

lol :D

Reviewer: BlueDiamond (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Friend

Making Edward out to be a total cad. How will you redeem him?

BlueDiamondRab@stny.rr.com

Elaine

Author's Response:

you'll see. chapter nine

Reviewer: Ambra (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 04:02 PM · On: Friend

Ahh, evil cliffie but good story.



Author's Response:

yayyyyyyy glad u like it!!!!!!!

Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 03:23 PM · On: Friend

I am dying to know what happens, loved the sneak peak, update soon, PLEASE!!!! :)



Author's Response:

sneak peek....with the way these reviews are going, ur going to end up getting a sneak peek every chapter...lol

Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 02:56 PM · On: Friend

wow... please tell me i'm not going to hate edward in this story....



Author's Response:

you're not. u just have to get to know him a bit. he really isn't that bad. i tried to make him the way he might have been if he wasnt 107 years old...but he gets better, i promise

Reviewer: angiepie02 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 02:01 PM · On: Friend

update, really enjoying this!

Author's Response:

thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: TaintedDarkInuShemeeko (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:44 PM · On: Friend

A very interesting chapter I will be looking forward to reading more.

Brie,



Author's Response:

glad you liked it!!!!!!! :D

Reviewer: claireo (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:44 PM · On: Friend

loved it!!

ohh, next chapter sounds juciey... can't wait(: 

 



Author's Response:

it's entertaining....i luv the run-in with edward. it's the only time she ses him, consciously, after the sex, before she finds out that he's going to be her stepbrother. wonderful stuff :)

Reviewer: TaintedDarkInuShemeeko (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:38 PM · On: Remembering

Hangover are a bitch or at least that what my friends tell.

Loved the chapter.

Brie



Author's Response:

i wouldnt know....i'm fourteen

Reviewer: TaintedDarkInuShemeeko (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:33 PM · On: Stranger

Leave it to Bella to get drunk by spiked punch.

TaintedDarkInuShemeeko



Author's Response:

lol...ikr

Reviewer: TaintedDarkInuShemeeko (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:20 PM · On: Ready

I just found this story. I'm very interested to see how everythnig unfolds.

Brie,



Author's Response:

wow...i'm glad you like it

Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:15 PM · On: Friend

OMG! Can't wait til the next chapter the suspense is killing me!



Author's Response:

i'll try not to make it too long :P

Reviewer: Edward_Bella_Nessie (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 12:56 PM · On: Friend

o my gosh!!!! i need to read the next chapter!!



Author's Response:

oh my gosh!!!! i need to write it!!...jk- i wrote it already. its just a matter of validation now

Reviewer: Bluenoserbaby (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Friend

Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

ur welcome :)

Reviewer: rivruskende (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 12:40 PM · On: Friend

Thanks for writting, I love that story! Please update soon.



Author's Response:

thank you!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: NewYorkCullen (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 12:35 PM · On: Ready

ok, im gonna sound stupid and say OMFG....

that was absolutly amazing

the cliffy about the supermarket was absolutely genius

although, its driving my mind crazy so i guess its not a good thing! 

but you probably get this alot, but, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon

for my sanity

im serious

update

again, excellent story



Author's Response:

wow! i'm glad you like it and i will update soon...no need to freak out...i dont want someone's heart failure on my hands...jk

Reviewer: chasityc (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 12:14 PM · On: Friend

why do you like to tease us so much. LOL can you please write more soon, you are killin me here. I would love longer chapters.. ;) i can't get enough. thanx for writing! chasity



Author's Response:

teasing is fun :)  cliffhangers keep you reading!!! lol

Reviewer: luvedwardnbella (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 12:08 PM · On: Friend

I'm curious as to how this story is going to play out....hmmmm

Please do continue, you're doing great so far...



Author's Response:

i don't know how it's going to play out either. i mean, i know the main story, but when i type, i type the first thing that comes into my head. i'm as surprised by the end result as you are. but i'm glad you like it!

Reviewer: devilishdiva (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 12:00 PM · On: Friend

This is sooo fun!  Well, not really fun, but one of those stories you can't resist.  And I like that you don't give too much away.  The joy of reading is taking a journey of discovery. 

Thanks for updating this story on a regular basis.  I promise to read it on a regular basis too!

I enjoyed the preview at the end.  Looks like this Edward is going to act like Jerkward...hopefully only at first.

The angsty stuff is intriguing though....



Author's Response:

you know what? that's where i got the idea for this story. i was reading a fanfic for some other story on another site, and there were a couple stories like this on there, and i luved them. i couldn't help but read them, and i check for updates every day. i mean, the story itself isn't that complicated, it's just that there's something about it that draws you in, you know? and that's what i was aiming for in this story. i feel really happy that i succeeded.  :)

Reviewer: TwilightAtDawn (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 11:50 AM · On: Friend

Love it!



Author's Response:

thank you! and i luv ur username--original and cool

Reviewer: Mrs Jasper Hale (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 11:46 AM · On: Friend

Pure Greatness. I love this chapter.  Great writing.  Love the preview. Can't wait to read more



Author's Response:

wow...thank you :D

Reviewer: funkymunky2511 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 11:38 AM · On: Friend

love the little cneak preview lol oh bella pregant lol love it!



Author's Response:

only another 22 reviews, and u got urself another sneak peek :)

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